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Posted: 12 years ago

#791

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan
Again a Mind blowing update..
Your updates are always so different..
Loved it, Debu!!!

Hahahahha!! The way Taani was feeling awkward..
Now that she has realised that she loves him..
Ofcourse, It must be awkward for her.
But still, the way she was coming and again going back was funny..
Then The TaaRey scene..
OMG! I really loved that scene..
The way he was questioning her..
That scene was really very well-written..
Thanks so much dear Ayesha, you never fail to encourage me😃
I wanted to show her hesitation, awkwardness in the feeling
Rey's behaviour changed again..
I think that he is scared to digest the fact that someone cares for him..
That someone, whose life is destroyed by him..
He is scared of the feeling LOVE..
Moreover, his parent's unsuccessful marriage also plays a major role in this...

Precap!! I so hate that sister of Taani..
So Rude!!!!

Really loving this FF, Debu!!
Thanks a lot dear Ayesha that you took out your time to read this..i just love u for it

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Debu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Originally posted by: geshiga54
wow it just keeps on getting more n more interesting!!! but i have one complaint why do u end it so soon? always ending at such a good moment cant wait for next sunday!!! thanks for the pm

soon😲😲
that was the longest update , i guess😳
after that u ll b feel bored...isnt it?😉
thanks for this sweet comment

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Debu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#793

Originally posted by: yoyoaishwarya
hello di , what an update (me dancing) long update full on dil happy, full of taarey , rey ke ac speed low karna , remember old things , taani ko mirror me se dekhna, adoring her, kaha tha na ki aapke style vaale taarey love I nnd so look how tickling it is, love when grany take class of both of them n taani hesitation how to wipe his hairs awesome I love that , n rey ka ques, why were u worried , his wanting to hear from her she cares 4 him thats , why he says those wodrs to her n her fingures on his wound no need to say anything, again rey is restlesss, he is madly in love with this angel of his life but his male ego don, t want to accept that , his frustration of not getting taani or taani is not saying him I love u , to him is eating him now he dont want to accept his love 4 her , becaue of his bitter past , amazing di, ab taani ko rey se love hai or rey ko taani se, now it will be loving to watch how rey n taani will become taarey in yr way. waitin 4 yr story di love u.bye 👏 👏 👏

Thanks dear..I just wait for this beautiful comment😊

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Debu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#794

Author's Note:

Thanks so much guys for reading this FF so seriously. I have asked one small question in last update- the reason behind Rey's sudden changed behavior, as per you and I am proudly saying that all of you have said the same point of view what was my thought of writing. This means, all of you have reading and thinking about this FF so seriously, that you are actually analyzing its characters. And I am glad that I can able to portray few thoughts/emotions through some concrete words. And I am lucky enough to get this group of matured readers who can literally think and react with so maturity. Because, frankly speaking, D3 viewrs are so young aged, but they are matured at mind. So Thanks!!!

Yes, Rey didn't want to accept the fact how could the girl is so nice to him whose life is ruined for him only. On the other hand, he knows that his heart is not under his control any more and he is hating it. Again, he is fear of the thing what his mother has done with his father. So, all of these reasons are the effect of his behavior. Hope, Taani can stand up our expectation, but everything has got some limitation nah!!!

Now, TaaRey romance - as per your demand, I am going to mold this story a bit, but of course with the similarity of the current theme. I can't show Rey as a die hard "Majnu" of Taani nah? Please try to understand me and forgive me if I can't meet your expectation. But this romantic scene is yet to come till Taani will be attacked. Till then enjoy this underlying feeling of LOVE, because LOVE is not all about telling "I Love You" and "I MISS You" for hundred times in a day. It says about commitment, care, share etc what TaaRey carries now.

Lastly, again for your demand, I will show the new Rey at the end of the story. This story is needed more seven updates (max) and with their confession (not sooner, abhi der hai), I have a thought to end this. But, perhaps I can show how Rey can express his feeling to Taani and vice verse (unless you feel bored😛). But, as this is not a mussy Love Story, I can't show their college wala love affair nah? And again, both of them are so contrasting character. Rey is introvert, but let's see if he is still shy in expressing his feeling towards Taani? On the other hand, Taani is bubly, jovial girl. But is she good in saying those three words? Sometimes, it's easy to feel but though to express, even for a talkative person when it's come to heart's words. To know..stay tune!!

