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Cozz i need some time to breathe after this update...😉

but i hav to say sry i cant stop but its truly purely

meaning full prt after reading it i must say tht i am

bless tht i get a chances to read ur stry n dis prt u

hav vry beautifully shown d pain of lossing someone u

love n it was really diff way to know tht u luv someone

whn u see tht person might hav been no more it was awsm

n beautiful n i luv taani fight with brain n heart n finally as v all

know hearth always win n i luv it n yes i do sometime miss taarey

romance in ur stry but u show diff way of luv pain n romance n abt

rey , rey's mom , shivam n taani thing i will say do as u want to do

coz u really do it perfectly n plzz do update soon i hav to wait one whole

week for ur update plzz put it soon n yeah thanks for PM n do it again soon

Debz Debz Debz!
I'm back! OMG! So happy to finally comment. You are such a sweetheart and I apologize for not commenting. The past few updates have been emotionally involving for me and this one topped it all. It portrayed Taani's emotions clearly with her being confused about her love. Rey is obviously going to take a lot of time to open up and will create problems for Taani in the future but I think she will fight it all. Today, the way she felt that she will loose him was amazing. The numb feeling then sudden burst of tears...it was just perfect!!!
I loved Simmi and I found Vicky a bit weird...maybe because I am not used to this different couple pairs. It's usually Sim and Nil but I find it refreshing so its good. I love that you kept things normal even after the incident...it wasn't like Taani is yelling or running into his arms. She still remains in-character and the same for Rey. So on a side note, I am so glad that after all these updates you are still maintaining your writing style and I enjoy reading it each time. I see that you are approaching a 100 pages soon so hope to see the third thread being open soon!!!!