Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 6)

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saku

@saku27barun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#731

wow its awesome

I love it the way kushi feels jalous about arna and the feelings whcich arnav have about kushi as well there routing to come home ealiyear n talk with kushi

to day update was superb its interesting...

impatently waiting 4 next update

plz update it asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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romaisaaa

@romaisaaa

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#732

You are such a brilliant writer. Checking your ff for update is part of my daily routine now a days pls keep on uploading brilliant stories like this one...your mkm1 was superb too...this was my first comment on your ff. I am a silent admirer of your work but your work has urged me to break my self created rule to not comment on any platform...keep on sharing your exquisite writing with us...loads of love and best wishes:)

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

loved this story...i started reading this today only and since then i didn't stop reading until i finished reading every bit of it...i can't even tell how much i am in love with this story already...this story and characters are definitely out of my dreams...hehehe...khushi is perfectly khushi and much more...and i m loving this child-like arnav who wants khushi all for himself and yet he'll not admit it...

i can't wait for this update now...please continue soon

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@SuperstarSanaya

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

Hi Anony_mous.😊

So good to see you back.. I hope you enjoyed your break and are doing good.😃

and No, I didn't need to go back and read last chapters coz MKM || has been as fresh as in my mind.😳

and now when I started reading chapter 12.. I once again was reminded just about why I love this story so much.😃

the minute I start reading about your Khushi in this story.. I get trasposted to her world! I just adore her so much. brilliantly etached out character.👏 can make anyone fall into Love with her.. without even her trying a slighest bit!😳

absolutely loved how she got all worked up to take care of Arnav ji as there were no elder in the house. and how she did barge into Arnav's perfectly isolated routine without hearing No for an answer!

Every bit of Arnav's thought about how Khushi cares and that whatever he did all those years alone.. She is there with him. Loved how he gradually felt wanted!

"Feelings that will rapidly grow so strong that they will make him send the well laid plans of his life for a toss, and hers too." 👏 👏 Loved it so much!

And, for Chapter 13.

opening para had me shockingly grinning when I read He asked Khushi to call him Arnav.. but but but.. Like Arnav says.. it was too good to be true.😉 He asked to Lavanya.

while I wont blame Khushi coz even I felt He was flirting with La for someone like introvert like him.

so, Khushi's loud sniffing is justified!😉😆

but.. what do I read.. she was Not jealous.. but was sniffing for Chachu and La.. Her imaginery couple.. 🤣

I literelly cracked up.. 🤣🤣 Khushi is crack!🤣🤣 damm but she is so cute!

and at the end, so.. Arnav has started expecting too.. 😳 Not bad.😉

Loved his restlessness upon not finding Khushi waiting for him.. and just how his disappointment turned into smile when she accepted that she was waiting for him.👏

I love how you show one step ahead for Arnav with every chapter! And, Khushi is the jaan of this story. Love her! And, while you are writing it.. Every word reflects your Aura! Do update soon. 😃

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faree

@faree

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

awesome update awww poor aranv he feel insecure he still a kid in many any ways and actually craves for attention but just because of his past and above all because of his introvert nature he hesitant to demand anything from others specially love, care and attention. he craves for khushi she is like his drug the only ray of hope for him.

just love the way you portray arnav feelings damn amazing and way 2 natural, khushi is hilarious

thanks for the pm

Edited by faree - 12 years ago

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

so cute :) Great job!! Thanks for the pm :)

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Raconteuse

@Raconteuse

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

@Match-Making plans - Awwwh! Here I was thinking that she was jealous of Lavanya for reasons unknown to her but known to the readers!😆 You threw a googly with her match-making ideas. She wants La to become her chachi? 😳 Like seriously, how much more adorable can she get?😆 But, I would still like to believe that a part of her was going green seeing how 'effortlessly' Arnav spoke to La.

@Flirting - Arnav is turning equally adorable in Khushi's company. Did he just explain to her what flirting generally includes? Asking out for coffee , phone number, giving compliments?Knowing Khushi, her innocent mind might just hold onto these pointers for the future!😆

@Arnav's mood swings - He keeps going back and forth in his thoughts about accepting and not accepting Khushi. While subconsciously he has obviously accepted Khushi as a part of his life, his mind keeps giving him these warnings every now and then. But one action from Khushi's side, and he goes back to normal.

The way she has forgotten that it was his time to come back from office ... clearly points that it meant nothing to her, not anymore for sure!

He felt so bloody USED. He felt like someone has yet again rejected him in someone else's favor.

GUESS WHAT? Even he bloody does not care about this chit of a girl!

'Arnavjiii, you're back'. The excitement in that voice momentarily pushed every other thought out of his mind

Ofcourse SHE was waiting for HIM. How absurd of him to think otherwise!

There are so many more layers to Arnav that are yet to unfold. Can't wait to read further! Update soon :)