SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: epiphany.

The feeling is mutual. 😆

Smiles.

Am actually pretty much shocked at myself at the moment, as well! 😉

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Myra.

@Myra.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Dear Kankshita darling,

First of all I don't understand, Why are peoples views bothering you? You know you have very good talent. And its good to share your work with a site where people could actually get amazed by your work. And secondly I am sorry if others and mine ofcourse comments hurted you by any means.

I love your concept I don't know whether Sharon was that pestering in the original D3 but here you depicted hers and Swayum's character well. I especially liked the starting where you showed Swaym waking up. See your so good that the readers could imagine your story. And I liked the way it was all put up one topic - Sharon & Swayum meet again.

Well one doubt arises - What do yo mean by Chinese (food or something else?)

Please don't stop your creativity for people for don't know the value of it.

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Sammy

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917494

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Ahh! diff. sharon... infact the real sharon

im liking the way u wite its unique and awsome😃

Loveing u writers for whom i visit this forum!

Tanhku for the pm :)

hope u keep updating that fast

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Hey, do not even think of discontinuing this FF! Loving it! The way you write is completely magical and it's just so hard to keep myself from reading it. Sharon's character is really interesting. Looking forward to how the story continues.

Love all your works so please do not stop writing the way you stopped editing.

And thanks for the PM =)

-Shreya and Kanishtha.

Edited by muzzy_sk - 12 years ago

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

loved the chapter

it is interesting

amazing

well written

loving this new sharon

story is great so far

eagerly wanna read further

update soon

and dont forget to pm me

thanks for the pm

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komal samdariya

@dazedworld

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

i was smiling all the way while reading this and i conclude that i'm in love with this sharon already...

amazing update ... i could feel his pain actually...

i loved sharon's way of taking things ! pls do continue soon and ty for the pm !

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jiya

@--jiya--

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

super..!! would love if you continue further..!! 😊

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zk456789

@zk456789

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Read the chapter really nice one
Thnx for the pm
Do update soon

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

this story has got a nice ring to it..
the way u have created the storyline and penned it its absolutely brilliant..
while reading this i felt at ease as the story went nice and easy with a flow which allowed me to immerse in it even more...
your protagonists are simple yet i feel there is a certain mystery to them ...
loved it
thanks for the pm deepu di
do pm me when u update next kanks(hope u wouldn't mind me calling u that)