Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 6)

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arnavini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1091

chap.13 & 14 are so well writtn that they get a 100 out of 10. it was a treat o god hw khushi fumed wen lav. called arnav and hw he was behaving with her. nxt wat reason she was like dat evn amused me tht jst to make lavanya her aunt and she dsnt fall for any other man dan his chachu... hahaha i laughed under breath.. anf hw comfortable arnav is nw gtng really was outstanding as u wrote it. i liked a scene very much wen he was a bit jealous of his father wen he retrnd and found khushi was with him rather than waiting for him. it was a very very bst of all ... and thank god he got clarified with it soon da nxt moment... overall this thread is awesme ...

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arshisimple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1092

Really good updates..loving the progress in Arnav's behavior and Khushi's confused behavior over Lavnya and Arnav and of course lavnya and karan, she is a bad matchmaker😉😊

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divya_divs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1093

heart-warming story😛😛😛 i find myself smiling whenever khushi's character comes😊 the updates are beautifully written😊 i wanted 2 complete it in one go but i couldn't help myself from commenting after reading few updates😊 each and every character in this FF is lovely 😛 please do pm me and i have already send a buddy request😊 will get back 2 u with more comments after reading all the updates😊

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Micky

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1094

amazing writer!

i read from start and this is fabulous story

The way you have written makes it more readable

Loved it

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1095

Chap 12 - Gr8 update...Loving d subtle changes in Arnav...Loved how Khushi took care of him when he was ill she set alarm 4 every 30 mins she's cute 😆

Beautiful FF I don't knw hw I missed it

Edited by Arshi.Sugi.IPK - 11 years ago

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Sugi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1096

Chap 13 - I thought Khushi was jealous but no she wants Lavanya 4 her Karan chacha so sweet

Omg Arnav is jealous of his dad 😆 He was so dissapointed when he didn't find Khushi waiting 4 him but then his negative thoughts flew away as Khushi told him she was waiting 4 him Arnie boy u r in luv

Edited by Arshi.Sugi.IPK - 11 years ago

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1097

Chap 14 - Superb update so Khushi's plan backfired both Karan & La got d love of their lives

Edited by Arshi.Sugi.IPK - 11 years ago

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ipkndlover75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1098

Chapter 12: loved it!!! Love the way khushi takes care of arnav..and happy to see them bonding and getting close to each other.. Arnav finally has someone taking care of him...how sweet!!!

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1099

Khushi's plan for marriage of karan- lavanya flopped.?seriously she made plans widout consulting anyone!!
arnav wnts more than friendship wid khushi but denying to himself dis truth bcoz of his past.

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arnavmyhero

@arnavmyhero

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1100

Hey anonymous,

First of all, congratulations on authoring such an amazing story!!👏 Secondly, I need ur help!!😳

I'm new to this site! Joined abt an hour ago.. And I Want to read ur story 'Making Khushi Mine -II'.

I actually had read a part of this story in an ebook published with the same title! N I wanted to read more so searched it down to here.. Bt now, I can't understand how this thread and chapter business work!!

Can u tel me how I read forth from when arnav s injured n khushi takes (excessive) care of him?

Regards!😊