AsMud SS : Opposite Attractss [Note - page 43] 1-11-2014 - Page 11

Originally posted by: awesome

awesome update

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Thnx Dear :) Next Part I Will Update Tomorrow 😊

Originally posted by: Prizi

Yayyy 1st one to comment :D
awesum part di :)
haha chipkali nd motu :D :D

ek aur BB gaya.. Waise bhi asad nd BB todne ka rishta bahut purana hai...

Cont soon di :)

awww Thnx Dear 😊 Abt Nicknames I Thoughtt Allottt Finalllyy Came Up With Ths Two Names :p N Yesss Asad N His BB Bhtt Purana Yarana He ;) Will Update Next Part Tomorrow 😊

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Loved it...going good Mansi!!

Originally posted by: Rabz_14

wow 2 partss :D

Loved it...going good Mansi!!

Thnx Rabz 😊

Awesome parts di..you are an amazing writer...u know how to keep the readers in..now post the next part soon

Originally posted by: Nurshad.kajen

Awesome parts di..you are an amazing writer...u know how to keep the readers in..now post the next part soon

aww Thnx Alottt Ur cmnts Means Alott Thank U So much !!

Heyyy Everyone !! Thank U So Much For Ur Response :) Honestly I Knw I M Nt Much Good Writer :P Bt I M Happy Tht U all R Praising It ...Its Giving Me More Strength To Write :p thank U So Muchh Again...

Back To Part...Here I M Wid Next Update... Shortt I knw Bt As U All Knw Ths Is Longestt Update Which i can write Frm My Dabba Cell So Plz Bare Wid it 😊

Recape : AsMud N Dugba Convo...Dinner drama...

PART 8 :

Everyone Were Eating Silentlyy N Glancing At Asad After Each Minute ...N Poor Asadd ...He was Eating As Fastt As He Can...One Of The Mostt Embarrassing Situation Of His Whole Life...Otherside Kumud Was Trying Hard Nt to Laugh Loudly On His Condition...


As Soon As Dinner Was Overr Asad Quicklyy Stood Up N Said Gud Night To Everyone N Almostt Ran To His Room...Bt Someone Was Wayy To Fast for Him...As She Called Him..He Closed His Eyesss Thinking Nw He Is Caughtt He Cantt Run Away frm Her...

DUGBA : Asad...

Asad Turned N Say : Yes Girl Frnd ?? [ Trying To Look As Innocent As He Can...]

DUGBA : Kya Tha Wo ??

ASAD : Wo Kya Girl Frnd ??

DUGBA : Asadd !!

ASAD : Girlll Frnddd !!

DUGBA : Aap Sarii Duniya Ko Bevkhuf Bana Sakte He Mujhe Nhii Kyun Ki main Aapkii Girl Frnd Hunnn !!

Hearingg Tht Asad Smiled Naughtyly N Said : Uemm Wo Urmm Chipkali Ko Dekha To Socha Fir Se Usko Irritate Karta Hun Sabke Samne Magar Bad Me yaad Aaya Kii Uncle Side Me Hii Bethe the to... Ummm ... U knw na Girl Frnd...


Hearing Ths Dugba Started To Laughhh ...

She Still Remembered Tht Incident Of Their Childhood ...

Asad caught tht Expressions of her n he started to think abt tht insident of his childhood When While Playing Asad Was Calling To Kumud ...Bt Kumud Was Busy In Reading Her Story Book N When She Didnt Come To Play Wid Thm...Irritated Asad Called Her Chipkalii N To His Badluck VC was Just Passing Frm Thr N Hearing Ths He Scolded Asad For Calling Her Pyaarii Daughter Chipkalii ...:p Poor Asad Was Alreadyy Afraiding From VC ...Since Tht Day He Never Ever Called Her Tht...Bt Since Nw He Was Back He Cmpltly Forgot Tht Insident N Seeing Kumud Suddenlyyy His Old Habit Of Calling Her Chipkalii Was Back !! Poor Soul Evenn He Had No Idea Why He Was Just Calling Her Tht...Kumud Is Beautifull Name He Thinkk So...Thn Why Ths Name Was Coming Out Frm His Mouth Seeing Her Everytime...Do She Looks Like Chipkalii ?? Helll Nooo He Screamed...N Suddenlyy Came Out Frm His BIG Dreamland...
Dugba Got By His Expressionss Tht abt wat he was thinking n she laughed more...He was just going frm thr smiling ...bt ...
To His Badluckk..Kumud Heared Watever He Said To Dugba n Angrilyy Marched Towards Thm...Seeing Her Coming Like Ths He Actuallyy Imagined Her Coming Wid BIG Size Bandookkk Too Shoot Him...He Was Actuallyy Scared Seeing Her Tht Angry Look...Otherside Dugba Was Laughing...Asad Tell Her Through Sign Nt To Laughh Bt Before Dugba Can Get tht Sign Kumud was thr Wid Thm...Seeing Her Badima Laughing Wid Her Lifetime Dushmann Kumud's Blood Boiled...