For updates - This weekend (if not Saturday, Sunday pakkawala😉)
I love you All!!! Keep Loving Me🤗

Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago

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RiyaJitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#795

thanks for calling us matured.this is really different ff than other n surely u cant gives luvy duvy scene but u can give us arnav n khushi wala love it suits for this character of our taarey.

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chandrima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#796

i wntd 2 cmnt too 😭

i hat my hnd

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Debu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#797

Chapter 26 : Taani chali maayka!!

The next morning is nothing special for Reyaansh Singhania when he opens up his eyes only if he can notice that the morning is indeed a dull one from any other normal day of him. He doesn't feel someone's absence till he misses some sweet sound of tickling in breakfast table. Usually he loves to involve himself in daily morning newspaper, but that sound never fails to attract him. This becomes his habit and he finds it inseparable now.

"Di ne breakfast le liya Chachi ji?" he asks to Manorama

"Haan Babuya, Taani ne subha hi de diya Rinni ko" she replies back

He pauses for a moment, then his curious eyes start searching for her. But unable to find in that room which is unusal, "And Granny?"

"Yes beta, she takes her breakfast in her room only nah?" Chachi informs. Chachi knows that Rey also aware of this fact of granny's breakfast taking routine, still why he is asking this, she feels confused and clueless. But, Simmi just can read her mother's mind and asks Rey.

"Bhaiya, I can understand. You wanted to ask about bhabi nah. But, she has already left for her maayka in the morning. Kyu..have you already started missing her kya? It's only few minutes Bhai." Simmi winks

"Aajkaal bahut zada bolne lagi ho. I will see your year end assessment result, otherwise your iphone will be cancelled."

This brother-sister relationship is very natural, very heartfelt. Simmi respects her brother and on the other hand, Rey loves his sister so much, but a little fighting is always there to add the extra warmth in it. Rey gets surprises that Taani has already left for her house and he is getting to know it from Simmi. He knows that Taani will be going today, but so early in the morning he doesn't know.

"She was in hurry, Babuya. Usko kahi aur bhi jana tha sayad. But don't worry, she will inform us once she will reach there" Chachi assures him.

Rey understands that these are nothing but some excuses which she has made to go to her maayka without informing him. He thinks about the last night's conversation and thinks that he, himself only has told her to stay away from his sight. But, now when she is just obeying his instruction without arguing, he is not feeling happy.

"Okay chachi ji, can you please tell me which car she has taken? I need to do servicing of my own car. So I need to check if any other car is available for me?" now Rey makes a prompt and fake scenario to know if someone has accompanied her

"No beta, she has not taken any car. We told her so many times, par kisiki sune tab nah..arre where are you going? Have your breakfast properly nah" chachi tells him

"I am done"

He doesn't love to stretch the topic so long, so he let her know his wish and leaves the place with these three words. Otherwise curious chachi will start showering her splashes of questions. On the other hand, Taani reaches her maayka by taking a private cab. Mama, Mami , Piyu, Swayam, Nani - everyone knew about it. But they, specially mami becomes surprised when she sees Taani coming alone.

"You came alone? Where is Reyaansh babu? mami asks Taani after she drinks a glass of cold water

"Why? Can't I come here to see all of you and my adorable nani? Taani asks with a smiling face

"yes, of course beti. You stup up your nonsense bahu!! You come here Taani beti" nani calls Taani and Taani touches her feet

"Not like that maaji. She is coming here for the first time after her marriage and without even her husband. Log kya kahenge" mamai presents her logic

"leave your all relatives aside. Do they come here to take care of us when we need ?" naani asks in angry voice,"go and bring something to eat for her"

But the condition of the house has been deteriorated since the sole earning member of the family has got married. Taani understands it by noticing mami's body language and insists her to let her go for buying tomorrow's ration. She goes to the market by picking up her bag. Nani also fails to refrain her as she knows that Taani is very stubborn in this matter. There is a popular saying - "Everything happens for a good", it also applies for Taani here. She sees her old friend Bishakha in the market after such a long time and she feels happy by meeting her. After all, she helped her once when she desperately needed a job. After having the introductory conversation, Taani finally asks about her child as Bishakha was expecting when Taani saw her."How is your kid, Bishakha? Boy or Girl?"

