okies...here's my comment, i have tried my best to keep my standard, hope you find it satisfactory
this time a bit different...i'll comment on the basis of parts...and i have divided this update in three parts
Part 1...From Taani waiting for Rey till Rey telling her about the deal
so Taani was waiting for Rey, the first thing that came in my mind was...she is a dutiful wife, then you slightly told the readers that she is waiting for him out of curiousity as she wants to know the result of her effort...but still for me this was an act of a dutiful wife, and later when she served him dinner, that strenghened my belief more
on the otherhand Rey...he was happy that finally someone is there for him, Daadi used to wait for him but i am sure Taani waiting for him gave him double amount of happiness...but due to his introvertness and ego he didn't express it, and used opposite psychology as a way to respond by telling her that he doesn't care if she waits for him or not 😳
Taani for sure knows how to handle this man...loved it when she tried to show that she was not waiting for him...she was awake as she wanted to finish the novel 😉
i liked it when he told her about winning the deal...without her enquiring about it 😊
does that mean that somewhere he knew that she wanted to know the result of her hardwork...if yes than congrats Mr.Singhania baaki Larkiyon ka to pata nahin but you have surely started understanding your wife thora bohat 😉
Part 2...From Rey asking Taani what she wants till Rey carrying her to bedroom
i always knew he will react this way after knowing her demand...we have already seen how sensitively/voilently he behaves when it comes to his mother and his past
hmm he didn't react much to his mothers illness...he was more affected by the fact that Taani met Vaishnabi without telling him...i think that he deliberately ignored his mothers illness and questioned Taani
i am saying this because...even if he had been madly in love with Taani na even then his mothers illness should have affected him more after all she is his mother
the way the story is shaping up...i think Rey will give money for Vaishnabi's treatment...he'll forgive her also but even making a self-confession of this forgiveness and admitting it openly will be a hell difficult task for him...because he won't like to admit it
Taani will play an important part in this...she'll make him/help him confess this in front of his mother
1 thing i want to ask here...again my biology is weak but a mother keeps a child in her womb for 9 months? if answer is yes then plz correct it in the update
Then unintentionally he hurts her psychically...her cry of pain makes him stop there, then he dresses her wound, doesn't show but tries to make the first aid less painful for her...then carries her to the bedroom
this scene is really special for me...i have seen readers ask you time and again when will TR fall for each other and you tell them they have already fallen for each other
this scene is perfect answer for them...TR's first kiss showed Taani's care for her husband and now this scene shows Rey's care and concern for Taani...log kehte hain pyaar insaan ko badal deta hai...this is perfect example of that...Rey has changed, atleast his behaviour towards Taani has changed a lot...her single cry of pain made a ruthless person like him stop in his tracks, then he didn't call anyone else...he did her first aid himself, he tried to make it less painful for her
i don't think Reyaansh Singhania can do that for someone for whom he doesn't care...this act of him is a stamp on the fact that he now cares for Taani...this care and concern is one higher step on the ladder to love...happy that TR have taken one more step ahead in their relationship/their journey to love 😊
and i want to ask one more thing..."Can't you just open your eyes when walking? silly girl!!"
why he said that...was he telling her that its her own fault? if yes then why?
how can he say that...it was him who pushed her and she fell on those glass pieces...so how can it be her fault? it was not his fault either because it was unintentional
now Part- 3 The Trouble Called Aashi
i guess her entry is important for the story...for TaaRey
here Taani behaved like me...even i try to ignore The Bad/the thing i don't wanna listen as long as i can...i try to divert/change the conversation
poor Taani tried it but Aashi accomplished in conveying her message to Taani...afterall i think that was her sole purpose of meeting Taani
and she challenged Taani...i have a strong feeling that may be not fully but ye sab ulta Aashi ke upar parne wala hai...Rey Taani ko nahin Aashi ko apne aap se dur kare ga
and the precap...i already gave a little hint what i think...umm kind off expect from that precap part...lets see if that happens or not, but one thing i know jo bhi hoga it will be justified from the story POV
and one thing i'd like to tell you...infact i wanna thank you, you are so busy but still you try your best to give 1 update per week...and so far you have never disappointed us...so a Big Thank You for that...i think you truly follow "Aik baar jo maine commitment kar di to phir mei apne aap ki bhi nahin sunti" 😆
waise don't worry...sometime even if you are unable to keep this promise of yours, i am sure your readers will understand your problem 😊
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