Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 6)

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mem1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#641

Ofcourse SHE was waiting for HIM. How absurd of him to think otherwise! And just like that his heart felt a tonn lighter while his lips curved up in a smile without his permission!

My heart too felt a ton lighter and my lips didn't just slightly curve! I had a full fledged smile on my lips. and it was with my permission too! What an awesome update.

And i really loved how Arnav "fell in love with the routine" 😉 ...of course... Arnavji, fool yourself into thinking it is just the routine you love! 😆

It was hilarious that Khushi was not even a little jealous of Lavanya. Poor Arnavji ... he was disappointed for sure, when he knew the real reason of her displeasure...

Their conversations are so hilarious. It is really funny and heart warming at the same time.

The last part was very touching. Arnav has been through so much heartache in his life that he is so quick to judge and misunderstand people. and he is justified too, based on his past. But Khushi is nothing like his mom and he is starting to realize that.

I can imagine his joy in being noticed by Khushi when he thought she no longer cared.

Can't wait for him to understand the full extent of his attachment to her. Then the fun will begin, cause I have a feeling it will take some work on his part to bring Khushi around. He had to explain 'flirting' to her, for crying out loud! BTW, that part was super hilarious.

Thanks for the PM.

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devishree

@devishree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#642

thats beautiful and awesome

i loved jealous khushi

she is lovely and cute too and very feisty

i love this sensitive Arnav and his inner soul like a long lost child

superb and fantastic writing ya

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Sisbamboo1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#643

And the green-eyed monster makes an appearance! I don't think Khushi realizes that she's jealous. She's just irritated at his friendly behavior towards Lavanya. Arnav is not much better at detecting the jealousy, either. He thinks it's because he was going to ruin her surprise wedding (😆) plan for Lavanya and her Chachu. These kids *shaking my head*

Arnav has so many insecurities and every time he gets hurt, he lies to himself. The more he lies to himself, the more he's going to believe the pessimistic thoughts. Khushi has earned his friendship but she still has not earned his trust. He wouldn't have doubted her so swiftly otherwise.

He's never had a constant which is why he cherishes his and Khushi's routines so much. Khushi, thankfully, did not forget.

Your chapters are not very long but they say so much. Can't wait to see how else Bade Papa's return affects Arnav! He's getting a bit possessive of her, no? 😉

Edited by Sisbamboo1 - 12 years ago

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ghostfacegangsta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#644

wow! khushi jelus of Arnav😆😉

juz lovd it😃

Superb update👏

thankz for d pm..😃

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tvserial2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#645

Amazing...
Love is in the air...both of them haven't realize it yet. Can't wait to read the next part. Thanks for the PM

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sanja_here

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Posted: 12 years ago

#646

wonderful story!!!waiting to read more..

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RealityTruth

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Posted: 12 years ago

#647

Beautifully written.. I thought that Arnav and Khushi were seeing the photos and he asked her to call Arnav instead of Arnavji.. Then you made us realize that he was asking Lavanya to call him Arnav.. Khushi was jealous that Arnav was flirting with Lavanya. Arnav was happy that Khushi was jealous of Lavanya because of him, little did he know that she is into matching making of Lavanya and her chacha, without even consenting them. His dreams were crushed when he came to know Khushi's reasoning behind her getting angry on him being friendly with Lavanya. Glad that Arnav cleared all the misunderstandings related to her assumption of his flirting with Lavanya..

Arnav's insecurities were back after seeing his Dad, and felt once again rejected him against someone else'e favour after being used. He felt that Khushi would stop caring or showing concern towards him , now that his dad is back. I think he was happy to see Khushi's delight on seeing him and her announcement that she was waiting for him. If Khushi hadn't observed him, then he would have gone back to his previous world of being aloof.. Both of them are waiting to see each other everyday at home..

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@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#648

Fantastic update...loved the way you displayed their emotions :)

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Bavari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#649

Awesome update.Khushi's jealousy Arnav's flirting lines.Slowly he is getting used to her presence expecting her love and care just beautifully written. Thanks for the PM.