"Which kid Taani? Are you mad? I am still unmarried, but living in with a rock star" she replies with a blushing

"Arrreee, when we last met in that hotel, remember, you informed Mr Reyaansh Singhania about your pregnancy. Did you abort that child?" Taani tries to make her remember

"Ohh that one. I was not pregnant then." she shows her tongue acting like feeling embarrassed, "Frankly speaking Taani, I was needy then and I had been paid for it. It was true that we had got intimated that night, but not that extreme you know!! By the way, wao..congrats!! you are married now. You have not even invited me. What your husband is doing?"

"I can't believe Bishakha that you had done that only for money. Shame!!! I don't want to think you as my friend even. And for your information, my husband is that man only whom you were trying to trap by your dirty trick" Taani answers her back

"What?" Bishakha's eyes become rolled and bigger. She can't digest this fact what Taani has just narrated. She takes few moments to become normal. "Please mujhe maaf kar do Taani. Shivam ne mujhe bola tha karne ke liye and he was my good friend, I can't ignore him."

Now it's time to get surprised for Taani. The name "Shivam" is enough to think on it. These brothers are too complicated, too difficult to handle together. They can go extreme for the sake of their business, their motive or their revenge inf act. The thought makes her little shiver. She keeps thinking about Vaishnabi and her son, about her promise and of course about Rey who makes her more sad. Some how, the person has now become important part of her life without whom she can't move and with whom it's paining to move.

"aare, dekh ke nahi chal sakti kya..dhyan kaha rahta hai"

Some random person driving the car throws this line for her. She may has unknowingly come on the wrong route, she thinks. Taani wants apology and sees the person. He, himself only comes in her way because he is busy with a girl who resembles Piyu, her sister. Her chain of thoughts directs to her sister now from Rey and his family. Truly, human brains are amazing!!!

"But who is that guys? Is he Piyu's special friend? But he looks like Vicky. But how come Vicky will be with Piyu? He must have with Simmi. I must have to ask Piyu about this." Taani thinks in her mind and makes faster her steps towards her maayka. Hundred of questions are raising at the same time in her mind. She has taken lots of vegetables and other grosser together, so that the entire one week can run smoothly.

" Di when have you come?" Piyu shows her excitement after showing her Di in her bedroom

"In the morning, Piyu and I guess, you have just come from college nah? You must be tired. Take rest"

"No Di, I am in a mood to talk with you, perhaps the whole night" she holds Taani's neck with a sweet voice

"Who is that guy Piyu? Tell me honestly" Taani asks directly

"Who Di?"

"Who dropped you home today, Piyu. Is he your boyfriend?"

"No Di, we are just good friends. Please leave it nah.." she wants to leave Taani's interrogation

"Then you need not to hide your glance from me, Piyu and you don't have to leave this room also, if you are telling the truth to me"

"Di, I can't understand why you always poke your nose in my personal life. Have I ever asked you why you married Mr Reyaansh Singhania though you were seeing Shivam Rajpoot? Ek sath do do rich person!! Was money behind it or something else?"

"Shut up Piyu. You don't cross your limit."

"Exactly, everybody should live into her own boundary and this is goes for you also", she leaves the room finally after hitting Taani by some sharp lines of her. They think about her this way only, this is really a cruel world. Here, no one knows when your own blood will betray you !!! But Taani is worried about her sister now, she has no time to think of herself, not a single moment she can waste.

The day was busy for both of them. Rey can not notice when it has time to go back to his home. But after so many days, he is again not feeling going back home, rather he wants himself lost in his work. He comes from office, no one is there waiting at dinner table. Though it is not often, still sometimes Taani does wait for him with her some ridiculous excuses. He goes upstairs to his room, eats something, leaves many things on the dish and switches on the television set while eating. He forgets to change the channel where a popular Hindi daily soap of Saans-bahu is telecasting. Taani is not here, no one can irritate him by snatching the remote channel, still Rey forgets to touch it. He goes to his particular place where he sleeps now a days, the sofa set beside the bed. The king size bed remains vacant, the entire room is unnecessary silent. Rey can hear the watchman's whistle at three o'clock at night. The night has become so long to pass, each moment is passing like an hour and an hour like a month. He stands up for searching a bottle of water. "Arrggghh..why these are so scattered every where", he feels irritated. He sees a piece of Taani's saree is hanging from the cupboard. He goes to take the smell from it. It reminds her - her touch, her feeling is still very much present in the faded cloth. The sun says that it is no longer a dark night outside.

