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@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: dh19
awesome and lovely
finally they become friends
and i too loved tom and jerry and cindrella
yes cartoon dekhne ki koi age thodi hoti hai
do cont. soon.

Thanks a lot dear that you could relate them with your personal life too..
I just want to make this story more convincing
Thanks for commenting🤗

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha
Debu Dii ! The Update was really cutely beautiful ! Looks like Taani has got attached with Rinni now, A Good Thing ! And Reyaansh actually said "Sorry" and "Thank You" ! Wow, Kinda Shocking ! But happy they became friends now, at least they won't be too uncomfortable with each other ! Loved It How You Described that they would fight on small things like even Tom and Jerry !! Really Amazing Update !

@bold - I actually cant assure you Neha, he he he..we can't predict Rey sitting this time, he cant do anything for the person he loves, however he is arrogant and with lots of attitude too😛

Thanks a lot dear behena..love you loads for this cutest and sweetest comment🤗

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: cuppypie121
Nice update
OMG!!!!
Rey na sorry and thank you kaha
440 volt ka jhatka lag gya
Finally Taarey became frndz
Hope to see more taarey nok jhok
Aur di aap bare chalo nikle
Aapne aap ko bhi is update le ae 😛
Ab jaldi update karna

Haan ji behena..I have included both of us..tujhe bhi nahi bhula maine😉😆😆

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: wow-taarey
yipppieee!!!!!!!
me first
i think u hadnot pm anybody yet
but i got it🥳
coming to the update
when i read the title i thought that
taani and rinni r gng to be friends😊
but
aapne to kuch aur hi kr diya😆
rey and taani= friends very very very both surprising😊 and shocking😕
di
rey ne sach much sorry bola hai😲
mujhe abhi bhi is baat pr trust nahi hai😆
but
bad rey starting mai usne taani ko ignore kiya😡
but happy to knw that he luves rinni so much😊
and this line

That's like a good boy!!! so mujhese dosti karoge?" she extends her hand for shaking it. "Khadoos kahika! theek tarah se haasna bhi nahi janta. He is saying like like cracking any deal", she thinks but keeps giving her cute smile so that Rey can't understand any of her reaction

🤣 agar rey ko pta chal gaya to taani is definitely gone
and seriously out of all the things TOM AND JERRY
🤣
vaise i also like cartoons but...🤣
and this line 😡

" You must have gone mad with those weird love stories and its some imaginary, stupid characters. All Love Stories are boring, illogical with high emotional drama, disgusting. I just can't stand those. How those film makers can make a movie with a hero running through a mustard field. ..Arree sarsson ka khet bhi koi romance karne ka place hai kya!!!"

di aap na taarey ka romance buffaloes ke bich krana phir rey ko pta chalega romance kya hota hai😆🤣 (di sachme mat kra dena)

most imp. thing
taarey were talking about movies and cartoons whole night
so CUTE😳
and the precap
was little scary
what is piyu upto???
and what's about rey???
khi uske parents se related kuch hai...kya ????

such a nice and hilarious comment behena😆😆
Thanks for this long beautiful and lovely comment Hasa😛🤗

And congratulation for the first position😉😊

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@-Dreaming...

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

banner is amazing😃

and one more thing

i will not be able to comment😔

as school torture shuru ho gya hai😭

but will try my best😉

i hope u will understand😳

meri pyari, shonu, lovely, beautiful, cute, gorgeous di(maska toh marna padhta hai na😆)

and solllyyy ...😭

what????

aap naraaz ho😡

bas-bas...jyada bhav mat khao

sorry kha na..!!!!!

aur jyada judh nahi bola jata🤣

Edited by wow-taarey - 12 years ago

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: wow-taarey
banner is amazing😃
and one more thing
i will not be able to comment😔
as school torture shuru ho gya hai😭
but will try my best😉
i hope u will understand😳
meri pyari, shonu, lovely, beautiful, cute, gorgeous di(maska toh marna padhta hai na😆)

kyu??? kuch tym mile toh story par lena😭😭😭😭
Sundays ko toh holidays rehta hai nah??
theek hai...kya kar sakte hai

