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Posted: 12 years ago
this update was quite shocking and unexpected
thora sa fast forward...ahan (D3 Boys style)
i am glad Taani is treating Rinni with love and affection..and because of that her condition is improving 😊
The Khadoos Singhania said Thank you & sorry to Taani 😲 this is the biggest shock i have got in this ff 😆
i liked Taani's attitude/behavior in this update
she asked him for friendship and he agreed...the Khadoos Singhania agreed so soon 😲
anywayz good that they are friends now...i would love to see them transform from namesake friends to true friends then best buddies and then lovers 😳
waise i have a request here...can you please add a scene in the next update or the coming updates...where both Taani and Rey are thinking why they did so (offering friendship and acceptence respectively)
Rey ka POV na bhi ho to its ok because of these lines
"She is really taking care of her sister for the maximum hours of a day, as he remains busy with office works"
these lines indirectly say that he is happy with her and that made him accept her friendship but i would love to see Taani's POV on what made her ask for friendship (as i feel it is a big step in their relationship)
Answer can be Taani's changed perception of Rey's personality (like Taani saw a soft side of Rey with Rinni & his grandmother so she thought he is not that bad so lets be friends with him)
just a chotu sa scene or even a line or two would be perfect for me
anywayz loved their discussion...both are so different from each other
so the theory "Opposites Attract" would apply in their case 😉
abhi aik dusre ki choice jitni bhi buri lage...i am sure in future Rey would watch Fairy-tales and Love stories with Taani...and Taani will give him company for watching Action movies...just to make your partner happy...love does that to you 😳
loved the inclusion of Tu Jaane Na in this update...it was perfectly apt with the situation
hmm the precap is really interesting...Taani going to her home (lets see Rey misses her or not 😉) and first clue to Rey's dark past...really excited for that 😃
i know you want to end it soon but please try not to rush this story (as its natural flow is the quality which makes it a noch higher than other stories)...try to accomodate as much as possible (more number of scenes with less detail) i know you'll try to do as much justice to this story as you can 😊
hmm Simmi and Rinni...dono hi negative hain...but Taarey coming close to positive hi hai 😉
one update in a week 😭 anywayz i'll wait for the next update 😊


So, we have a discussion on this already and I think with my next few updates, will make it more clear..sorry Ms Intelligent..pls dont loose ur trust on me😳..I have molded the story a bit..let's see what happen next and pls leave your feedback like this.

No no, Simmi and Rinni do no hi negative or positive can't say actually from nw..itna -ve hoga toh, ppls will feel angry😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PRASSI

Awesome update dear...👏👏

loved it to the core...
At last Taani and Rey ki friendship ho hi gai...😊😛
But dont know on what cost...😉😛
Hope its positive one...😕😊
And Rey is impressed with Taani was really wow...👏👏
Now Taani is helping Rey...
Liked it a lot...
And their argument on movies and all was really so cute...😊
Over all the update was super awesome...
Do update soon and PM me...😊



Taary friendship is based on some cost..lol..see my image..kaisa ho gaya, ppl are doubting me😆😆, but actually you know, you are right..even I am molding the story each and every step..let's see what comes at last😛
Thanks Prasanna for this lovely comment🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aparabosecarmel

wow wow di
loved it
the way u described the way reysaid sorry and thank u to tani
muaaahhh
mashallah

loved it
the first step of this journey is successful




Thanks Apu..darun comment ta..
just loved it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome banner 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey

Superb part
It was amazing
Rey said sry to taani OMG!!!
Then taarey parts were so adorable
Precap is scary n interesting too
Update soon n PM me

N sry di like button is not working
But I luved this part :)



Thanks Soumya for this lovely comment..😊
Lets see what happen in the coming updates😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: diyadawda13

Kaan pakadke sorry for the late comment!

I just read both chapters now.
Great job!



awww you are such a cutiepie😳
no need to say sorry😊
thanks for comment yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
The banner is amazing.. Loved it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -upama-

I'm solly i'm late di, But what to do studies😭


But this one was just so nice. Because of your stories i can't even study. Everytime i see books i remember THLH, I'm not blaming you😆 Kya karu app ki FF hai hi itni achhi.

Lol, Bye!! Once again awesome!! And really sorry for short comment.. Want to write more but dimag mein kuch nahi aaya🤣



Thanks Behena🤗
take your time to read it, but dont blame my baby😳
after that you surely comment😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY

Oh my,am i in hallucinatn r did Rey realy cnfrntd a thanks & sry to Tani,i ws flbrgstd.I'm glad to knw abt tis Mr.RS.Rin-Rey bond is beautiful.Tani extng frndshp hnd as punsh,lvly.I'm alrdy ecstatic wit d blmng frndshp bw thm.Excitd fr upcmg stry.



yea he said..why not..he can do anything for Rinni after all😉
Thanks a lot Asha🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: raddhi

wow at last thr r frd

nice n did i read tht rey say
sry n thanks to taani nice
excited to see whn dis frdship
turn into luv thanks for PM



Thanks Raddhi for commenting..love ya dear 🤗
yea, definitely it will turn into Love Story..but I need some tym pleej😳

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