Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 6)

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Sniggy24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

Loved it !!! Awww... Arnav is getting possessive :)

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Stapleton

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

fabulous update...

the way u describe arnav's emotions z amazing

thanks 4 d pm

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lin2002

@lin2002

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

u...know...something...u...r..a...fabulous writer..😉...

yaa..i know..ur already..aware of that fact...but...just remindg!!!😛...

plz...plz...continue soon!!

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

loved the update..
I thought khushi was jealous seeing arnav and LA .. but no she was planning something else..
but when arnav got to know the reason that..
he was disappointed.. huh..
kya ho raha hai babua?? :P
arnav thought khushi doesn't care for him anymore..
and he was going back in his old form..
but before that khushi saw him..
thank god..
continue soon..

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Seethu

@Seethu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#655

When the update first started off , I thought it was Khushi who is talking to Arnav ..Even I was bit uncomfortable when Arnav was being so pleasant with Lavanya ofcourse later I realized that he is only doing that just for the fact that she is Khushi's friend . Loved their monlogues..

I was initially under impression that KHushi is finally on the track which is why she has problem with Arnav flirting with Lavanya but that's not the reason obviously :)

Feeling very bad for Arnav , for a person who was soo isolated all along and now he is craving for attention … But seems like Khushi has long way to go before she reaches her destination but she heading in the right path though.. I was relieved in the end that she did in fact wait for Arnav ..

Very classy update !!!

Thanks for the PM and congratulations on new thread :)

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InkyCupid

@InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

This update was just zoo damn cute. First Lavanya is full on bonding with Arnav, and he is being just sooo polite for Khushi.. I think she did get jealous, but didn't really realize it. .. but it was quite hilarious to realize that she had a problem with Lavanya flirting with Arnav because of Karan chachu. Their tiff was funny too, with Arnav giving in and explaining himself due to khushi's tears.I bet Khushi would be totally successful in playing matchmaker for Lavanya, despite both her and Karan not knowing what's about to happen to them. ..loved the internal monologue of Arnav and Khushi.. and specially Arnav disappointment when he learned that Khushi was not jealous..Could also totally feel Arnav's deep seated insecurities, it was so sad how he felt coming back from the office only to see Khushi not waiting for him. He thought he was forgotten, but he wasn't..His realization was awesome and specially liked the last line where his lips curve up into a smile.

P.S Sorry for the late comment!!

Edited by InkyCupid - 12 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

woohooo another one of this
well lets see how far things go in this
after all the first step has begun for him to fall irrevocably in love with khushi
haiyye cant wait for more
of course it didnt dear
after all arnie wasnt there naa
samjha kariye parr shayd its best she doesnt let hai naa
so he did manage to get pics of the mela too huh
and not just khushi well bach gaye beta arnie bach gaye
or else it would have been hard to explain this to khushi
oh teri this is la and not khushi
kya yaar yeh kya ho raha hai
poor khushi man she aint happy with this new development
please tell me it aint going in the opposite direction to what its supposed to go to
yaar iss arnie ka kya karen DM
abe yeh kay hai
she is so right man
he can barely say anything to her and lets not forget cant bare her bak bak but la ulta ho raha hai
though it could also be because they are closer in age
and plus this isnt khushi naa
inhe toh khushi se baat karne mein hi problem hoti hai doosron se nahin
poor khushi aint happy with this is she
aur mujhe bhi rona aa raha hia
okay just kidding
pata chala yahan arnie ko inse pyaar hone se phele khushi ko naa ho jaye inse pyar
he better not ruin it man
acha ab samjhe hum
uff not again why her only
oh hello she is scowling because she thinks that it took her forever to get you to be nice to her and here la you are just being nice to so easily
abb becahri ko kya pata he is being nice because la is khushi friend
and yes la he is sadu trust us when we say that
woh toh he is on best nehaviour naa thats why you dont think so
inki toh kismat hi kharab hai yaar
karne kuch jaate hain aur ho kuch aur jaata hai
awww wow seems she is possessive of him unknowingly
bechari is so mad at turn of events
and can we blame her
please dont say anything to her arnie or trust me you wont hear the end of it
waah itna agar yeh khushi ke saath pesh aaye toh inki toh nikal pade
but no where he has to use the charm he wont man
though to be fair khushi would never fall for his charm alone right
he will have to work hard for her warna pyaar karne ka faiyada hi kay kyun
gayi bhains paani mein khushi nahin kya karr rahi hai
wonder what he will say to that accusation
oh sweet lord this is not going the way he hoped
well lets see him get out of this one
satyanash ho inka kya karr rahe ho yaar
and arnie why are you saying things like that
hey DM yeh baat kahan se kahan pahunch rahi hai
uff this shall be hard for him naa
and sweetie he wasnt flirting wit your la di but i wish he hadnt said what he did
how many of you think before he falls for her she will drive him up the wall
which is only fair i tell ya
oh wow this is getting real fun
chalo at least he is trying right to make amends
so funny he is actually explaining to khushi that he wasnt flirting with la
wonder if he will ever flirt with her
not now but one day he will have to for sure
oyye hass mat diyo marna aap ka kya hoga bhagwaan hi jaane
beta arnie this is just the beginning of what you have to expalin to her
and trust me there shall be more instances like this
you see khushi is gonna make you do things you have never done before
parr nothing can be done naa after all aap ka pyaar jo hone waali hain yeh
odd he didnt ask why she was asking him this very odd
wow that incident was just funny yaar
acha so thats why she was being the way she was
not possessive of him but it was all due to his chachu
okay so this makes more sense now
awww arnie was so disappointed naa though he wouldnt accept the same of course
should have known it wasnt about her but for some other reason
well at least she told him the real reason for her getting mad at him
wow dear that was some explanation werent it considering he never asked for full details
but then thats khushi for you
true you cant do the same with other guys who might be interested in her
dont be funny mate how would her chachu know of this
am sure it will come as a shock for him for sure
you know naa what she is like arnie
and neither of the party involved know as of yet
but inka bass chale toh she will get them married for sure
arrey cupidji please do confirm from one of the party at least before doing what you are gonna do like arnie suggested
what do we do with this girl man
oh ho toh aag lag hi gayi
he cant see her being sad and sulky it seems
and about time he accepted at least this fact man
there is hope for him yet right
oh sweetie thats not possible you know but then it does look like it from your pov
awww wasnt he concerned that maybe she is ill
arrey arnie babua she does care for ya and dont you dare go into your shell man
what the hell is with this man
dude dont forget that she knows your dad more than you
and he is just back from his trip thats why she forgot about you
but then who will explain this to him
khushi will have to work more on this fella it seems
see the things she does to make him see that she does care for him
wow man he has to be told right
dude she was waiting for you but since you were late and her bade papa came she got busy in that
but no denying that she was happy about your return and that she did ask why you were late
really you dont care for her
who is this man kidding except himself with that line yaar
really dude what is with ya
gosh being so insecure and all
ufff this will have to be cured off him i tell ya
chalo at least he isnt in one of his moods once again
now thats a relief for sure yaar
iss ladke ka kuch nahin ho sakta yaar
cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago

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anumol

@sweetanu2314

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#658

aww...loved how arnav accepted(at least in his heart) that he loves the concern and fretting khushi...loved the update...too bad bauji came back...but this routine cant go on forever althogh it can if they wish 😉 thanks for the pm dear...

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#659

So sweet, Arnav is clearly on his way to realising what he feels. He just needs a push! I am not sure about Khushi though, she may need more time. Please update soon.