OS Series:The Life of Capt. & Mrs. Raizada#2

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melonie

@melonie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Hi Semanti,

I really enjoyed this story. ASR and La's text still makes me smile and I love how Kaseera is scaring her little sister. A big hug to those cuties 😃 Khushi is pregnant again and yes she is very fertile 😆 once without protection and they got it right. Are you a fan of Ekta Kapoor's show by any chance 😉

One thing that made me laugh like mad was how you described the candles on Nani's cake...it looks like a forest fire 🤣 🤣 🤣 I don't know how others feel but that was the most funniest thing I read...OMG I am laughing again and my jaws are hurting now 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Thank you for writing such a sweet, entertaining, lovable story. I had a great time reading all the chapters 🤗

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Loved it...and thx for completing this amazing story...

It was an awesome and mesmerizing journey...thank to you!

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

what can I say.

THANK YOU THANK YOU. A WONDERFUL SERIES. ALL THROUGHOUT I HAD A SMILE ON MY FACE READING ALL THE UPDATES LIKE THIS😊.

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Its finish..!! I seriously going to miss it and I know I am going to read it a million times from the beginning...some stories juat have a special place in our hearts and this is one of those...!! 😭 😭

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Very nice ending! Thank you very much for this Arnav ji! He will always have a special place in my Hart! Lavaniya was the best character here!
Looking forward to read your new story !