OS Series:The Life of Capt. & Mrs. Raizada#2 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Garima deserves happiness too and I am glad she met someone. Hope she gets over her reservations and take a chance like she suggested to Kushi. This has been a marvellous ride. First of all imagining Arnav Singh Raizada in a Captain uniform makes me want to fly on all his flights bas. But you made all the characters so interesting, there was such good chemistry between all of them. I loved La and Arnav's texting, La and Chamkili's friendship, the adoration of varunji by all the females, Nani's love story, Kaseera must be the most beautiful name out there. I will miss Captain Raizada and hope to see him on one of my flights soon! Well done Chica!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Wonderful story... Came to its logical happily ever after.. Every character was memorable..especially lavanya...she was given more prominence than Khushi..
It was like we are reading the story from her eyes...
I wish we had one scene where vikram kapoor and captain and mrs asr interact..but it's ok... Cheers to new beginnings..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Awesome ending to WAUFMAIO series... Loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Amazing update. 😉
luved it 😃
sad that its ending bt do cum up wid sumthing soon.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
loved the whole series... will really miss it... looking fwd to ur new story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Thank you for the beautiful journey.
It was lovely.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
this was hilarious

1. Creepy Shyam on a houseboat

I so wish some reporter would sneak in and give a full blast page 3 worth reading scoop

2. Khushi and Lavanya on text messages

was fun to read , as it had always been ASR and Lavanya.


3. Anjali and Neerav and YES I RE - READ THE PART 5 TIMES TO CLEAR MY CONFUSION THAT THEY HAVE BEEN MARRIED 3 YEARS WHILE THE TWINS ARE 5 YEARS OLD!!!

and then you have left that loop open for us 😆

4.Arnav poor thing . will never be rid of Vikram Kapoor.

No matter what he does, Vikram Kapoor is here to stay for good.

would have loved to read about the hike with a pregnant Khushi

All in all why is it endinggg?!!!!!

now waiting for your new story.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
this was awesomeee..👏
loved the possessive side of aman..
Cared enough to come pick me up from work when you were in town, and ensure that enough people saw you kiss me outside the office." 😃😃
kaseera has turned out to b perfect kid of sanka devi and asr 😆😆 telling horror stories in the morning..😆stop Kaseera from using the shower head as a water gun.😆
the texting was back and although it was between khushi and la and no la and asr I loved it nyways, 😊
poor neerav still afraid of asr..😆 but still he did got his revenge..of crs when he was sure he is not supposed to b in hundred mile radius of asr ny soon😆
gareema and rajeev.. wah wah..👍🏼 and it was simply adorable how la and khushi was supportive and encouraging,, 😊
Uff this arnav and khushi.. besharams ☺️😉 and asr still get jealous of vikram??? haha wht can i say.. sometyms a charm of a certain serial actor is too much to get over with for girls.. 😳 but khushi in her own swt way assured arnav.. and the end part was soo sooo sooo cute.. loved it absolutely..
i am surely gonna miss this one a lot.. I'll be not so secretlyu hoping tht something comes on ur mind and u decide to make another shot of this series..😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
One of the awesomest and a must read series of ipkknd forum...!!!👏👍🏼 i wish if you could continue this...but as they say- all goods things come to an end..!! thank you for writing this semanti...it's been an amazing journey...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
What an awesome end to the very wonderful journey of the captain and his Mrs, it was such a fun experience and this last update was so heartwarming, I can't stop grinning. I am sad that it ended but as they say all good things must come to an end so I understand! Your ability to bring about so many characters and give them the treatment they deserved hence making them all lovable e.g Lavanya and Aman, the kids, Nani even Vikram Kapoor and Payal, Anjali heck just about everyone with the exception of Shyaamwa the creepwa :D Even there you did wonders with his character portrayal, the negative vibe the exists with his character multiplied by 10 in here.
I couldn't stop laughing when I read about Shyaam and Sheetal's marriage, the two people who we all love to hate! The way Lavanya was telling Aman about them and Aman's indifferent attitude, it was just hilarious. This whole FF was just so much fun, I have thoroughly enjoyed this journey with you so thank you so much for it. I look forward to even more GEMS that you will come up with! And finally * Take a bow ma'am because your style of writing is out of this world!👏

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