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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

as always I just loved the way you wrote it..
the way you expressed the emotions was just fantastic... 👏
Both characters are totally different here... and are quite interesting..
the way you wrote the dialouges I just loved it.. it was just so casual so realistic and so uniqe.. It was just amazing..
loving the story so far plz do not disscontinue it..
waiting to read futher..
and thank u for the PM 😃

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Binuja(binju)

@Anomic_loner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Wow another awesome chapter..😊
I am really liking the portrayal of sharon here...
an independent and completely optimistic girl...😊
waiting eagerly for the coming chapters.

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Heena

@kamlesh32

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

I just love the way you write! Awesome story so far and very interesting too. I love sharon's optimistic character 👏. Please continue soon and pm me when you update.

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Hey...
Just came to know about this amazing work.. Aftr a pm from deepika...
I had just reAd your 1 or 2 posts on d3forum... I have even replied i think... But i am not sure...
Your style of writing is amazing... And the concept is very different...
And i seriously loved sharon here... I do have a feeling that she might be in love with swayam since college... But i am not sure...
And i loved both the chappy's but second chap. I found that quite amusing...i have never seen a writer who can express grief in a comic sense... So for that you deserve an applause...
Do continue soon.

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Awesome update!!!

i loved just how blunt sharon is!!

swayam needs someone like her so he could face reality again...

he needs someone to push so he can understand that he is already on the ground and just needs to get up...

i'm really liking the way you built sharon's character!!

everything about her appeals to me!!

just the way she is different and refreshing!!

and finally she suceeded!!!

but swayam is still in a hurt mode...

i hope he gets his life on track soon...

and i hope sharon helps him more so he can do so!!!

Great Update!!

this is a really interesting FF!!!

CONTINUE SOON!!!!

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

A great story and intresting plot line..
Its nice to read a story of very diff writing style..
It takes a lil long time to read.. (my weakness ) bt i loved it
would love to read more nd more..

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

i am sorry my like button is not working right now
i will try later...

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

this s d 1st tym m reading ur works😃

amazing start😊

awesomeee updates👏

loving this sharon😃

waiting for d nxt part😳

and do pm me wen u update😊

and thanx for suggestin t deep di🤗

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Vedshareyam

@Vedshareyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

nice one... doe continue and send the other parts...

will wait for it...😊

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anandita

@blooming_angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Splendid concept..
And beautiful ff ...
This is i guess a totally different concept which i will be reading for fha first time...
And m really greatful to u for this ... 😆
Umm the updates were marvelous...
i just loved the updates ..
And m super excited for the upcomming chapters...
Plz do pm me...umm the next update as well as ur writing index
And ur outstanding...
So plz continue writing ... 😳 👏
With love 🤗
Anandita

Edited by anandita - 12 years ago