ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#631

this is brilliant.full on mystery...liked Khushi's way of handling Arnav,like a professional... About his coming bk to India seems like a ploy frm naniji... Iliked Nk n La's pairing...so until nw Sheetal is important only in a professional side,wonder what changed...

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padmakrishnan

@pokemonian

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#632

khushi and politics

loved it

arnav and parliament

big time shock

continue soon

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#633

Great update.

Every time I read it I end up wanting more.

Khushi is right Arnav is stuck in the past. He at least promised to try.

And I must say after the initial starting on the wrong foot in morning he succeeded when he told her that he won't fire her.

I love that Khushi gives back to Arnav as good as she gets.

Everyone knows about the past that shattered these two to such an extent. Till now we are more aware of Arnav 's grief & rage that he is affected but not must about Khushi.

I think it'll be more clear in future updates like it happened today with la & her convo. NK won't like her working with Arnav. The past is surely a big deal.

Why do I have a feeling that Akash got the cold feet intentionally?!!

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hiralhk

@hiralhk

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#634

wow... Speechless...

simply superb...

thanks a lot for sharing dear..

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sahada

@sahada

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#635

LOVING this story E!!! Your characters are very very veryy sexy! ;P

Yeesss it's killing me to find out about their past but oh am I loving the way you're unfolding the story... I want you to stick to your plan no matter how many threats to reveal their past are thrown your way-even if by me... You're sooo good! Loving the strong Khushiii... 'what doesn't kill you makes you stronger..' (: She's a star!

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#636

TIME FOR CHAPTER 3, ya?

Cause Luna has unres'd - 86370338

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#637

It's commendable how you are writing this political tale.

Khushi is really a strong character in your story.

I loved her determination, strong will and efficiency. she is educated and very skilled in her work. I somehow liked her bleak and pale attire too.

There is a complete ego issue with her boss. She literally antagonizes her boss in every matters. She brings logic of all her work and she refutes and protest in volition.

Arnav's character is quite magnificent. A young politician, who studied in the US, an successful entrepreneur, a charming personality. Though he inherited his position as a minister from her grandma, but it seems that politics is in his blood.

I expect you gradually unravel the incident from the past. i already getting enthusiastic to know about the past.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#638

Oh I forgot to mention that I LOVE the political backdrop.

I've a keen interest in politics & now that you've combined ArHi with it, I'm Loving it.

Now can I have Chapter 3 please.

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#639

Wow just finished reading chapter 1 and 2. I love it! Arnav really cant stand her at. He likes their constant arguments. She gives as good as she gets!

Waiting for chapter 3 now.