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RiyaJitu

@RiyaJitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

awesome update yaar taani n rey in mall n rey aag mein fas gaya oh god thats so scary but he wanted taani take console for him ohh thats diff. taani finally realise precap is interesting update fast

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dildostidance09

@dildostidance09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

Lovely update..!!

P.S will comment more later

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Sharina

@shamanbk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

awesome update

Taani finally realized her love

I hope Rey realizes soon

per your question, I think Rey should forgive his mom, but not sacrifice the contract for her

please update soon and pm me

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#674

Fab update :) loved it :)

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#675

I was hoping at first Rey will relieaze his feeling for taani.. Nywyz upte is nyc.. Vicky introduction ws good Rey is soo rude on taani..kab he will b normal on her... Nd yeah i will go for no.1... I gezz sumtnhg major sud b happen wid taani so rey will reliase his feelings for taani umm i think u got it... W8ing for nxt..

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Nisha

@Nichuss

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+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#676

omg rey jusst escaped...

taani realised her love...

simmi... vicky...couples...

hope vicky is nice guy...

im waiting for rey to accept his love..

**suggestions..***

debu... wht u feel u write...

then also my pov...

i go for ur option 1...

rey forgiving his mom n step brother..accepting taani forever in

his life...

so that it will b a happy ending...

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aishapie

@aishapie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#677

Grt update...u wrote all d emotions so wel.
kuddos to u for writtin dis stry so beautifully.
nxt update soon.
thanx for pm.

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@-Dreaming...

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#678

vo...ummm...actu...actually...i didn't commented for last 4 updates

sorrry na...marna mat plzzz...🤢

was ill then studies

but now m here 😳

chapter 21

happy to see simmi and taani's bound😃

nd simmi is not a villain😆

Taani starts thinking about her husband. Yes, indeed a rare and strange man with all of his hidden emotion. What did Simmi want to narrate? Was Reyaansh in love with someone before? Did she break his heart and left him alone like Vaishnabi did? He also can love someone like anything, like Rajeev did for Vaishnabi. Rajeev and Vaishnabi's thought makes Taani remember about one of her urgent work.

i think aapka name 'suspense' hona chahiye😡 really suits u😆😆

😲😲what is she dng in shivam's house🤢

"No Shivam, you are making it wrong. I am here not to meet you, but to meet Mrs Rajpoort.

🤣🤣bechara

ohhh...poor Vaishnabi😭😭 and my guess was wrong😭but half toh right tha😆😆

Taarey nok-jhok😳😆😆

"It's a gentlemen promise and Mr Reyaansh Singhania never fears to fulfill what he has committed"

fas gya🤣

and Taarey moments were goodday😳🤣soollly goodnight🤣🤣

overall, a lovely update😊😊

Precap😲😲

me running to read next chaptertill then wait😆😆

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premlata

@Missu_TR

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#679

nicer update ...taani realization loce was super ...waiting for ray rey realization of love ...update soon ...

yes rey forgive mom and shivam yaa as taani want ...

