Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 6) - Page 75

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi di. . Sorry for being late again. Saturday sunday free days so. . Now chapter. . That was such a cute chapter :-D:-D hehehe khushi thinking arnav flirting with lavanya ?? And the reason behind her feeling bad. . Even i had thought like arnav.. Anyways arnav laughing with someone ?? Arnav admit it u were flirting and not being hospitable.. If u can laugh with her friend and have conversation with her for khushi and y not with khushi ?? Hmphh!! And aww i loved khushi's accusing questions. Although out of anger they were cute. . She is such a kid. . And then arnav finally loosing his patience but gathering it again seeing khushi cry and explaining her word to word , proof pe proof. . Aww so adorable. . I mean The arnav singh raizada explaining himself. . That's like once in a blue moon now isnt it ?? and khushi's reason being upset was :-( i though she is jealous but seems like her feelings are far off as arnav has to realise first and then he'll make khushi his !! So :-D poor arnav disappointed. . So lavanya di to chachi ?? Haha even m up for that. . :-D i hope rishab is not a problem. . I dont want his entry soon if its gonna affect arnav khushi in a bad way. :-( :-D :-D and the last part arnav feeling bad for khushi not being there waiting for him. . Hmm kuch to hua. . So begging of feelings i suppose isnt it ?? Yeh !! The feelings are gonna take a toll soon. . Arnav going to his dad's room and when all his wrong thoughts were thrown out of window and his anger down just by khushi's talk. . He felt good. . That means he likes her now :-D slowly will realise that he loves her. . :-D m excited. . Thank u for writing the chapter. Thank u for pm. Love ya tc. . Muuha :-*. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
how dare he...😡😡😡
how dare he...😡😡😡
ase kaise kar sakta hai woh...
how can he flirt wid la...dat too in khushi's presence...
how dare he...
seriously i thought khushi had strted developing feelings for him but seems like it was a waste bcoz...
at d end of it se was reserving La's affection for chachu..not arnav's affection...

but how sweet...
bcoz arnav has strted liking d chattering khushi very much..unconsiciously...
how he hates her gloomy face...
how much he hates d feelin off seeing her not in her true nature..

u're really do have a knack of portryin emotions so beautifully...

nd den arnav has strted expected more from khushi...more from her smile..unknowingl wantin dat smile for himself...so much dat he camt even stnd to c dat smile being awarded to bade papa...

wonder wat will haapen wen khushi'ss friend comes back...LOL..

i'm truelly addicted to dis SS..!!!
nd 600+ likes show u dat i',m not alone...

carry on wid dis awesome piece of work..!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update . Would love to read about Kushi's POV on her feelings for Arnav .
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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliant .. I luved it.. Luved the way u building up dis story .. Waiting for next update eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago
u r such an amazing writer😊...am in luv wid ur stories
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank God its La". I thought they r getting comfortable at supersonic speed...U know u really surprised us regarding asr" feelings...not finding kkg waiting for him...


loved it really:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
from feeling used to off course she was waiting for me, wow you make me feel arnav so much tht i some times feels that i am him.

i actually thought she was jealous but it was karan she was concerned abt , np i will wait for the day of jealousy :).

he is so sensitive to her reaction even in regards of his own dad dnt knw wht will he do when rishab will enter the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx for the pm else i wudnt hv read such an interesting story !
Got a pm of chapter 12 n 13 but i when i read just few lines, i was like god now this is going to be one hell of a storyline ! So i read the whole story religiously at a go ! Sorry i didnt comment on any of the chapters as the characters their thought process etc., were intriguing and interesting to stop and comment ! As it is im not good with words !
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Sumer loves his son, arnav but because of Sujata he stopped nearly cut all his ties even with his son. I really feel bad for Arnav for what all he went thru emotionally. Turning him into the person he is today, a person who has darkness, emptiness, hurt filled in his heart. All mostly due to his mom, sujata. Also hearing that after breaking ties Sumer adopted a girl. Which further irked him and in turn made him jealous of the fact that another person who was adopted was getting all the love which he should be getting !
Khushi on the other hand , as her name suggests, was a person full of life despite the fact that she has a handicap, she limps. this was a new thing which you penned down. Another new thing is Buaji in Raizada House instead of Naniji or Mamiji. INTERESTING. What also was different was the Khushi as a late riser instead of being nearly the first one to get up in the morning.
I really liked the way Khushi analysed situations and used her oh so sad look always to get her way thru. Found her to be fresh, childish, mature, concerned person.
She has nearly Thawed Arnav's hard ,cold insecure heart. Which even he slowly realised as he started conversing with her and used to look forward to coming home knowing khushi will be waiting for him!
Now after being alone with Khushi for so many days and had got used to her.. One evening after entering home n not finding Khushi waiting for him.. and instead finding her sitting with his own dad...MADE HIM JEALOUS...Arnav Singh Raizada being jealous of his own father coz he thot dat Khushi had forgotten about him as soon as Sumer had come back!...thank god to his surprise Khushi had not forgotten about him and was concerned about the fact that he had come late !

I dont know how to but all the small gestures and the rest of the storyline has been written beautifully !

Keep writing..tk cr.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi,

Read the chap now u have penned it brilianty. Wow khadus arnav is slowly getting
attracted to khushi 😃 . Loving the way ur trying to making arnav fall in love with khushi, thanks 4d pm.

Cheers,
Sai_neha
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Posted: 12 years ago
u know u almost made me believe in love again
such a beautiful story ...pls pls add me n u r PM list

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