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Next evening, Swayam comes back from two days business trip and meets with Taani. After having some casual talk, Taani asks him about the current financial condition of the family. She knew that Swayam is trying to do some business in his own.

"Bhai, the expenses are really increasing these days. I am worried about our future days. Are you planning something for us?"

"Taani, please don't include yourself in your family now. You belong to one of the richest family of this city now. Give me some time, I am trying to setting up my own business. After that our condition will be better for sure."he replies her back. Swayam is tensed for his business condition and his mood is not good at this moment. Though he tries to do well, but he fails miserably in every aspect.

"Bhai, you are wrong. I will be daughter of this family till my death. Shaadi ho jaane se betiya paraya nahi ho jata" she tells him firmly

"Aur sirf dialogue de ne se koi beti nahi baan jaati. Leave it Taani, you are the guest and I don't want to insult you" Swayam about to leave the room. But Taani holds his way block.

"What? I have done nothing for this family except to advice you. You have to tell me Bhai. I have heard that you have sold all nani's jewellery for your stupid business. Kabhi baaki sab ke baare mein soacha hai? About Piyu? about mami ji?"

"Taani, see at yourself before pointing out at me. I am not like you who just got married for her own happiness and money, only. I am still fighting for my family. My luck is ditching me, that's all. Otherwise.."

"Stop your nonsense, Bhai. Jab bhi aap kaam karne mein nakam hote ho, you start blaming your luck."

"Taani!!!" Swayam goes to slap Taani, but Rey comes to hold his hand before it can place that big slap on Taani's soft check.Taani closes her eyes in fear.

"Mr Sikhawat, don't you dare to slap her. You are right, she is now my wife too" Rey's strict and firm voice force him to stop. The main door is open and no one has noticed him when he has entered into the room. "You should have thought twice before selling this house property. My company has brought this and this house is now in Taani's name"

"See, who has come here. Come Reyansh beta, this is for the first time you have come here. Taani make him sit in your room. I am sending Piyu with tea." mami welcomes him with a big smile, she tries to manage the situation. These family members change their attitude with the status of the guest. Swayam leaves the house angrily as Rey has revealed the truth about him just now.

Taani brings Rey with her in her room but remains quiet throughout the way. She shows her emotionless face to him which makes him irritated. He expects to see a burst of anger on him due to that night's incident. But, Taani knows that this relationship does not give her the permission to express her feeling openly.

"Why you came here without informing me? I could drop you" Rey asks her first after couple of moments silence.

"Why do you come here? what relationship depends on a contract and will be ended after the expiry of the contract paper, I don't want to nourish it. My family members are innocent Mr Singhania, they don't know about it. I don't want that they can foster some expectation from their son-in-law, so that when their expectation will be not be meet, when their trusts are to be broken, they will not get hurt."

"But Taani.."

"Yes Mr Singhania, They know me as your wife and some minutes before you have also declared that. Though we don't share any conjugal relationship among us. They don't know it and I also.."

"Are you gone mad or what Taani? have you lost your brain? What are your saying here?" he screams

"Excuse me, my dear Di and Jiju. Can I come in please if your romance is ended? My hand is hurting by holding the cup plates?" Piyu asks their permission from outside of the door by clearing her throat.

"Of course yes" Taani tells and Rey thanks her in mind for coming at the right place and saving him from the embarrassment.

"Naniji, I want to take Taani with me as Di is becoming out of control not seeing Taani. You know how much she loves Taani. And Granny is also feeling not well, chachiji can't handle all these alone. Sorry!! If I disturb you, I will bring her some another day for sure" Rey completes his sentence in a single breath, "Go and Pack your bag Taani, I am waiting for you in the car" he leaves the place by letting his wish to her. She still stands at the same place with a stiff face full of anger, she has become puppet of his hand.

Pre Cap - Taani gets part of Rey's past diary - the remaining past of Rey will be known - Taani Shivam encounter.

