AsMud SS : Opposite Attractss [Note - page 43] 1-11-2014 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: angelicdove

hello,its an awesome ff and i love kajen so i also love this ss,just came across it today,plzzz update soon and don't end it soon its great,plzzz pm me if possible

Ok will try to update Soon :) N Abt PM Cnt say surely as i dnt use IF Much sorry 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Recape : Asad's Entry In Desai Bhavan !!
PART 6
Asad Was Talking To VC While
Dugba Went In : Yashhh Ooo Yashhh !!
Yash : Jii Bua ??
Dugba : Asad Ka Saman Kumud Ke Kamre Me Rakhwa do !!

Kusum : Bt Bua Didi Ne Abhi Tak Wo Kamra Khali Nhii Kiya ...Wo Aap Janti he na...
Dugba : Ufff Ye Kumud Aur Uska Bachpana...Aab Asad Ko Guest Room me Rukne ko kese Kahu...
Just By He Came N He heard Last Line
Asad : Its Ok Badi Ma I Can Live thr Usme Burayi Kya he ??
[Badii Maa o_0 Yess Whenever He Is In Funny Mood Or Alone He Use To Call Her Girl Frnd Bt Generalyy She Is Badii Maa FOR him Why U Wil Get too Knw Soon 😊 ]
Dugba : Han Beta Bt Wo Pehla Kamra Sabse Bada Tha Aur Guestroom thoda chota he...
Asad : Badii Maa Its Ok Aap Bus Mujhe Kamra Bata Dijiye Me Ye Saman Rakh deta hun...
Dugba : Han wo Yaha Se Upar Ja Kar Use Taraf Jao ...Yash Ja Asad Kii Madad Kar ..
Yash : Jii Bua ..Chaliye Asad Jii
Both Went to upstairs...
It was Evening Nw N Kumud Came Home From School...
She Saw Asad's car Parked Outside Haweli ...
Kumud : Aree Ye Akdu Aab Tak Gaya Nhii ?? Iski Gadi yaha Kya Kar Rahii he ??
Kumud Went In N Saw Badii Maa ...
Badii Maa Wo Bahar Gadii Kiskii He ??
Dugba Didnt answered .
Kumud Went To her In Kitchen N Asked Her : Kya Hua Badii Maa Me Kabse Aapko Aawaz Laga Rahi Hun Aap Meri Bat Ka Jawab Kyun Nhi de Rahi ??
Dugba To Kusum : Kusum Ise Keh de Agar Meri Sikhayi Huii Sikh Use Manni Nhii Aati To Mujhse Bat Bhii Na Kiya Kare...
Kumud To Kusum : Kusum Badii Maa Se Puch Mene Kya Kiya Aab ??
Badi Maa Too Kusum : Kusum Apnii Didi Ko puch Usne Kamra Khalii Kyun Nhii kiya ?? Bachpan Se Me Sabko Sikhati aayi Hun Ki Mehman Bhagwan Hote He Unka Apmaan Nhii Karte ...
Kumud Was Abt To Say Bt Kusum Stopped Her Bus Didi Aab Mujhe Jana He N She Went Out from Kitchen :p
Kumud : Badii Maa Aap Jantii he Na Wo Mera Kamra He Aur Waha Me Kisi Ko rehne Kii Izzazat nhii de Saktii ..
Dugba : Thk He Jesi Teri Marzi ...
Kumud : Aap Janti he Na Me Aapko Ese Gussa Nhii Dekh Saktii Thik He Me Abhii Ja Kar Kamra Khalii Kar detii hun ...
Was Abt to Go bt Dugba Stopped her
Dugba : Kumud Bat Kamre Ki nhii he Bat Zid Ki He Itnii Zid Achchii nhii Dikrii... Tujhe Kis Bat Se Pareshanii he mujhe nhii batayegii hmm ??
Kumud was abt too Say tht She Is Jealous Frm Tht So Called Mehman of Dugba Bt VC Came ...
VC : Aree Dugba Shu Kare Che Tu ?? Jaldii Karo Aaj Achcha swadishtt Khana Banana ...Mehman Aavya Che kuchh Khas Hona Chahiye...Aur Kumud Ja Tu Pan Jaldii Taiyar Thai Ja ane Dugba Ko Madad Kar...N He Went...
Kumud Was Abt To Ask Smthng Bt dugba Said Her To Go In Room N Come Back as soon as she can ...
Kumud Came Out Frm Her Room n She Was In Hurry As She Have To Help Badi ma...Otherside Asad Was Trying To Get Network In His BB So Tht He Can Call Home N inform Thm Tht He Reached Ratnanagrii Safely...Asad Was Looking At BB N Kumud Was In Hurrry N Suddenlyy Dono Takrate He...N Coz Of Sudden Act Asad Ke Hand Me Se BB Niche Girta He N Tadammm BB Was Crashed...Asad Saw His BB Downstairs N Thn Looked Up Angrilyy Too See Who She Was N His Anger Rise When He Saw Kumud Thr...
Asad : Aap ?? Aap Yaha Bhii ?? Aap Yaha Kya Kar Rahi he ?? Aap Kabhii Dekh Kar Nhii Chal Sakti han ??
Kumud Was Too Shocked To React Bt When She Heard His Angry Voice She Came Back To Sense N Retorted Back : Excusee Me ?? Kya Me Ye Jan Sakti Hun Aap Yaha Kya Kar rahe he ??
Asad : Sawal Mene Pehle Pucha Tha !!
Kumud : Well In Tht Case Ok I Should Tell U Jaha Aap Khade He Wo Mera Ghar He...Jisse Aap Bat Kar Rahe Wo Ise Ghar Kii Badii Beti He Kumud Vidhyachatur Desai Yanii Ki Mainn ... Got It ?? Showing Him Finger :p
Asad's Eyesss Wide Open Wid Shocked To Surprise To Againn Shockeddd N He Shouteddd : CHIPKALIII !!!
THTS IT :P
Short One I Knw Cnt Help It Will Update Next Part Soon !! Keep Reading N Press Like Atleasttt :) 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
yay!!!!!! m the first one to comment 🥳
loved the update,and kumud ka attitude😆
and chipkali?????????😆
and about the pm thing don't worry,i will be haazir here by myself😃
and altast update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: angelicdove


