OS Series:The Life of Capt. & Mrs. Raizada#2 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is was so... ummm... so... uhhh...

I cant get the right word.. But I will sure live in this universe(with the characters of this story) for few days to come.. Dazed and zoned out all the time.. Even in office...
Exponentially superb and wonderfully crafted story.
Just loved it to the core !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
A secret.
This is the ONLY story, that not only makes me accept the "ji" and embrace it whole heartedly.(ps. What?! I am entitled to change my opinion ji!)


All thanks to a woman who wants to live out her SKDs in AD with her adonis of a husband. And a husband who is always one step ahead...and pays more attention to her quirks than she will ever know.

Such a dreamboat couple these two, I am ne'er sick reading about them over and over again.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh how I lauuu to see a plotting and scheming ASR, when it comes to protecting his wife.

And not just normal plotting, BUT captain style.

The one who has Lava as his side kick!!

Shyam clearly got more than he was up for, but a fun night indeed!


Oh and there is nothing more endearing dan when a shaatir dimag wala husband admits being an "idiot" to his wife.

ps. I love that its Captain and his WIFE, and that this pyaar already has a naam. They be da romeo and juliet of successful love stories. BAS.



Edited by LooneyLuna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
BUT DAN After I have already fallen for the CAPTAIN
you bring in AMAN,
and I ne'er thought this would happen to me,
cause I ne'er understood when it happened to anyone else...


I am in love with two people all at the same time!



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Posted: 11 years ago
I just read through the entire series and wow, I REALLY want a guy like Capt. Arnav Singh Raizada. Cause he's hot. And sweet. And everything. And I adore this story and I think it's one of my all time favorites (along with your other fanfiction, because that one was fantastic too)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it right till the end!! And I'll especially miss ASRs and Lavanyas hilarious texts!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
ArHi were lovely! Arnav -La were hilarious! I loved all the pairings .. they were all so imperfectly perfect <33
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the series...
hope we have another one coming soon... but from around the same timeline - don't make Arnav & Khushi grandparents 😆

btw, they are not the only ones so fertile out there 😉

loved Khushi & Lavanya's friendship and how they are always there for each other and go to an extent to meddle in each others lives enough to hook them with someone worth it. And loved how Arnav & Lavanya became friends too and there texting bits..

Payal & Vikram's story was cute and pretty fast-paced, I liked it more than Anjali & Neerav's, but I absolutely loved Neerav's way of taking revenge in the last story. I don't care much about Shyam & Sheetal so doesn't matter why the married etc.

p.s. Why do love ArShi stories have a Aryan/ Aarav/ Aarushi?

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