KIDNAP - Rajat-Mugdha - EPILOGUE UPDATED on 6/8/2013 on Page 67

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Dragon-Heart

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
Congratulation for new RTMC FF
nice and lovely start
waiting for more

thanx di :D

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Dragon-Heart

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: kiran_rati
congrates on new story dear
awesome title
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cont soon dear
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mahi_gurmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

cngrtz,dear.um sure u gnna rock in dis new ff of Rajat-Mugdha.best of luck

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mahi_gurmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

supervv start.loved it.nandini's marriage on 1st part?hero ka ek jhalak dikha deti...par nO worry,prithvi on his way to rescue his dreamgrl.update jldi dena.

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Dragon-Heart

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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART - 2

NANDANI scared to death. Her voice chocked and throat dried. She is sweating badly with the proxcimity of her kidnapper. His touch gave detest feel. Her mind turn blank having no idea what he gona do with her. She was totally on his mercy. She watch here and there with her terror filled eyes and start thinking how she made an escape from his grip. Collecting her all courage and energy she pushed him back and ran towards the door.

'bhag lo Nandani lekin yahase tum bahar kabhi nahi nikal paogi.',he said huskily,while walking carelessly behind her.

On the other hands whole RP family drowned in deep moarn and rage when they came to know about absence of Nandani from the haveli. All men spread here and there in her search but when they failed to search her they summoned police in their haveli. All happiness of them turned into a moarn.

'apko kisi pe shak?',Insp. asked meakly.

RP gave him a dreadful look and Dhruv,RP's elder son caught his collar.'sunn be insp.hume shak nai pura yakeen hai ki ye kaam us ku*** Sumer ka hi hai. Uske alwa or kisi me itni himmat nai ki is ghar ki izzat pe daal ske. Ab tu kaise b kar or Nandani ko yaha leke aa. Samjha?',Dhruv pushed him away.

Insp.rubbed his neck softlt,'sir ji baat to apki sai hai par bina kisi saboot k main unhe kaise pakad skta hu?',Insp.told his helplessness.

Rahul,RP's younger son trying to slap him but RP signled him and stoped. He signlaed his men whom's head is blown by the kiddnapper. They told him that although they havnt seen his face but his cloths and other things are very expensive,which not affordable by comman man.

'kyu Insp.itna saboot kafi hai?',RP asked strongly.

He nodded helplessly and made a way to Sumer's residence. Insp.enter with his men along Rahul and Dhruv. He bowed in front of Sumer as he feared of him too.

'sir ji apse mafi chahunga par hume apki haveli ki talashi leni hogi.',Insp.gulped his slaiva hard and said meakly.

'kyu marna chahta hai Insp.',Angad came from upstairs and threaten him.

'shant',Sumer only said and Angad sealed his mouth instantly.

'Nandani kaha hai seedhi tarah se bta do warna tum logo ka wo haal karenge ki tumare farishto ki b ruh kaamp utegi.',Rahul threaten them.

'jab bade baat karte hai to bachhe muh nai kholte',Sumer taunts him.

'dekho insp. Nandani kaha bhag gai hai hum nai jantebehtar hoga aap use kai or jake dhoondo',Sumer said in mysterious tone.

'par sir pls ek baar...',Insp pleads.

'oye tune suna nai babasa ne kya kaha?',Angad cuts him roaring in a load voice.

'its ok Angad,dushman ki beti bhag gai hai,chalo unki madat kar dete hai. Insp.talashi lelo.',Sumer allowed him and his men spread in all corners but found no clue of her.

Seeing their long faces Sumer smile wide,'kyu insp.ho gai tassali ya or kuchh baki hai?'

'i m sorry sir.',Insp.apolozise and leave with his men.

Rahul and Dhruv glared them but have to leave as they have no clue to introgate them more. After they leave Sumer stroked his son's back as praisal.

'well done my son,finally you ruined his reputation. Kaha chupaya hai use?',Sumer praised Angad for kidnapping Nandani.

