KIDNAP - Rajat-Mugdha - EPILOGUE UPDATED on 6/8/2013 on Page 67

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

iss ff ko khatam hoye bhi sadiyaan beeth gyi h n mei abhi cmnt kerr rhi hu!...

jawaabb nhi mera... but thnx to u - ki u still constantly msged me...

thnx a lot...

khair jawab tho tumahre ff ka bhi nhi h...

u know- kal raat ko i started reading it n poori raat till 3am i ws reading it...

actually i completedly the story by 1:45am only... but i repeated my fav parts agn n agn...

favorite tho aap samjh hi gyi hogi-- romantic scn!... 😳

chalo- my single cmnt here will be for 4 updates together...

charcter sketch- lovely diveristy... prithvi n annadini names r actually best for murat- inn names ko padte hi murat wali feel aati h...

THAKURS v/s RUDRAPRATAPS...

kya adventurous feel aa rhi h!... thriller...

okies both r family enemies... interesting...

vaise bhi em very fond of this track!!>..

"dushman ki ladki se pyaar kerna her kisi ke bas mei nhi"" -frm raamleela movie...

and wow! prithvi is gonna fly away wid our nandini!... yipiieee!...

will cont later...

Edited by sweetsanyo - 11 years ago

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo
iss ff ko khatam hoye bhi sadiyaan beeth gyi h n mei abhi cmnt kerr rhi hu!...
jawaabb nhi mera... but thnx to u - ki u still constantly msged me...

thnx a lot...

khair jawab tho tumahre ff ka bhi nhi h...
u know- kal raat ko i started reading it n poori raat till 3am i ws reading it...

actually i completedly the story by 1:45am only... but i repeated my fav parts agn n agn...

favorite tho aap samjh hi gyi hogi-- romantic scn!... 😳

chalo- my single cmnt here will be for 4 updates together...

charcter sketch- lovely diveristy... prithvi n annadini names r actually best for murat- inn names ko padte hi murat wali feel aati h...
THAKURS v/s RUDRAPRATAPS...

kya adventurous feel aa rhi h!... thriller...

okies both r family enemies... interesting...

vaise bhi em very fond of this track!!>..

"dushman ki ladki se pyaar kerna her kisi ke bas mei nhi"" -frm raamleela movie...

and wow! prithvi is gonna fly away wid our nandini!... yipiieee!...

will cont later...

thanx for giving views hope next time u will gave little earlier. Waise mujhe pata nahi chalta list me kon murat reader hai or kon maaneet ka. Kuchh ko chhodkar jo mere close frnds hai.

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor
thanx for giving views hope next time u will gave little earlier. Waise mujhe pata nahi chalta list me kon murat reader hai or kon maaneet ka. Kuchh ko chhodkar jo mere close frnds hai.

i feel u r annoyed frm me- but the only reason i hav is- am doing MBBS 1st yr... and believe me- it doesn't let me breathe!!.. wheneva i get time- i sleep!!- dats wat i really require...

miene baaki ffs ko bhi pause diya hoa tha- n in my winter vacation em here to complete all!>..

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

update1-

before actually strt cmnting... - wanna say something abt ur writing..

its wow!- perfect for a thriller... ek dum simple h..

when i strt reading in flow- der is flow... straight simple language..

herr line mei u talk abt a new thing- not explaining too much... its actually gud- u giv our space of imagination too...

i really loved di dis abt !!

okies- update per... ye kyaa -first update mei hi kidnap ho gyaaa..!! itni jaldi ...

sahi kaha- thrilling update h- sabkuch superfast mode mei hoga...!

okey okey- thot angad ghar se nikala nandini ko kidnap kerne h liye- but i storngly feel- naah!... angad ne usse kidnap nhi kiyaa...?? kyu jo kidnapper h -voh muje bada hi romantic banda laga!...

OMG- kidnapper romantic??

crazy combination!!>..

update 2-

ohooo! nandini is scared to death!.. ye line feel wali h!...

kidnapper is so rude...

inspector n RPs ka convo ws damn intersting to read.. police is so scared of both families yaar!...

bichare bicch mei piss ker rha gye...

rahul v/s angad!!- kyaa wwf h!.. aisa lagg rha tha- abhi ek dosare ko chaba jayenge!>..

dekha dekha!!- meien kaha tha na- humara prithvi hi kidnapper h!!>.. chalaak bachaa!!... aapni dulhan ko kidnap kerke evn aapne ghar k logo se chupaa rha h!- sab samjhthi hu mei...

*shocked* wait wait wait!- ye prithvi yahan kyaa kerr rha h!>.. ws he here all night... yaa beech mei aaya!! *doubt hota h*

beta v/s father... ye tho sabse hi jyada mazedaar tha- beta ka attitude tho qutub minar ko paar kerr gya!...

