KIDNAP - Rajat-Mugdha - EPILOGUE UPDATED on 6/8/2013 on Page 67 - Page 39

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

update 5-

iss update ka hero is mom!! yes prithvi's mom rockzz... i loved her...
she don't wnt her son to b bad but still want him to b wid his father.. just taki uska pariwar juda hoa rahe -khush rhe,...

'i was busy in hunting and going again there. I feel suffocated here.- dis dialogue of prithvi is vry interesting!!-
yes mom yesmom- prithvi ws really busy in hunting... hunting a WILD CAT-😉 jungalli billi nandini... haye prithviraj days in memories...

.'agr wo log mujhe rok skte to tum aj yaha nai hoti.understood?'- prithvi to nandini-... ye line gives me so much confidence ki ab tho paak prithvi isse durr bhaga ker le jayegaa!... n em damn excited for dat !!>..

precape is hurting... he is so much in anger... lets see- how nandu reacts to dis...


update 6-
dis one ws biggg one huge one in evry sense... bada sa romance, big thrilling adventure... and the hero is JUNGLE... yes jungle- iss jungle mei they both r safe n in danger both...! but most imporatntly they r together n they r just they two!!>.. tannhaaiii...!

uff!! nandu has so much wrong preconceptions abt him n prithvi killing dat tribal man made it worse...
why dont dis gal understnds dat it is fr her safety...
but she is natural here!- i mean koi bhi kisi ko kidnap kerr lega- will keep u inhibited as per his wish - tho how cn she b sure abt his right deeds!...

He grasped her both arms and squeezed inwards.'stop scarig from me understood.'-- woww!!.. pehle kidnapper who want his prey not to b scared of him...!!

prithvi's pain- pain dat nandini's hates him so much- he flushed it out as his anger n evn hurted himself badly... ufff!!- pyaar ka dard!... meetha meetha pyaara pyaara!!

finally- nandu's concern for prithvi- i loved dat prt.. its too romantic to read it..
. 'go and sleep now.',he ordered her and she made a move. 'and yes dont trying to ran away again. Coz you know i will find u again.',he added.- yess yess.. prithvi- dont let her go away from u!!--tumhe kyaa- muj ehi acha nhi lagta!!... i like u both pass pass!!


THE CONTINUED PRT- goddd!! it filled me wid gush!!..it ws crazy hell superb... u really bold..!! i loved dis one!!..

but- it ws just a dreammm... *fuming* i thot its ws like their first kiss n prithvi's love bite n her body!!😡
but chalo- sapne mei hi sahi nandu is getting close to prithvi...
bhot mazza aay to read dis one..

UPDATE 7-
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okey- ab mei sharmana bandd kerti hu- aur kuch cmnt kerti hu...
prithvi medicating nandu's feet.. ad the way she squeezed her nails on his shoulder- it shows dat she rely on him,..
pehle wala part- mom h beta talks- loved to read it.. haaye - aapni hone wale biwi k liye he is taking saries...

finally a real kisss.. no dream n all!... nandu in bikini- i just can't stop getting crazy on dis... *mann baawlo ho raho h*

kissy ho gyiii!! balley balley!!...

the way u hav written it- physical n emotional scenes going side by side... their passion being reflected to fullest...
but wat the heck- nandu claimed it to b a LUST...
heeyy!- it ws u to strt the kiss... 😈 tho prithvi lusty kaise hoa?? and morevr- tum use kiss karogi- being in so hot attire- how can he stop himself dan??

but still he stopped himself.. banda is really hard on his rules and manners... !! he stopped- evn dat ws passionate...!!

update 8-

nandini ka room dekhker em like- oh god- muje bhi kidnap kerwalo iss room se!!>. though pithvi kidnapped her but he has taken atmost cre for her facilities ...such a lavish room!.. loved it...

okey- prithvi ka chupa rustum pyar!... wow yaar!- childhood love... dreamy naa! ye raaz khula- n humme both psnd aaya!!...

oops! tiger!!- the fight b/w him n prithvi- maazaa aagya - i mean- fight padne mei maza aagya.. em not happy abt prithvi's injuries...

tiger merr gyaa- oh no!- india mei tiger's ki population aur kamm ho gyiii...😭
but uss tiger ne prithvi ko bdly injure kerr diyaa!!...
nandini's lov finally being discllosed.. loved her reaction on his unconsciousness!... really a ADVENTUROUS UPDATE!!...

dialogue of the update is YOUR DIALOGUE- PRECAPE- ACTUALLY NO PRECAPE!!😆

wow kash tum meri Maaneet ffs bhi padti maza aa jata tumhara review dekhkar. Murat ffs me to intimate sce dete waqt thodi jijhak ho rahi thi pata nahi kaise react karenge readers. But my maaneet ffare most passionate one... loved your review dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

PART 8 AND 9-

its wow!- el hi update mei poora roller coaster ki ride poori ho gyi...
flood of emotions n adventure n dialoge.. loved it the mmost!!..

pehle the way nandu teasing him- ohh woww!- it ws full of frivolities- it ws vry cute to read dat!!... his possessiveness for wallet- -kyu naa ho- akhirr he has his heart- sweetheart's pic in it!!... childhoodsweetheart- lemme coreect!.

how crazy he is- abb bhi ye do nadaan bache nhi samjhe dat they lov each oder!. n prithvi is ready agn to confide nandu to shahil... NNOOO!!!...
WAT A DRAMA- !! maza aagya to read convo b/w prithvi n shahil n nandu--
nandini's k guts- wow! she claimed her lov on prithvi---- miracle.. just wow!!... she i real hero of dis update!!...
loved her here- ab aaya na uske attitude ka real benfit!...

oops! almost whole city after them !!!
ab reallt thrilling prt strt!!>..