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: crazy2012

kyu??? kuch tym mile toh story par lena😭
Sundays ko toh holidays rehta hai nah??
theek hai...kya kar sakte hai

pka wala promise

agar tym nahi bhi milega toh bhi nikaal kr comment krugi 😳

aur maine toh kha tha ki comment nahi krugi😛

yeh kab kha ki read nahi krungi????😡😆

aap ne toh mujhe dark se disconnected hi kr diya😭

bad di😡

but

luv u a lllooottt!!!!!!!!🤗

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Chapter 19 (A) : Happy Birthday To You

*** One Month Later ***

"Good Morning Di. How are you feeling today? Good Nah? You must be feeling happy now, aur kyu na ho main jo aa gayee hoo. Why you have not taken your breakfast yet? Achha, okay, I am feeding you, now happy toh?" Taani says just after entering into Rinni's room.

This is a bright Sunday morning and the clock is informing us that it is already ten o'clock. Taani comes to meet Rinni as per her daily routine, perhaps a little late today and finds that she has not taken the food yet. The nurse who is specially appointed for taking care of Rinni, is mysteriously missing from the room, may be gone to take her food first.

"Are you angry on me for coming late Di? But please mujhe maaf kar do nah!!" Taani holds her two ears with hands while making puppy face, "Wo kya hai nah, chacha and chachi ji just left for their Europe holiday tour today morning, I attended them. So, I got late. I also had to give medicines to granny on time and now I come to see the sweet face of my best friend" Taani explains her position

"Uuu..." Rinni tries to respond her and moves her right hand towards Taani.

Taani comes closer and takes a spoon of soup from the bowl. She feeds her little bit and wipes out the extra drops of soup from her cloth.

"Di, Am I doing the correct thing nah? Di when I extended my hand of friendship for him, I just wanted to fulfill all of my oaths which I have taken during my marriage as those seven pheras. Many were witnessing that auspicious event. Perhaps I can lie to myself. But how could I deny my parent and the holy fire who were also present there? I am trying to fulfill my commitment. I am giving this marriage a chance, Di. Am I doing wrong? "

Taani asks Rinni and pauses for a while, "I don't want to loose everything before I start playing. If he HATES me, I will LOVE him till I force him to love me. If he ill treats me, I will always give my best treatment to him. If he wants to show his inner monster, I will show him my angel spirit. I need your support and good wishes Di, so that I can get that strength to fight against all odds and keep my marriage safe not only for this birth, par annewale har uss saath janmo ke liye" She knows that Rinni is unable to give words to her expression, still she shares everything with her.

It is completed just one month today when Taani wanted to be as Rey's friend. When Taani wanted to make a fresh start of her life forgetting all of her bitter past with Mr Reyaansh Singhania just on the basis of two words - "Forget" and "Forgive". It was not easy for her though. But she never fails to give a try and brings out the positivity from any worst situation. So, when few days after her marriage she understood that her husband, Mr Reyaansh Singhania was not that person of abhorrence.

She looses herself in some random thoughts of the last few days while Rinni's fingers touche her shoulder. Taani sees that a small drop of tear at her eyelash. "Arre Di, I am so sorry, I have made you feel sad nah? leave it then. You finish this food fast after that I will show you my new trees which I have planted few days before. Aap jaoge nah mere sath?" Taani tells her with a brightening smile while looking at the garden through window. If anyone can minutely notice her, it could be easily found that she is trying hard to hide her eyes from Rinni.

"Achha Di, don't you feel bored by living in this bakwaas white colored room? I have planned a surprise for you soon. Then you will know what your sister can do!!! By the way, what is your favorite color? Let me guess, is it Pink toh?"

"No, wrong, it's Blue and reverse in my case" says Rey from the door. when he has already come at the entrance of the room, no one has noticed. He has come after taking his morning bath after his personal gym. He is in a black T Shirt and white pant. His body smell with the rosy fragrance of powder brings a freshness into the room. Taani gives a glance on him and looks down her eyes. "How are you my Jaan? Theek Hai toh?" he asks to his sister. After that he makes his next question for the other lady present in that room, "why you are asking about Di's favorite color? "

"I wanted to..."

"Whatever!!! Di, let's go to the dinning room today. We will have our breakfast together. I have something special for you to share today" Rey says to Rinni and holds her wheel chair handle.

"But we are already having our breakfast here"

"Meet you at breakfast table"

Three person are sitting at the dinning table while sharing their morning food. Simmi has gone to a college picnic and granny is doing her daily worshiping at her room. They seems as closely knit small happy family.