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A/N - Sorry, If I felt you bored with this long update. But you have got entire whole week in hand. So, take your time while reading😳. Please dear readers, I need your support till the end of this story with few upates. Please do check the notes before page, if time permits. Thanks All..Love Yaa. Do tell me your feedback please.

Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago

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Lavender_Luna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#798

res

unres kr diya!!!

now starting...

He pauses for a moment, then his curious eyes start searching for her.

awww... yeh toh hona hi tha... maane ke liye taiyyaar nahi hai but kisko bolega bichaara... its okay rey, we understand!!!

This brother-sister relationship is very natural, very heartfelt. Simmi respects her brother and on the other hand, Rey loves his sister so much, but a little fighting is always there to add the extra warmth in it. Rey gets surprises that Taani has already left for her house and he is getting to know it from Simmi. He knows that Taani will be going today, but so early in the morning he doesn't know.

awww... this was so cute part... but still feeling scared for simmi... and taani chali gayi, woh bhi simmi se pata chal raha hai, obvious raat ke incident ke baad she cant say him!!!

Rey understands that these are nothing but some excuses which she has made to go to her maayka without informing him. He thinks about the last night's conversation and thinks that he, himself only has told her to stay away from his sight. But, now when she is just obeying his instruction without arguing, he is not feeling happy.

kaise accha lagega... he has fallen for her... and jab uske pyaar se aise mood swings and fluctuations ho rahe hai... so kisiko bhi acha kaise lagega...?

"Arrreee, when we last met in that hotel, remember, you informed Mr Reyaansh Singhania about your pregnancy. Did you abort that child?" Taani tries to make her remember,
"Ohh that one. I was not pregnant then." she shows her tongue acting like feelingembarrassed, "Frankly speaking Taani, I was needy then and I had been paid for it. It was true that we had got intimated that night, but not that extreme you know!! By the way, wao..congrats!! you are married now. You have not even invited me. What your husband is doing?"

goodness... aise log bhi hotey hai... and kaise and kyu hotey hai??? well hua bhi toh shivam ke wajah se so no pint of discussing here!!! lets wait 4 the best clarification!!!

Some random person driving the car throws this line for her. She may has unknowingly come on the wrong route, she thinks. Taani wants apology and sees the person. He, himself only comes in her way because he is busy with a girl who resembles Piyu, her sister. Her chain of thoughts directs to her sister now from Rey and his family. Truly, human brains are amazing!!!

omg... ab toh kya baat hai... bohot pitne waala hai vicky ka baccha jaldi! fir ladki ka naam bhi nahi lega... usko simmi kaafi nahi hai ki piyu ko bhi apne saath ghuma raha hai... just wait vicky... tera toh khair nahi!!!

"Di, I can't understand why you always poke your nose in my personal life. Have I ever asked you why you married Mr Reyaansh Singhania though you were seeing Shivam Rajpoot? Ek sath do do rich person!! Was money behind it or something else?"

as usual teenage girls mentality... even i try to explain my bro. but who listens to good... anyways, heartbreak is the solution 4 these probs!!!

He comes from office, no one is there waiting at dinner table. Though it is not often, still sometimes Taani does wait for him with her some ridiculous excuses. He goes upstairs to his room, eats something, leaves many things on the dish and switches on the television set while eating. He forgets to change the channel where a popular Hindi daily soap of Saans-bahu is telecasting. Taani is not here, no one can irritate him by snatching the remote channel, still Rey forgets to touch it.

"Arrggghh..why these are so scattered every where", he feels irritated. He sees a piece of Taani's saree is hanging from the cupboard. He goes to take the smell from it. It reminds her - her touch, her feeling is still very much present in the faded cloth. The sun says that it is no longer a dark night outside.

yeh toh hona hi tha!!! ab khaane ka mann nahi hai, tv dekhne ka nahi hai, sone ka nahi hai, finallly kisiko ehsaas ho gaya... and uske saaree ko hug kr raha hai, kaash taani waha hoti... loved this part throughly!!! wow!!!

"Taani!!!" Swayam goes to slap Taani, but Rey comes to hold his hand before it can place that big slap on Taani's soft check.Taani closes her eyes in fear.

