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shikha_taarey

@shikha_taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Res!!!
Unres!!
Yaay!!!! Me again d first to comment...i dont leave any chance wen it comes to ur stry...i was soo eagerly waiting!!
No words nithi!!! Awesome update!!! 👏 👏
My guess was correct...its dat Mr. Kundra!! 😡 😡...he is actually behaving in such a normal way yet in a sarcastic n insulting tone!!! 😡 😡 ...N his son rohan...jaisa baap vaisa beta!! 😡
Thankgod taani came on d ryt tym n stopped rey frm overreacting!! Bt hats off nithi...for two things...first of taani ko itna strong..itna confident n challenging dikhane ke liye...n second thing...taani ne jo backanwers diye hain😲...n d dialouges...subhanallah...kya dialouges hain!!! Kya insult ki hai kundra n rohan ki!!! All d credit goes to u!! 👏 👏
Taani knows rohan 😲 😲...n den mr.kundra telling her to call him uncle...n taani ka mindblowing izzat utaarne waala answer!!! 👏 😆 😆 Rey was loving it soo much...ye to uske face pe baar baar jo smirk n smile aa rahi thi...usse hi samajh aa raha tha!!! N wen taani said dat she is mrs. Taani reyaansh singhania...woww...just loved it n rey's pride on her sentence..lovely!!!😳😉 😆
N den dat rohan coming towards taani...n rey stopping him by holding his collar...luved it!!! 😳
In d car...taani trying to divert his mind...n den rey's question datt how does she knows rohan!!! Me too was so curious!!
D moment she said dat she slapped him n rey's overreaction...it was actually funny! 😆 ...n den taani narrating d wholestry...dat cheapo rohan 😡 ...n rey listening widout any expression!! I thought as taani goes he will get angry on rohan n will curse him...something lyk dat...bt d reaction was so damn unexpected!!! He kept his hands on cheeks...remembered d nyt dey were about to kiss n "THANKGOD"!!!!...seriously 🤣 ...im still laughing at his reaction!!!
Evening wen he returned n didnt found taani...n den wen he barged inside d restroom...taani's condition...even i was soo scared dat wat was wrong wid her!!! Rey taking her out frm shower n asking her...shaking her frm shoulders...n den...he slappped her!! 😲 😲 😲
D way u described taani's condition in d whole 2-3 paras...just made me cry!!! N rey's concern for her!! 😭 😭
God i just loved d way he was consoling her...pampering her n asking her agsin n again!!!! 😳
Firstly wen taani said papa...for a minute i thought her dad was no more...really i shouldnt hav thought lyk dat...bt he has cancer!!!😭
Frm last 3 updates it seemed somthing was wrong wid her dad...really taani is soo broken!!! 😭
Just loved dis line "Desire and lust had no place here. The place was just filled with Love, care and concern and nothing else. There was neither any intention nor interest for anyone to take advantage of the situation."...dats wat pure n true love is!!! D strog n confident taani which we saw just sometym ago was soo vulnerable now!!! Mindblowing...d way u described her vulnerability n d only safe place for her was in rey's embrace!!!!😳👏👏
Taani sleeping on rey's lap n he kept stroking her hairs 😳...!!! Lovely scene
N no precap!!! 😲...wats up in d next chap!!! 😕 Hoping dat her dad gets well soon!!! N pls nithi...it was not at all boring...dare u say sich things ever about my fav fav stry 😡 Just loved d update!!!!!🤗
Update soon...n best of luck fot ur new office!!! 😃

Edited by shikha_taarey - 12 years ago

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@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#602

After so many days, I am commenting here on Day One😃
and trust me I am so happy

This is an intelligent update, I would like to say because of Taani's encounter, her reply and how she answer Kundra
The part when she was describing about Rohan, was natural👏
Rey was superb here..damn cute
Rohan should get some experience before considering him as majnu, actually characters like Rohan is so easy to found in our practical life
On the whole a brilliant writing ..
And lastly..your comment..u wanted to mean it as not boring nah?? u missed typing not😛😆

Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago

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shanaya

@shanya8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Res/ unres
Finally... unres hehe sorry 4 being late... me always late u know nah...
Any ways coming 2 d update ohh gosh what an update mind blowing just just sizzling yr dat scene stole my heart go's lights off n changing huh huh me toh blushing hehe... wow it was fab just wanna say 1 thing only 4 u
PERFECT... u know nah u r ... ?? :) :) ;)
Update soon n pm me

Edited by shanya8 - 12 years ago

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@-GoluGudiya-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#604

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Dii, Aapka Update Aur Boring, Aisa Kabhi Nahi Ho Sakta ! Never Possible !!
Beautiful is nothing compared to the chapter ... Really, I have no words to express this update !
Well, What do I say ... Taani's answers to Rohan and Mr.Kundra were surprising ... I never imagined Taani to be so bold and tough but When It comes to your love, You can bacome a whole different person coming your way 😆 ... Nari Shakti !
And then the breaking news, Taani SLAPPED Rohan !! 😲 ... I was really shocked to hear that ... And Anyone who would have been at Rey's place would have done that ... 😆
But then a turning point came when Rey comes back ... Suddenly from bold and brave, Taani is at a vulnerable position where is not at a state to actually answer anyone or to hear anything which really frightened Rey ... I could feel his fear when he did not understand Taani's absurd behavior.
And Then that moment where Rey changes Taani without any desire but just love ... Really that part touched me ...
Taani finally revealed her Dad has Cancer and She confirmed it. Rey reassuring Taani was amazing ...
This Chapter Really made me feel good and happy ... Though it was a painful moment, Rey's Love for Taani was so reassuring that it made me feel good ...