Kumud Turned To Asad N Said : Tummm Samjhte Kya Ho Tum Apne Aap Ko Han ?? Kyunn Hamesha Mere Piche Pade Rehte Ho ?? Aur Badii Maaa ? Wo Kitnii Badii He tumse Ye Kya Girl frnd Girl Frnd Laga Rakha He ?? Tumhe Tumharee Age Ki koii Ladkii Nhii Mili Kya ??

Hearing Ths Suddenly His Face Turned Pale...Dugba Got Tensed Bt Kumud Was Way To Angry To Notice Ths..N She Was Just Going On : Ohhh Hannn Tumhe Kese Milegii Koii Girl Frnddd Kabhii Aayne Me Apna Chehra Dekha He ?? Pure K Pure Joker Dikhte Ho...N Usme Bhii Akad To Baap Re Jese Pata Nhii Kaha Ke Badshaad Khan Ho...Akduu Motu Khannn ...KoIi Ladkii Reh Bhii Kese Saktii He Tumhare sath...aur..

Bt one Sharp Voice Cut Her ...It was Noneother Thn Dugba : Bus Kumuddd ...

Kumud Realised Wat She Was Saying...Before She Can Say Anything Asad Spoke : Sahi Kaha Aapne...Mere Sath Kabhii Koi Ladkii Nhii Reh Sakti...Pata Nhi Muje Kya Ho Gaya Tha...I Should Behave Wid U... Plz Ho Sake To Mujhe Maf Kar Dijiyega...I M Sorry...Saying Tht He Left Frm Thr...

Kumud Was Too Numb Too Say Anything ...She Can Feel Tht Pain In His Each N Every Word...Just Before Few Minutes He Was Sounding So Happy N full Of Life Guy...N Nw He Was Sounding So Helplesss ...She Could Feel His Pain...She Was Just Trying To Register In Her Mind Tht Wat Happened Suddenlyy...Just Thn Dugba Spoke ; Ye Tune tthk Nhi Kiya Kumud...Kuchh Bhii Bolne Se Pehle Soch Liya Kar...Tu Jantii Nhii Tune Kya Kiya He...Kitne Gehre zakhm Ukhede He Tune Kisi ke aaj...Saying Tht She Left Frm Thr...

N Kumud Was Standing Thr...Helplesss..Confused...Suddenly One Tear Escaped Frm Her Eye...Surpised She Look At Tht Tear...She Was Surpised Wid Herself... Why Ths Tear Came...Coz Badi Maa's Words Hurted Her...Or COZ HER WORDS HURTED HIM ???

PRECAPE : HE kneeled Down n Crieddd Badlyy Tearsss Were rolling down On His Face... N He Screaammed aaahhh Kyunnn ...Kyunnn SNEHAAA Kyunnn Chalii Gayii Tum Mujhe Chod Ke ???

Thts It !!


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y ridz??????????? dont mixed ar n ak together plzzz

nice part

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Originally posted by: jiyaa_m

y ridz??????????? dont mixed ar n ak together plzzz

nice part

update soon

Diii Chilll I Expected Ths Type Of Reaction As I M Also ARian ...Bt I M Sorryy ...Urmmm Possessive KaJenian Bhi Hun :p So Karan K Sath Except Jenny :/ So I Chose Riddhima N Its Just Matter Of Some Parts ...N Its All Abt AK Onlyy N Jaha Tak Riddhima Ka Sawal Hai To U will See Tht 😊 Its Just A Fiction Plzz Dnt Mind 😊