yay!!!!!! m the first one to comment 🥳

loved the update,and kumud ka attitude😆
and chipkali?????????😆
and about the pm thing don't worry,i will be haazir here by myself😃
and altast update soon😊

hehe thnx dear btw again i m late :p Sprry for tht i hope u gonna enjoy next part 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Recape : AsMud Meets In Desai Bhavan . N Kumud Introduced Herself To Asad .


Part 7 :

ASAD[Shouted] : Chipkaliii !!

Kumud Mouthh Dropped Open Hearing Thtt As Realisation Struck To Herrr She Said In Angryy Yett Surprised Tone : Motuuu ??

Asadd Made Face On Tht N Said : Heyy Dnt Call Me Tht Okkk I M Nt Motu At All Nw Seee...N He Showed His Tummyy To Her Or Can Sayy His Sexyy Six PACK abss Too Her...

Kumud Was Standing Thr Dumbfounded Bt Again Retorted Back : Same Wid U I M Ntt Chipkalii Ewww I Hate Itt Dnt Call Me Tht Everrr Samjhe Tumm ??

Asad tried to hide His Laugh N Said : Reallyy Well Miss.Desai Jaha Tak Mujhe Yaad He Me Aapko Aaj Jitnii Bhii Bar Mila Hun Still U Was Justt Chipkoing To Ur Books Onlyy So I Cant Help It U R Still Chipkallii Onlyy Accept Truthhh !!

Kumud Was Abt To Say Smthng Bt Dugba Came ...

Dugba : Areee Kumuddd Shu Kare Che Tu Ahiya ?? Chal Mere Sath Bht Kam Baki He Abhi...

Hearing Her Voice Both Turned To Her N said Toghether : BADII MAA !!

Hearing Tht Kumud Turned To Asad Again n Said Veryyy Angrilyyy Showing Him Her finger : Sunoo Merii Battt Wo Sirff Meriii Badii Maa He Call Watever U Wanttt Bt Dntt Everr Call Her Tht Got Itt ??

Asad Made Expressionss As If He Is scareddd N Went Behind Dugba N started To Act : Badiii Maaa Dekho Ye Chipkaliii Again Mujhe Kha Jayegii Bachaooo...

Dugba Was In Fix Wat To Do whom To Support When Suddenly VC Called Kumud For Some Work...

Kumud Was Abt To Say Smthng Bt Hearing Her Name She Have To Left Frm Thr...Seeing Her To Going ...He Again Mocked Her Stratching Word : Badiii Maaa ... Bt As Soon As She Turned He Stoppped N Started To See Here n Thr Kumud Stomped her Foot N Went Angrilyy Frm Thr...As Soon as She Disappeared frm Thr Sightt Both Started To Laugh Badlyyy...

