Never the time & place & the loved one together(OS

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musa khan

@musax007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

ohhh god this so amazing khushi die when she is only 16 i just your writing style

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

"I have waited too long...too long..."

"For you, my love. Don't you realize we are two bodies but one soul...? We were created to be one. When you are troubled, how can I rest in peace? I've come to bring you peace...to be one with you".

"I'm ready..."

These lines were chilling. But so beautiful.

Also, thanks the information on lines. Flower of death? Now that part of the story makes more sense.

Love.

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mehak

@mehak06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

I really liked d plot..it was different from d usual os.. but i really loved it

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

beautiful yet painful os
loved it

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

awesome n fantastic os dear..i guessed that kushi was a ghost..and tat is ryt..poor Arnav aftr his heartbroken state only he realised tat he had a lovable Kushi in the past and who might b waiting for him..arshi forever...sad ending...

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

OMG.. a new OS from Jen..

Off to read..😳

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Jenny this is beautiful & very well written.

Seeing your loved one with someone else is so painful.
He must be heart broken.

Khushi came to support him & he found solace in her.
Whatever form she was in, her purpose was to complete her unfinished story & along with that she was there for him when he needed a shoulder.

People who are no more with us in this world make sure that they are there for us through surprising ways.

Hopefully they found their happy ending in the other world.

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mem1

@mem1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

What a beautiful story. I really don't know what more to say except that I loved it to death! (sorry, that sounded like a poor joke 😉)

But here's something that is pretty strange...recently when i was in Bangalore, I had seen these trees with the amazing purple flowers and had meant to look it up to see what they were called. Then today, reading your story, i looked up Jacaranda, cause I had never heard of that before,and Voila! It is the same tree that I was so curious about!
Maybe you and I are connected at a deeper level too! 😲 (I just wish I could write half as good as you! )