"Mr Sikhawat, don't you dare to slap her. You are right, she is now my wife too" Rey's strict and firm voice force him to stop. The main door is open and no one has noticed him when he has entered into the room. "You should think twice before selling this house property. My company has brought this and this house is now in Taani's name"

hmmm... ab kisi ko bohot fikr hone lagi apni biwi ki... loved the part where he defended her and her saying that he doesnt have any right to sell anything as property is on taani's name... loved each and every word of this...

and is this the part where u said she will get attacked? or else aisa kuch aane ko baaki hai???

"Are you gone mad or what Taani? have you lost your brain? What are your saying here?" he screams

bohot sunaya na usko... ab woh kuch bol rhi toh u cant tolerate? haa... ab use samajh aayega ki kitna hurt hui hai taani uske baaton se and uske rudeness se... lets wait and watch!!!

"Naniji, I want to take Taani with me as Di is becoming out of control not seeing Taani. You know how much she loves Taani. And Granny is also feeling not well, chachiji can't handle all these alone. Sorry!! If I disturb you, I will bring her some another day for sure" Rey completes his sentence in a single breath, "Go and Pack your bag Taani, I am waiting for you in the car" he leaves the place by letting his wish to her. She still stands at the same place with a stiff face full of anger, she has become puppet of his hand.

yayyy!!! i am dancing now... here, ek baat rey doesnt want taani to face swayam's behaviour and the second is, he is not able to live peacefully for even 1 day without seeing her... kaash yeh dil jaldi apna baat bata de... taras rahe hai sunne ke liye kab se...

and rahi baat precap ki, as usual, cant wait as bohot kuch reveal hone ko baaki hai... and kaash fir koi emotional scene aaye...

di loving this more and more and feeling very bad tht its gng to end...

love u loads and loads...

bye...

Edited by hima_taarey - 12 years ago

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shikha_taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#799

