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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

This OS was really a surprise. It was a beautiful story, but I never expected a sad end since u always give happy ending.

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NISHI

@nishi22

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

last part made my heart stop a a beat...gosh khushi was dead...

beautiful OS...

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Anandi Rahman

@CrazyDollAnandi

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

It's really a beautiful OS 😳

I was so confused first 😕

Khushi died a long ago then how come Arnav talked with her 😕

Then I understood that it was his imagination

Thanks to Deepa and Gunjan for telling me about the OS 🤗

and thanks to clear my confusion also Deepa 🤗

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heavenspirit

@heavenspirit

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

i loved it..
at least she took away his pain...
right now im feeling like to have someone like this in my life..

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Today is my lucky day - off to read the OS

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Jen! Jen!

I tried and tried hard to not put in my heart for I would have sulked for an hour after reading this..

You really are versatile my dear...be it any emotion...you make its presence felt by succesfully transmitting it through your stories.

And I have to say...this is so so well written...You are just rising with every shot at writing. 👏

So.,

He was surprised to just find his coat there, partly covered with purple-blue blossoms.

This had been my moment of realization as I dreaded what I knew would come next.

Khushi lost her life against battling Typhoid. Always loved him, never forgot and had been waiting.

Arnav on the other hand maybe didnt remember her in all these years? was with some other woman...Khushi died at 16 but never made her presence felt to him after that. Only when he was hurting, was in need of peace did she come to him.. And he did found solace with her.. recalled her instantly...And they united spanning all time and space.

Awesome Jen!!

Edited by Anupama. - 12 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Oh Jenny, you write so beautifully, this touched the heart !

It was sad and sweet...I loved that he needed her to see things differently and she could not see him hurt and she mended his broken heart...but I only see him with khushi, so to see him heartbroken about La..in the beginning was so odd for me...

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

omg
i hav no words to describe how i felt

startung wit d update i was like aww poor arnavs heart is getting brokenn..

thrn came khushi n i was happy

n den wat wat wat?? i had to read it thrice...not becoz i dint understood bt bcz i was shocked...i dint expect an ending like this

superb

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Oh Jenny, that was a beautiful one, although a sad one but a beautifully written OS - loved it dear

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gopikaaji

@gopikaaji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

...my eyes r moisten...but i know ARSHI...is/are inseparable...they soul-mate...and i love them madly...even death can't do nothing they r one...and dear for us...

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