OS Series:The Life of Capt. & Mrs. Raizada#2 - Page 5

haww!!! this is ramanchi!!!!

Hi Semanti,

i loved the last chapter!!! so u found a pair for garima as well...i loved khushi and lavas interogattion!!! hilarious!!! im going to miss this story so much!!! i wish u didnt have to end it so soon!!!!!😭

AN AMAZING PARALLEL UNIVERSE CREATED BY AN AMAZING WRITER.

Semanti you created a wonderful story with so lively characters.

loved them all.

God bless you and may you wite more.

Cheers
Anukriti

ps- Though your ' CHARMED TALE' is my favourite One shot on this forum

I have same feeling like image in Juhi's comment.
I am not going for mass petition to you to not end it bcos you are promising a new full length FF.

I just loved your portryal of Arnavji and Khushi. Somehow I liked them the most! And sms (s)exchanges between Arnav and Lavanya- Very entertaining!

Finally Your author's notes are as good as the update!

Thank you for introducing us to captain and his universe!

I didn't get what the reference to Fritz by Satyajit Ray wa sabout.

So! Thats that!
*flicks a happy tear*
i cant believe this journey finally comes to end..and the time which I am recalling is those winter mornings,7am IST, when you used to update waufmaio and how eagerly we used to wait for the daily dose of delicious Captain, blushing child Khushi and text msgs.. =) Although i had started following you since you had begun with Expectation..but that was totally a new and delightful league. Thank you so much for all these os'es too..They just left me feeling good and floating ofcourse. This last installment was perfection ofcourse. Loved each part of it to bits and it was a complete package with everyone making an appearance in it. Laila and Sinatra too,in the A/N. ;)
m so so glad and so so happy for each one of them..from Aman and Tara to Kaseera Amara New baby to Captain Missus and their yum and sweet scenes to Garima Rajeev Vikram Payal and Jalebies to Neerav Anjali and twins.. (for age issue,hmm, il take it the other way round- twins-3 , A and N married for 5..coz otherwise, il think how Captain would have reacted to what is implied.. O_o .. Ohkay! Il leave that)

Il miss this! :)
Koi doubt mat rakhna! 8-)

Oh you are ending this! Hope you are not thinking of leaving IPKKND! Hope to read more of your work

Ahhh it's over? The captain is gone?

What a wonderful, fun, loving and emotional journey it has been. I loved your Arnav!! You know how much. Thank you for bringing him into my life.

Loved the chemistry between Khushi & Arnav
Loved the texts between Arnav & Lavanya
Loved the sisterly bond between Lavanya & Khushi
Loved the sexy moments of Aman & Lavanya

Just LOVED this whole series! You coming back with a new story is the only reason I'm able to let this go.

Thanks Semanti!

Edited my comments on page 2