Res...
Unres!!!
Debu dii!!!! Ye aapne kya kar daala!!! 😲 Pure update me mujhe 440 volts ke jhatke de diye!!!! 🤢
U really made me speechless dis tym!!! Itne saare twists n turns n itni saari unexpected cheezen!!!
Luv u luv u luv u sooo much!!!! Mai ab tak 5 baar ye update padh chuki hu n im dancing after reading dis!!! 🤗
Starting me hi rey waking up in d mrng n feeling something missing!!!! Hayeee... just dont believe dis!!! Ye pyaar bhi kya cheeze hai dii... u just cant escape it!!!! 😳 😳 ... Rey taani ke bangles ki voice bhi miss kar raha tha 😲 ... matlab everyday he used to see d newspaper n dhyaan taani ki bangkes ki melodious voice par hota tha!!! 😲 ... kahin pe nigaahein n kahin pe nishaana!!! 😳 😉 😆
Rey indirectly asking about taani to his chachi!! 😆 ... kya kare... taani ke baare me puch lenge to rey ka attitude bura maan jayega!!! ... itna bhi kya ego?? 😕
Awww!!! Simmi is such a sweetheart!!! Loved d typical bro-sis relationship!!! Again a scene which is most common in real lyf of every bro-sis!!! 👏 👏 Simmi teasing him 😆 😆 ... n rey ki vo sweet vali dhamki... i phone ki!!!! 😆 True said debu dii... "This brother-sister relationship is very natural, very heartfelt. Simmi respects her brother and on the other hand, Rey loves his sister so much, but a little fighting is always there to add the extra warmth in it"... widout these small n sweet fights n nok jhok... d relationship seems a fake one!!! It always increases d sweetness of d relationship n makes d bond stronger!!!! Luv u... raksha bandhan vaise bhi abhi abhi hua hai so perfectly suits!!! 👍🏼
Taani reached her maayka n everyone surprised as to why she came alone!!!! N den her maami saying wat will relatives say!!! Sometyms ppl forget dat wat matters is d family nt d society or relatives!!! Totally agree wid naani's words..." "leave your all relatives aside. Do they come here to take care of us when we need ?"Relatives n society only know to talk on ur back... dey never care about u so why should we care about dem n wat will dey say!!!! 😡 Sry sry debu dii... vo mai ek baar chalu hojaati hu to rukna bhul jaati hu n thoda jyaada seriously leliya!!! 😛 Bt ek cheez to i hav to say dat dese old ppls lyk taani ki naani n even granny dey r sooi far better dan oders... i mean wat naani said usse to it seema as if our modern generation ki soch abhi bhi bahut peeche hai n dese old generations r much mordern dan dem!!! Afterall dey r experienced ppl!!!😆 Ok ok bas bas ... ab nai bolungi!! 😛
N taani met bishakha in market!!!! She wasnt pregnant!!!! 😲 😲 ... one more shock!!! Vaise dat was quiet funny wen taani asked u hav a girl or a boy n bishakha ne reply kia vo bhi blush karte hue!!!! 😆 😆 Aur ek shock... she did dis cuz shivam told him to do so!!!! 😲 ... god .. seriously ... ye bro-bro wala jhagdaa is quiet common in india!!! Experience se bata rahi hu debu di... bt inka jhagdaa to bahut atrangi hai!!!! 😆 One more question came to my mind wen i read d update... bishakha told dat she did all dat for shivam n she cant say no to him... matlab will u show something between shivam n bishakha in upcoming updates???? Ye guess to pakka erong hoga mera!!
Aur ek shock... vicky wid piyu!!! 😲 😲 😲 ... matlab last to last update me d guess was ryt!!! Kya vicky sach me flirt n casanova hai???? 😲 😕 ... i know u must be upto something!!! 😉
U think human brains r amazing 😆 ... true said... mai bhi teen din se comment likhne ke baare me soch rahi thi.. bt den my stupid... sry sry amazing brain kuch aur karne lagta tha..m finally likh diya!!! 🤣... ok coming back!!
Omg... loved dis one para lyk anything!!! D one where u showed how much rey was missing taani!!! Ye angry young lion se pankaj udaas kaise ban gaya 🤣... bt seriously loved it!!!
Rey came home n no one was waiting for him... chahe vo maane ya na maane bt dat little care n concern which taani had for him... who doest likes dis pyaara wala attention n care!! Ab to he is missimg all dat!! N i had a doubt!! Taani used to wait for rey ... ok!! N jab vo aata tha to she used to give him ridiculous excuses... n bahana banati thi!! My doubt is ki kya rey ko pata tha dat she was waiting for him n dese r just some excuses??? 😕 😳
Den wen he came to his room... switched on d tv n "SAAS-BAHU DAILY SOAP" 😲 😲 😲 ... ye kya haal bana rakha hai apna majnu ji ne!!! 😕 🤣 ... n he was lying on d sofa though d bed was empty!!!...d silence qas killing him!!! Hayeee debu dii... kisi ko miss karna hai to aise karo!!! U hav set a perfect example of lovebirds... ek dusre ke bina tadap rahe hain!! 😳 n d way rey was getting frustrated wid d silence... kehte hain naa "Sometimes, when one person is missing, the whole world seems depopulated."..kuch aisa hi haal tha rey ka... bt isme taani ne rey ko miss hi nahi kiya???? ... why so??? Was she soo hurt by rey's words dat uske baare me sochna hi nahi hai!! 😕
Uske baad to u made me senti!!! Piyu n taani ka convo... dis was soo hurting dialouge..."Di, I can't understand why you always poke your nose in my personal life. Have I ever asked you why you married Mr Reyaansh Singhania though you were seeing Shivam Rajpoot? Ek sath do do rich person!! Was money behind it or something else?"... she thinks lyk dis about her elder sis!!! 😲 😭 😭 ... n after all dis also taani was cocerned for piyu ... Anolder sister is a friend and defender - a listener, conspirator, a counselor and a sharer of delights...And sorrows too... dis totally applies to taani!!!! Luved her concern nt only for piyu bt for d whole family!!! 😭 😭
N den swayam saying u dont belong to dis family... i dont understand ki shaadi ke baad how come ppk se dat beti parayi hogayi...just hate dis thought!!!! 😡 ... n taani ne itne saak tak jo kuch kiya its all waste for dem... how can swayam say all dose harsh words n even he thinks dat taani married rey for her happiness n a luxurious lyf!!! 😲 😭 😭
Afterall dis i just wanna say dat.Family is suppose to be support, loyalty, protection, but most of all love for one another... bt yaha to family ke base me trust hi nai hai... n i think hardly anyone else dan naani n piyu .. luvs taani!!! Dey all just need her for money!!Dats wat hurts d most!!!! 😭 😭 😭
Sorry debu dii... bt cant help it... aapne rula diya!!!!
Swayam gng to slap taani!!! 😲 😲 😲 ... dis was d biggest shock in d update...rey came there!!!! 😲 😲 😲
N entry ho to aisi... proper tyming... just lyk a hero n swayam ka haath pakad liya!!! 👏 ...mai khushi se paagal ho jaaungi!!! 😆
Ayee hayee... kya dialouge maraa hai..."Mr Sikhawat, don't you dare to slap her. You are right, she is now my wife too" Rey's strict and firm voice force him to stop. The main door is open and no one has noticed him when he has entered into the room. "You should have thought twice before selling this house property. My company has brought this and this house is now in Taani's name"... maar daala!!! Im flying after dis debu dii!!! He declared her as his wife!!!
Usse double khushi ki baat... rey hammari taani ke bina wk din bhi reh mahi paaya!!!! Dis one was seriously unexpected!!! Ab update start karnne se pehle u write ..."taani chali maayke" n update ke end me..." dilwaale dulhaniya lejaayenge"!!!! 😉 😳 😆 ... loved dis twist!!! Mai to fida hogai update par debu dii!! 😳 👏 👏
Taani baal baal bach gayi... varna hamaare lion ki daant khaani padti!!!😆... n kya bahana dhonda hai majnu cum angry young lion ne... i mean rey ne 😆... rinni n granny ka bahana... jab itna sab bol diya to ye bhi bol dete dat even i was missing u!!! ...
Aww my poor taani... abhi kuch din pehle realization hua tha dat she luvs him n ab aise behave karega to even she will get angry naa!!! He is really making her puzzeled... even he himself is puzzeled!!! 😆 ... pehle kaha go away frm here... ab kaha ... come fast im waiting for u outside!!! 😕 😆 ... hayee ye ishq!!! Bafi zaalim cheez hai!! U know wat dii... i read it somewhere... there is a vry thin line b/w hate n love n sometyms u seem to be dancing on dat line!!! 😳
Anyways... mai apna prem par pravachan aapko baad me personally dungi!!! 😉 😆 ... varna aap abhi mujhe sach me maar doge!!!!
N for dis unexpected twists n turns wale ... dil ko khushi se paagal kar dene wale update ke liye luv u sooo much... teally wanna hug u now!!!!!🤗🤗🤗
Precap me taani will get to know rey's past... aur kya raaz hai rey ka!! 😲 N taani shivam meeting!!! 😲 ... damn excited to know about rey's past!!! Hope ki rey taani ko diary padhte hue naa dekh le... varna... 🤢 ... ab mai bhaag jaati hu cuz iss baar maine bahut saari bakwaas ki hai comment me... n im damn sure ki ull kill me for dat!!!! sryy!! _/|\_
Waiting for d update!!! 😃 😆