'babasa main to kab ka jaga hua hu par apko pata hi nai chalta.',Prithavi snap back - ye h dialogue of the update!.. muhh todd jawab iss kahte h!

update 3-

ohhh! wow!! - god- nandini si so so happening naa!... prithvi tho pakka ghayall ho gyaa hoga...!! her attitude.. uff prithvi ko bhi piche chodd diya...

ladki ka kidnap hoa h - phirr bhi attitude dekho-!!- but i loved it...

Ek to maike kal se kuchh khaya nahi hai uparse tumne mujhe bina wajha yaha janwaro ki tarah bandh...'- ek dum right!!. ek tho kidnapp ker liye- uper se khane ko bhi kch nhi diyaa... .. ye kaisa kidnapper h!!.. kidnap kerna hi nhi aata!!. :P

ye ladki- seriously its so hard to handle her- pehle kahti h khana nhi diyaa.- bhukadd!- kuch kahay nhi meine..

and when he is giving her the food- them she pefers to die rather dan eat!!>.. she is carzy- jungalli billi...

but i still love her...

kidnapper bade hi romantic meezaaz ka h- i hav no dobt- ki ye prithvi hi h!!>. YO!

the wat he applied oinment on her- god munda kinna shwweeet hegaa!..

i loved it... v o scn ws dil ko choo gyaa!.. -really sweet!

update 4-

bhot chotta sa update thaa- but it ws full of murat talks... i mean prini talk...

nandini n prithvi k attitude per mei bhot bada bhasan pehle hi de chuki hu!! but still muj eprithvi k ek dialogue ki tareef kernei h-

'soon you got to know everything sweetheart.till then its is your home sweet home.',He leave her jerkly and went outside - superb dialogue!!>.. loved dis one to read!!..

preacpe is interesting so interesting- bagh gyi nandini n he is panic for her safety... this proves he has not kidnapped her for ruining her image- but to save her frm his bro's angad's kidnap or any oder wrong...

Edited by sweetsanyo - 11 years ago

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Dragon-Heart

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

i feel u r annoyed frm me- but the only reason i hav is- am doing MBBS 1st yr... and believe me- it doesn't let me breathe!!.. wheneva i get time- i sleep!!- dats wat i really require...
miene baaki ffs ko bhi pause diya hoa tha- n in my winter vacation em here to complete all!>..

no dear not at all. Infact i am glad late hi sahi atleast you share youe views. Thanx alott dear and i am sorry if my words gave i wrong impact.

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo
update1-

before actually strt cmnting... - wanna say something abt ur writing..

its wow!- perfect for a thriller... ek dum simple h..

when i strt reading in flow- der is flow... straight simple language..

herr line mei u talk abt a new thing- not explaining too much... its actually gud- u giv our space of imagination too...

i really loved di dis abt !!

okies- update per... ye kyaa -first update mei hi kidnap ho gyaaa..!! itni jaldi ...

sahi kaha- thrilling update h- sabkuch superfast mode mei hoga...!

okey okey- thot angad ghar se nikala nandini ko kidnap kerne h liye- but i storngly feel- naah!... angad ne usse kidnap nhi kiyaa...?? kyu jo kidnapper h -voh muje bada hi romantic banda laga!...

OMG- kidnapper romantic??

crazy combination!!>..

update 2-

ohooo! nandini is scared to death!.. ye line feel wali h!...

kidnapper is so rude...

inspector n RPs ka convo ws damn intersting to read.. police is so scared of both families yaar!...

bichare bicch mei piss ker rha gye...

rahul v/s angad!!- kyaa wwf h!.. aisa lagg rha tha- abhi ek dosare ko chaba jayenge!>..

dekha dekha!!- meien kaha tha na- humara prithvi hi kidnapper h!!>.. chalaak bachaa!!... aapni dulhan ko kidnap kerke evn aapne ghar k logo se chupaa rha h!- sab samjhthi hu mei...

*shocked* wait wait wait!- ye prithvi yahan kyaa kerr rha h!>.. ws he here all night... yaa beech mei aaya!! *doubt hota h*

beta v/s father... ye tho sabse hi jyada mazedaar tha- beta ka attitude tho qutub minar ko paar kerr gya!...

'babasa main to kab ka jaga hua hu par apko pata hi nai chalta.',Prithavi snap back - ye h dialogue of the update!.. muhh todd jawab iss kahte h!

update 3-

ohhh! wow!! - god- nandini si so so happening naa!... prithvi tho pakka ghayall ho gyaa hoga...!! her attitude.. uff prithvi ko bhi piche chodd diya...

ladki ka kidnap hoa h - phirr bhi attitude dekho-!!- but i loved it...