'i m sorry babasa lekin main ye kaam nai kar paya.',he lowered his head as he defeted by someone.

'wat do u mean?',he asked angrily.

'babasa main jab tak waha pahuncha usse pehle hi ko us ladki ko utha k le ja chuka tha',he revealed.

'iska matlab Nandani sach me bhag gai? Ye firr RP ka or koi naya dushman paida ho gya hai...'he lost in his thoughts.

In jungle Nandani running here and there but all doors are locked. She struggling with all one by one,but no use of it. When he fed up he came and again pulled her up on his shoulder and took away. He came in a room and threw her on a bed. Nandani scared so much. She pleadingand giving warnings also side by side but he seems unstoable. He hovred over her and she coverd her face. He snatch her dupatta forcily from her and she shrek in a loud voice but soon her mouth is shut by him.

Its around 8am. Sun dawn but RP's family still in darkness as they have no clue of their daughter. Her mother crying hell. Baldev also helps them. Result was same. No one knows where she is? They also threaten the ppl.

Sumer also getting tensed coz he too wants to know about the kidnapper. He is sitting on dinning table taking his meal with his son,when Prithavi arrived there.

'khul gai apki neend?',he taunts.

'babasa main to kab ka jaga hua hu par apko pata hi nai chalta.',Prithavi snap back.

'faltu ki bakwas k bajaye agr tum b humare sath kaam pe dhyan do to behtar hoga. RP ki beti ko koi utha k le gaya hai or main janna chahta hu ki wo kon hai.',Sumer orderd.

'babasa maine aadmi kaam pe laga diye hai.',Angad assured him.

'to aap log isliye pareshan hai ki koi apse pehle bazi maar le gaya,jo ofcourse bade hi sharam ki baat hai. Kyu babasa? Anyways mujhe in sabme koi intrest nai hai,isliye aap jane or apke aadmi.',Prathavi taunts and leave from haveli in his jeep,

Edited by richadhami - 12 years ago

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riya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

wow...kya update h

really loved it a lot..but mujhe pm nhi mila

but fir bhi taak jhaak kar yaha tak aa gyi n find ur story's first part

its simply superbbb...

omg he kidnapped her...but whose he?????

prithvi ya angad...i hope prithvi hi ho...becoz nandni ka hero to wahi h na

n tell me one thing its ff or ss...

ff h to bhot acchi baat h but agar ss h to pls isse ff hi bana do...

becoz i loved it

😃 amazing concept n ur writting is beautiful

do logo ki dushmani n do dilo ka pyaar

hayee ek din me rtmc ke intezaar me shayar hi na ban jaun😭

nandni ka jabse kidnapped hua h my stomach is paining for read more n know more about this kidnap

sumer singh ne nandu ko kyu kidnap karwaya h

but karwaya h to bhot sahi karwaya h becoz baldev mujhe pasand nhi nandu ke liye

i want prithvi with nandu

so pls plss plss

update soon

love ur story n u too

muahhh😳

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riya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

resss for second update

n itna sa update basss?????

but koi nhi me first hun😃

haye he is prithvi im sure

bt wo aisa kyu kar rha h...😕koi personal problem h kya usko

oho im very eager to know

bt the best part when her brother came to sumersingh...hahah kuch nhi mila

but baad me sumer ka bhi popat ho gya jb usse pata chala ki angad ne nhi kisi or ne nandni ko kidnap kiya h😆

oh baldev ka beta saahil umm who cares mujhe to dono hi pasand nhi h😕

i like prithvi for our nandu...

agla update jaldi do

wait nhi ho rha mujhese

Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Rich wat a mindblowing start yar pritvi nd nandini rocked hope he doesnt do anything update super fast

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Res fr sec
pritvi ka attituade is to kill
beta daal me kuch kala h
i guess P&N ARE LOVERS
HOPE YE SACH HO

Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: mahi_gurmeet
cngrtz,dear.um sure u gnna rock in dis new ff of Rajat-Mugdha.best of luck

Thanx sweety 😃

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