Asad : Ohh My Myy Girl Frndd Ye Chipkalii Bilkull Bhii Nhii badliii...Stilll Tht Sameee Nak Pe Gusssaaa N Helll Possessive For U Hann ??

Dugba : Kyunn Chidhata Rehta he Meri Beti Ko Hamesha Han ??

Asad asked Offended : Ohh Reallyy Wo Aapkii Betii He N Who M I ??

Both Stared At Eachother For Sometime N Again Started To Laugh...

After A While Girls n Dugba Were In Kitchen N Asad Was Talking to His Ammi ...Offcource Frm Landline As His BB was No More Nw !!

Asad : Han Ammi Main Thik Hun Waha Sab Thk He Na ?? Nikhat Thk He ? Aayan N Tamatar Ne Pareshan To Nhi Kiya ? Abbu Kaha He Aab Tak Ghar Nhii Aaye Office se ? Ammii U r Thr ? Aap Kuch Bol Kyu Nhii rhi ??

Dilshaad : Main Bolungi To Tab Na Asad Miyan Jab Aap Mujhe Bolne Ka Mauka Doge...

Asad Chuckled Hearing Tht He Was Continuely Blabbering N Asking Her Questions..

Asad Thinks to Himself : Ufff Abhii 24 hourss Bhii Nhii Hue Chipkalii K Sath Rahe N Abhii Se I M Behaving Like Her...

Dilshaad : Yaha sab Thk Hi He Asad Dnt Worryy .. Baki Sab Kaha He ?

Asad : Wo I guess Sab Kitchen Me He Must Be Making Dinner N VC Uncle is Talking Wid Someone May Be Abt Office Work..

Dilshaad : thk He To Me Dugba se kal Bat Kar Lungii . Tum Apna khayal Rakhna thk he ?

Asad : Han Ammi I Said Na I M Cmpltly Fine Here Infactt I M Enjjoyingg Here...

Dilshaad : Thk He Thk He Achcha aab Me Rakhti Hu Tumhare Abbu Office se Aate hi Honge Bht Kam He . Khuda Hafis !!

Asad : Khuda Hafis !!

Nt Knwing Wat To Do Asad Just went N Sat Beside VC ...

After While Dugba Came To Ask For Dinner... Both Went To Dining Table...Everyone Was Thr Except One Person Kumud !!

As Soon Ass VC Sat He Asked : Aree Bhai Ye Kumud Kaha He ??
Kusum : Bapu Wo Didi K Ghaghre Pe Galti Se Dahi Gir Gaya Tha To Wo Bus Abhii Aati Hii Hogi...Everyone Was Sitting N Kumarii N Kusum were Serving Everyonee N Kumud Entered Thr...Seeing Herr Again Asad's Naughtyy Mind Started To Workkk Suddenlyy he Stood Upp N Screammm Aaahhh !! Everyone Was Shocked Frm Ths Sudden Screammm N Kumud For Oncee Justt Stood Thr On Thr Spot Just Like statue !! VC Asked Him kya Hua Beta ?? Seeing VC His Naughty Mind Again Shut Down N He Sat Thr Suddenlyy n Started To Eat In silence...Everyone was Shocked Coz Of His Behaviourr Bt Two Persons Knew Tht Before Few Seconds He was Upto Smthng Bt Coz Of VC's Presense He Suddenlyy Back Off tht idea !! Tht Two Persons were Noneother Dugba N Kumud !!

Kumud Smirked Thinkng Tht Still Asad Scarrs From Her Fatherr !!

Thts It !! :p
I Knw Short na ?? Bt Trust me Ths Is Maximumm Which i can Write In One Partt Will update Next Part Soon :P As U Knw My N KSG's Soon Is Quite Equall :p Sorryyy Guyss !! Hope U Willl Enjoyy Ths Part !! 😊
Edited by Mansi030493 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Yayyy 1st one to comment :D
awesum part di :)
haha chipkali nd motu :D :D

ek aur BB gaya.. Waise bhi asad nd BB todne ka rishta bahut purana hai...

Cont soon di :)
Edited by Prizi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
very small part i want more

loved the part

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
awesome update
loved it
plz cont soonnn
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: jiyaa_m

very small part i want more

loved the part

update soon

Sorryy Jiyaa Dii as I Said Cnt Help It :/
Next Part Will Be Updated By Tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nurshad.kajen

Sorry for being late di

sorry For Late Nurshad Next Part Will Be Updated By Tomorrow 😊

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