Edited by shikha_taarey - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Now finally am commenting after so long

first of all i will say debu the update was really amazing u know i never like a romantic story but the story with emotions and in this update the emotions of rey were clear the way he was missing taani to avoid his these feeling he started keeping himself busy in work and than he even missed her when he came home the feeling that someone is waiting for him was no more and it was making him lonely and he was getting hurt by this no doubt and he was also missing her but he is a man and man never want to admit his feeling his emotions they just go with the calculation and understanding emotions even if they are there are really difficult for them i know and it is really ture and u really portray it that was and u added the element of reality in it than of fairy tale and u know i really loved it

and secondly u showed taani reaction the way rey said those thing she was hurt and this was obvious that she will do something like that leaving without telling and than asking rey to don't make her family hopes to high

and than taani family reaction it was obvious that taani did a love marriage in there eyes and after marriage she is coming now and asking the questions about there family condition i know they will say like that and think that way because they are hurt in a way that taani did a love marriage when she said that she had nothing to do with rey in the first place they are hurt and their reaction will be that which is shown it was all reality

debu u portrayed the emotions in a really fab way and it was amazing how u described it u know when i read ur story i feel like am read the story of an amazing writer and i mean it debu u are really fab and superb writer and the update i really have no words for it it was amazing superb fantastic spectacular all in all an excellent update and i really loved it

u know debu while reading the update i was like