Dii, How do you do this to me every update ... It makes my enticement for the next even more ... Seriously ... I can never find anything boring or draggy because your concept is so wonderful and you are an amazing writer !!

Edited by TaaReyD3_Neha - 12 years ago

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qwerty012

@qwerty012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#605

Loved the way taani answered Mr.Kundra and Rey's imagination abt slap

This is the first episode that showed rey's true and selfless love for taani

Even though dress change scene is not new.. but taani being consious and co-operative is new...

Felt bad for taani but rey is there to support na

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Prasanna

@PRASSI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#606

Res !!!! Will unres soon...😃

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Hehehe back with my comment...

Aaj na bade hi ache mood me hun comment karne ke liye...

So aaj bada sa lambu sa comment milega aapko...(hehehe..)

So now coming to the update...

Arey start toh vahi se hoga...

I'm totally speechless(hehehe) but yr seriously this part had made me really speechless...

I too had tears in my eyes...

Confuse maat ho...Ab aage comment pado pata chalega ki mere aankho me tears kyun...

Hmm so here I start...

Ahhh that Mr. Kundra and Rohan hate them a lot...

Bahut ghussa dilaya in dono ne mujhe...

How dare Rohan call Rey a looser... Looser hoga voh...

But yr I had a big smile on my face when Taani came there and started her answering back...

"Probably you are right. You are not a student worth learning from someone like Reyansh.."

Hayee!! saying this line Taani had killed me... I mean kya back answer kiya usse...Loved it a lot yr...Thanxx for adding this line... Arey aise hi chale jaoge kya aur bhi hai usse bhi lete jao...And the way she said

"Excuse me..It's Mrs.Taani Reyansh Singhania.."

was super awesome yr... I loved her pride at that time...Super!!!

And the way she answered back Mr. Kundra was superb yr...Gr8 job man...!! Hats off to her... She deserv that one...And this line...

"Hey come on Rohan!! just think about it..Jo ek deal ke liye apne beti ke saath itna cheap game plot kar sakthe woh tho kuch bhi kar sakthe hain..And yea tumare dad ke liye tum bhi sirf ek asset ho."

Hats off man!! She got the point...!! The truth... Loved it!!!

Hayee!! Taani u won my heart yr...(I mean Nithi u too kyunki yeh dialogs toh tumne hi likhe hai...Toh tumbhi credit le hi lo Taani ke saath saath...hehehe)

This part was amazing yr... Then TaaRey's car convo was amzing yr...

Main part were I was laughing no actually still I'm laughing was Rey's imagination...

As soon she disappeared, he closed his eyes and remembered the night where he was about to kiss her and later mocked at her. He didn't know why but involuntarily his hands rubbed his cheeks as if she had slapped him instead of Rohan..

"THANK GOD!!"he took a heavy breathe and started his engine to go to his office.

Thispart was so hillarious yr... Mari toh hassi abhi bhi nai rukh rai...Seriously main bhi imagine kar rahi hun... Yr badi hassi aa rahi hai... Yeh toh rukh hi nai rahi hai...Thanxx for this yr...

Ab aaya exact part jaha se mere aasun aana start huve... I mean form ho hi rahe the...

Hmm so Taani ka aaisa condition god maine toh sirf show me dekha hai par abb tumhare FF me bhi dekh liya...(lol)

But yr seriously I dint expected this at all... N the way Rey slapped her... God maine toh socha main Rey ko thapad maar dun but bach gaya Rey cozz usne ache ke liye mara....

He cared a damn about the running water. He was more concerned about the tiny drops of water flowing from her eyes that the water getting wasted in such high intensity from his shower.

Hawww Rey kitne gande ho paani waste karte ho...Sharam nai aati...ek toh paani kam hai duniya main... hum toh marte hai paani ke liye(arey itne bhi garrib nai hai yr hum...plzz galat maat samajhna...hehehe)...Tumhe itna acha khasa mil raha hai aur tum waste kar rahe ho... Wait main na complaint karti hun tumhare khilaf...Bad manners Rey...Main toh chali complaint karne... But pehle yeh comment toh complete kar lun phir jaungi aur puri chugli karke aaungi...

Hmmm ok ab serious(Chalo Prasanna serious ho jao...)

Hmm so here I go...Haaw Rey ne Taani ke kapde badle...God main toh blush karti but situation kuch aur tha... Chalo loved Rey ki usne situation ka faida nai utaya(I guess usse thapad yaad aa gaya hoga...hehehe) But loved this line

Desire and lust had no place here. The place was just filled with Love, care and concern and nothing else. There was neither any intention nor interest for anyone to take advantage of the situation.

Hats off for this Nithi... Loved this line and part a lot...Loved that Rey cared for her a lot...

Haaww Taani ke dad ko Cancer... Me too crying... Y u did this Nithi... Bichari Taani roi aur main bhi roi...Really cried seeing(I mean reading) this condition of Taani...

But thank God no Thank u Nithi Rey ko Taani ke paas rakha uss samay...But mere paas koi nai tha...

Hmm chalo yr mee bhaaging...

Mera yeh comment padne ke baad toh u will surely kill me...

So jane ke pehle Mind-blowing update Nithi...

Now me bhagging...(hehehe)

Edited by PRASSI - 12 years ago