#2 Dark TR FF:THLH:move to Thread3 - Page 71

Originally posted by: shikha_taarey

Res
Unres!!!!!

Pehle to yipeee...cuz mera guess ryt tha...dat simmi wanted to meet her bf...im so smart!! 😳 😆
you are so intelligent, billkull mere upar gaye hoo😳
u also the same kya??😉
N vicky is her bf 😲 ...bt mujhe samajh nai raha weather he is a gud person or not!! Aapne thik se uska chatacter sketch nai diya 😕 ...n was he trying to flirt wid taani?? Dats d reason i got confused ki vo simmi ke liye acha hai ya nahi!! 😕...pls clear it debu dii!!
this is a trick what i have written intentionally😛
he will be playing a vital role in this FF so soon😉
BTW, u caught it right👏
.n ek aur doubt...sabke liye shopping ki bt taani ke liye nahi..kyun???? 😕 😕 ...no doubt...aapke dimaag mr koi khichdi pak rahi hogi!! N ur khichdis r quite tasty!! 😆 😆 😆 ...look...i again started my bakwaas!! Sry!! 😛 no no..again u r right, lets see how good it turns

A part of d mall broke down... 😲 😲 😲 ...n rey saved d little girl...our hero 😳 ...n taani was soo scared n worried for rey...mujhe to laga u will show taarey hug!!...bt aisa kuch nai hua 😔 Taani actually is quite strong dat she didnt evven reacted in frnt of rey...she even controlled her tears!! 😭 ...loving dis taani... 👏
this Taani is nothing but some of mine and some of urs. Yes she is strong, if she go to Rey to hug him, she could be like any other normal gal...but yehi pein this love story is different..
Let me explain 😆 ...But when he finds Taani is so cold, so unconscious about the importance of the situation, it makes Rey angry against her. Rey himself doesn't know the reason - is it his expectation or it is something else acting against his wish?" Its actually true dat wen ur in any kind of relationship...u always expect something frm him or her!! N same was wid rey...wen it didnt happened d way he expected...he was angry wid her n to some extent irritated...if m nt wrong 😳 !!
-how could u be wrong in this matter?😳 i mean u r the best in analyzing the story and protagonist..perfectly understood by u. Whenever we want/love some1, a natural expectation starts to build

D part which i loved d most was dis..."This is not a movie. Cold breeze will not start blowing to make you realize about love, no one will play mandolin for you in background. Haqiqat mein koi Raj, koi Rahul safed ghora pein char ke naahi aata aapna payar izhaar karne, Taani. You are in love and you love that man who has ruined your life"...how true debu dii...reality is always different from fairytales n films 😭 ...n i hate reality!!! Pehla fiction stry hoga jisme ur showing dat real life is far different from fictions!!! Loved it sooo much debu dii 👏 👏 👏 awww..thanks sweetie🤗, yes i want to give this story a practical touch wth a kadar twist😆😆

Luv u for d update debu di...awesome tha!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: crazy2012

Trust me behena, I was waiting for it and I refreshed that particular page with your reserve for so many times😳 and now i am happy
Thanks a lot dear for the suggest..it was needed by Me and many thanks for replying😊
Promise you, i ll try to make this story improved as per your expectation

Originally posted by: -3raser-

Debz Debz Debz!
I'm back! OMG! So happy to finally comment. You are such a sweetheart and I apologize for not commenting. The past few updates have been emotionally involving for me and this one topped it all. It portrayed Taani's emotions clearly with her being confused about her love. Rey is obviously going to take a lot of time to open up and will create problems for Taani in the future but I think she will fight it all. Today, the way she felt that she will loose him was amazing. The numb feeling then sudden burst of tears...it was just perfect!!!
I loved Simmi and I found Vicky a bit weird...maybe because I am not used to this different couple pairs. It's usually Sim and Nil but I find it refreshing so its good. I love that you kept things normal even after the incident...it wasn't like Taani is yelling or running into his arms. She still remains in-character and the same for Rey. So on a side note, I am so glad that after all these updates you are still maintaining your writing style and I enjoy reading it each time. I see that you are approaching a 100 pages soon so hope to see the third thread being open soon!!!!

Originally posted by: ..dinu..

...wat an update😭😭😭 ofc i luvd it ..but felt like crying by cing taani's condition...aww dey both luv each other so much<3 this is fav update in this FF!! awsum yaar the way u've written!! superb really!! simmi n vicky lolz.rey's expectation for care n all😳.taani realilsed finally<3 luvd it<3upd soon🤗