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shikha_taarey

@shikha_taarey

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#680

Res
Unres!!!!!
Finally tym mila comment karne ka!!! Loved d chapter debu dii!! Let me mention everything line by line! 😆
Pehle to yipeee...cuz mera guess ryt tha...dat simmi wanted to meet her bf...im so smart!! 😳 😆
N vicky is her bf 😲 ...bt mujhe samajh nai raha weather he is a gud person or not!! Aapne thik se uska chatacter sketch nai diya 😕 ...n was he trying to flirt wid taani?? Dats d reason i got confused ki vo simmi ke liye acha hai ya nahi!! 😕...pls clear it debu dii!!
N jaise hi taani reached d mall...he started walking widout waiting for her... 😔 ...n den jab us shopwale ne dono ki picli...to his reaction was soo rude!! Arey mujhe pata hai debu di...dat he is lyk dis only n aap bhi rey ka anger n pain dikhana chahti ho...bt den mujhe laga vo change ho raha hai...lyk previous chaps me there were some changes in hid behaviour...thoda normally behave kat raha tha...ab ye lion baar baar jaag kyun raha hai 😕 😕 !! I guess temporary change hoga 😆 😆 !! Poor shopkeeper!! 😆 ...bt pic kitni cute hogi...n taani kept it wid her!! 😳
They shopped for 5 hrs 🤢 ...meri to sun ke hi haalat kharaab hogai hai!!! Actually mujhe jyaada shopping nai pasand bt mom le saath 4-5 hrs kharidna n ghoomna padta hai!! 😭 😆 ...n ek aur doubt...sabke liye shopping ki bt taani ke liye nahi..kyun???? 😕 😕 ...no doubt...aapke dimaag mr koi khichdi pak rahi hogi!! N ur khichdis r quite tasty!! 😆 😆 😆 ...look...i again started my bakwaas!! Sry!! 😛
Forgot to mention one thing...taani knows rey sooo well...u showed dat in dis line!! "Taani fills her phone number and leaves the place in rush as she knows that Rey will become more impatience if he doesn't able to find her at right place." 😳 😳 ...i guess dats d reason she can handle him properly 😃
A part of d mall broke down... 😲 😲 😲 ...n rey saved d little girl...our hero 😳 ...n taani was soo scared n worried for rey...mujhe to laga u will show taarey hug!!...bt aisa kuch nai hua 😔 Taani actually is quite strong dat she didnt evven reacted in frnt of rey...she even controlled her tears!! 😭 ...loving dis taani... 👏
N wen she wasnt able to control her tears n ran in d washroom...she just cried out in frnt of simmi 😭 ...she was really so scared if anything happened to rey!!! N i just loved d way simmi supported her...really loved d dialouges..."Your love is more powerful than anything else, it will always protect him in any circumstance. Don't worry, Bhabi. Please wipe your tears."...how sweet of her n how true she said it! 😳
Icecream tym...mere muh se paani aaraha hai...kitne din se nai khayi icecream!!! 😆 😆 Bt me sooo sooo happy...cuz of rey's pov...he was angry!!! Let me explain 😆 ...But when he finds Taani is so cold, so unconscious about the importance of the situation, it makes Rey angry against her. Rey himself doesn't know the reason - is it his expectation or it is something else acting against his wish?" Its actually true dat wen ur in any kind of relationship...u always expect something frm him or her!! N same was wid rey...wen it didnt happened d way he expected...he was angry wid her n to some extent irritated...if m nt wrong 😳 !!
N den again sweet simmi was explaining it to rey..."She needs time to recover Bhai, her heart is so tender, so soft. Aur ho bhi kyu nah, after all she loves you so much.."Did she just told rey dat taani luvs him 😲 😲...bt it was really sweet of her to say all dis!! Actually for me...simmi is really a cupid for taarey 😳
D best part of d update ... n d way u wrote it!!! Hats off dipu dii...dont get confused...im talking about taani's realization n d way u showed her dilemma!! 👏 👏 ⭐️
"Why did you become restless by his normal hiccups?" her mind still keeps questioning her heart"
"Don't lie to yourself Taani, didn't you get jealous of Aashi when Rey went with her? Didn't you make a blind hope that this time things can be changed? Why had you claimed that you trust your husband?" again her mind arranges some strong logic against her heart"Because I was stupid..."...yesss!!!! Matlab she was jealous of aashi!! Me again soo happy...finally realization by taani
D part which i loved d most was dis..."This is not a movie. Cold breeze will not start blowing to make you realize about love, no one will play mandolin for you in background. Haqiqat mein koi Raj, koi Rahul safed ghora pein char ke naahi aata aapna payar izhaar karne, Taani. You are in love and you love that man who has ruined your life"...how true debu dii...reality is always different from fairytales n films 😭 ...n i hate reality!!! Pehla fiction stry hoga jisme ur showing dat real life is far different from fictions!!! Loved it sooo much debu dii 👏 👏 👏
All three of dem getting wet...sry debu di...i cant help it bt im imagining rey in white shirt n dat too wet...hayeee 😳 ...n yaa maine chennai express dekh li as u told 😆 😆
Precap me taani chali maayke...n dard e judaai...aajkal shuddh hindi classes join ki hai kyaa 😆 ...will be waiting for d next update...wanna see ki rey gets sad or not😉😆
Coming to ur question...i want it to be a happy ending..d 1st option...bt it will be interesting if haapy ending ke pehle u bring some twists...or else u can show rey ne contract ke acc taani ko chod diya bt den as she leaves he will realize her importance n den will get her back...just some of d horrible ideas frm my brain!! 😆Write it d way u think is right!!😃
Luv u for d update debu di...awesome tha!!! 🤗

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