"Don't you know that you should offer while you are taking for your own?" Rey asks Taani when he sees her to take a cup of tea

"Sorry!!! wait, I am giving you the Tea. Your sugar please!!!" Taani replies back. She is sitting just opposite of the sibling

"Four spoons sugar with extra milk." Rey answers her back, "Di, tomorrow is a very special day. We will be going to visit Dwarkanath Road Krishna Mandir and will take blessing from Kanha ji...you add two spoons of sugar more" the last words are meant for Taani

Taani feels little odd to know his sugar level in the drink. But still she remains quiet by feeling lack of sweetness in Rey's life and his behavior, so he must be needed something extra in his tea. She prepares the tea as per Rey's instruction and goes to serve it in front of him.

"I don't have the mood of taking tea right now. I generally take fruit juice in my morning breakfast. You have this another cup and thanks for making this for me" Rey rejects her cup

Taani can't utter a word, her mouth remains open for a while. She tries to finds a suitable word for replying him back so that it can be appropriate as per his weird behavior while she listens Rey's chat with her sister. "Di, tomorrow is your Birthday and I want to make this day special for you. This is your gift for your birthday Di" he keeps a packet on the table from where a beautiful saree is peeping out. Taani forgets her anger for the moment by hearing this unexpected news from Rey and starts thinking how to make this day not only special for her, but also a quite memorable.

"You make her ready with the help of that nurse. We will leave for the temple sharp at ten o'clock" Taani's chain of thoughts interrupts by Rey's firm voice. "There we will be having a small Puja and after that, distribution of clothes among poor and orphan children . We will be back by two o'clock maximum. I am taking an entire day leave from my work for my Di only. I want to spend this day together, Di" he kisses Rinni's forehead.

The next day morning, three of them with the nurse reach that particular temple of God Krishna. They gradually finishes all the rituals of worshiping Krishna ji on this special occasion.

"Excuse me please Rey, I want to have some water for myself . Out bottle is already finished. Let me see if this can be available from the roadside stationary shops" Taani tells Rey, "You stay with Di, I am just coming within five minutes"

"Tell the nurse or the driver to bring. Take one of them with you"

"I can manage, Thank You Mr Singhania!!" Taani smiles and leaves the place. Rey looks at her way of leaving and thinks about her confidence. She doesn't know this place though she wants to prove her self dependability. This is the point where he finds her different from other.

Taani comes at the gate of the temple after crossing the green lawn and her eyes catch one of her well known person. She is shocked by this mere co-incidence or something else!!!!

Pre cap - Meeting with the Person of Rey and Rinni's miserable life - Shivam is back - the b'day night - something unexpected between TaaRey

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A/N - Now Big Sorry, Why? Coz I have not kept what I have written in the previous pre cap. Sorry Guys I had to mold the story a bit. Many times, I don't know what I am going to write in the next update. All of you are shocked when Rey told Sorry and Thank You!! but I can say why not, after all he loves Rinni like anything and this was very small thing for her. Now Taani's friendship - I have tried to justify with all of your doubts, i guess. Still I wanna say something, remember what she has taken during her pheras? she will be trying to work on this marriage for sure. Hope, matters will be cleared more with updates. I have written Pre cap as a overall scenario, but the next update is gonna be a power pack for sure (hopefully on Wednesday).

PS: Please check the banner at the first page too.

Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago

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Prasanna

@PRASSI

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

YEYEYE me first...

Hey its a cute and amazing part...

Loved the way Taani shares everything with Rinni...

And loved the way she respond...

And love this cute and sweet side of Rey...

And when he ordered her for the tea and then his rejection also made my mouth wide open...

After recovering from it I started laughing...

God it was really very funny...

Loved it a lot yr...

And at last whom Taani saw????

And why Shivam came and what happened with Rinni????

Yr ab toh aur bhi questions dodhne lage hai dimaag me...

Plzz do update soon next part...

Cant wait any more...

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

res/unres

behena...the update is really awesome...love taani and rinni relationship...

wow taani is going to give a chance to this marriege...this seems interesting...

rey...he is still a mistry about his behaviour...i really felt bad when he reject the tea...[love his concern and love for rinni

precap...taani ne kisko dekha ...i think shivam...and waiting for tr scenes...update soon behena...love u...muaah...

Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago

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