*tighten your seat belt*
*WE R ABOUT TO FLY*

yipiiee! excited!

part 10-
jhoot nandini nhi tum bool rahe ho prithvi- come on open up!!...
she admitted na- dat she loves u- ab - why u hiding ur love...

stoping uttering dat lie- u kidnapped her for runing her father's image...

ye dono naa- ladte ladte hi poori zindagi beeta deneg!!..

uuff! nandini ki bagne ki aadat!- kahain bhi- kaise bhi bagti h!>..
see - ho gyaa ladna- dekha nandini tumahri baaraat aayi h- guns n sticks leke!!...

oops! prithvi injured frm head...

inn dono ki ldne ki aadat khaandaani h- dono ki families bhi hamesha ladti rahti h!... uff!

aage kyaa hoga?
precape is painful!


part 11-
mom rockss mom agn rockss!!..
prithvi ki mom is just great!.. i love her...
nandini ka pain h er emotion r very well explined richa di- both acah laga vo padke!..

and prithvi ki maasomiyaat-- kisse maa??😡
idiot tumahri hone wali biwi ki baat kerr hi h mom!! :P
nandu out of bathroom to change- oh wow!!... aage ek hot romantic scn is waiting fr me- taddaa!!.. milte h next update mei!.. : ^_^


part 12-
CONFESSION CONFESSION...
me in 9th cloud!!>...

wow!.. wat a update...

hero of the update is- towel!!!...
yes... pehle ek baar jungle ws hero- bcz of MANGAL IN JUNGLE...

but today's its towel..
ekdum sahi tim eper it slipped...
prithvi n nandu' intnimacy makes me real carzy i loved to read it.. its just wow!!>..

shkar h- anandu had seen her pic in his wallet but she wanted to hear frm him- mei kudd chahithi thi prthvi to confes fm front...

"saath chalogi mere?'" o jii kyu nhi jurur jayegiii!.. wow!.. they r finally eluding!!>...

prithvi n sanyogita ki love story repeating-- lovely!..


part 13-
no words no words- bass zaasbaat samjh lo richa di..
dil tript ho gyaa .. atma tript ho gyi ye super duper hot romance padke...

its ws bold n it ws boldly awesome..
prithvi nandu ne kabhi socha nhi hoga- jahan vo khela kerte they- wahan they will one day... *lips sealed*

el aur cheez- *JAADU KI JHAPPI * paaallo🤗meri taraf se!

hugggsss sweety🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

PART 14-


wat i really loved abt dis update ws ur writing- yesss...
u dint missed it- !! 10 on 10...
kisliye- batati hu- coz... jitni imporatant h SR banaa.. unta hi important h SR after romance...
their sweetest bond- haye nazara na lage...

*kala tikka* kinne shhhwweeet h dono- loved their after night talks...

MR-pandey- chulbul pandey types entry aapki- maaza hi aa gya!.. loved it to core- dat scn ws like... mei jump ker ker k usse celebrate kerr rhi thi- yess shaddi ho gyi , shaddi ho gyi...

but at the end- wats dat!!>.. 😭

these cold blooded chaps- god poore cruise ko udda diya bom se...😡
🥺
heart broken di🥺- 🥺🥺🥺 🥺🥺🥺..

and these evils evn celebrating their deaths... K*TTE K@M!NE!!...

😳 thanx sweety
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

epilogue-


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☺️i just stopp blushing- on bathroom tub scn...swimming ppol scn
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see meien kaha tha na mom rockss!- oh wow!- she is just great!!! she saved her childs frm dese devil...
though uss cruise k baaki log died- i hav sympathy fro them too!!..

happy 5th anniversary---- *jhoom barabar, jhoom barabar jhooommm!!!*

aarav is jus so cute... srila di rockss here in her siggies.. its just wow!!...
loved it too core...

mamaji- thnks fr supporting prini!...


atlast- prithvi u hav truned so naughty- by god!!.
nndini- u r so cute as mother n wifey !>.

aarav- god bless u- u r angel man!- i loved u!.

@richa di- u rock= u simply rock!- it ws really a nice treat to read ur story.. dis thrilling romance will be always remembered my me...
u r really a great writer... simply superb story.. full of romance, hot sizzling romance... adventure drama..🤗
will miss dis story!!😊

i m so glad to having a reader like you. I feel meri mehnat safal ho gayi. Praise to sabhi karte hai but the way you did it simply marvellous... muuuhhh

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