Ek to maike kal se kuchh khaya nahi hai uparse tumne mujhe bina wajha yaha janwaro ki tarah bandh...'- ek dum right!!. ek tho kidnapp ker liye- uper se khane ko bhi kch nhi diyaa... .. ye kaisa kidnapper h!!.. kidnap kerna hi nhi aata!!. :P

ye ladki- seriously its so hard to handle her- pehle kahti h khana nhi diyaa.- bhukadd!- kuch kahay nhi meine..

and when he is giving her the food- them she pefers to die rather dan eat!!>.. she is carzy- jungalli billi...

but i still love her...

kidnapper bade hi romantic meezaaz ka h- i hav no dobt- ki ye prithvi hi h!!>. YO!

the wat he applied oinment on her- god munda kinna shwweeet hegaa!..

i loved it... v o scn ws dil ko choo gyaa!.. -really sweet!

update 4-
bhot chotta sa update thaa- but it ws full of murat talks... i mean prini talk...
nandini n prithvi k attitude per mei bhot bada bhasan pehle hi de chuki hu!! but still muj eprithvi k ek dialogue ki tareef kernei h-

'soon you got to know everything sweetheart.till then its is your home sweet home.',He leave her jerkly and went outside - superb dialogue!!>.. loved dis one to read!!..

preacpe is interesting so interesting- bagh gyi nandini n he is panic for her safety... this proves he has not kidnapped her for ruining her image- but to save her frm his bro's angad's kidnap or any oder wrong...

thanx dear i must say tumne bahut dhyan se pada hai sab sirf wo hi itna detail me reply kar skta hai. Thanx alot dear. Really waiting for your comments on other updates too.👏

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#377

update 5-

iss update ka hero is mom!! yes prithvi's mom rockzz... i loved her...

she don't wnt her son to b bad but still want him to b wid his father.. just taki uska pariwar juda hoa rahe -khush rhe,...

'i was busy in hunting and going again there. I feel suffocated here.- dis dialogue of prithvi is vry interesting!!-

yes mom yesmom- prithvi ws really busy in hunting... hunting a WILD CAT-😉 jungalli billi nandini... haye prithviraj days in memories...

.'agr wo log mujhe rok skte to tum aj yaha nai hoti.understood?'- prithvi to nandini-... ye line gives me so much confidence ki ab tho paak prithvi isse durr bhaga ker le jayegaa!... n em damn excited for dat !!>..

precape is hurting... he is so much in anger... lets see- how nandu reacts to dis...

update 6-

dis one ws biggg one huge one in evry sense... bada sa romance, big thrilling adventure... and the hero is JUNGLE... yes jungle- iss jungle mei they both r safe n in danger both...! but most imporatntly they r together n they r just they two!!>.. tannhaaiii...!

uff!! nandu has so much wrong preconceptions abt him n prithvi killing dat tribal man made it worse...

why dont dis gal understnds dat it is fr her safety...

but she is natural here!- i mean koi bhi kisi ko kidnap kerr lega- will keep u inhibited as per his wish - tho how cn she b sure abt his right deeds!...

He grasped her both arms and squeezed inwards.'stop scarig from me understood.'-- woww!!.. pehle kidnapper who want his prey not to b scared of him...!!

prithvi's pain- pain dat nandini's hates him so much- he flushed it out as his anger n evn hurted himself badly... ufff!!- pyaar ka dard!... meetha meetha pyaara pyaara!!

finally- nandu's concern for prithvi- i loved dat prt.. its too romantic to read it..

. 'go and sleep now.',he ordered her and she made a move. 'and yes dont trying to ran away again. Coz you know i will find u again.',he added.- yess yess.. prithvi- dont let her go away from u!!--tumhe kyaa- muj ehi acha nhi lagta!!... i like u both pass pass!!

THE CONTINUED PRT- goddd!! it filled me wid gush!!..it ws crazy hell superb... u really bold..!! i loved dis one!!..

but- it ws just a dreammm... *fuming* i thot its ws like their first kiss n prithvi's love bite n her body!!😡

but chalo- sapne mei hi sahi nandu is getting close to prithvi...

bhot mazza aay to read dis one..

UPDATE 7-

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

okey- ab mei sharmana bandd kerti hu- aur kuch cmnt kerti hu...

prithvi medicating nandu's feet.. ad the way she squeezed her nails on his shoulder- it shows dat she rely on him,..

pehle wala part- mom h beta talks- loved to read it.. haaye - aapni hone wale biwi k liye he is taking saries...

finally a real kisss.. no dream n all!... nandu in bikini- i just can't stop getting crazy on dis... *mann baawlo ho raho h*

kissy ho gyiii!! balley balley!!...

the way u hav written it- physical n emotional scenes going side by side... their passion being reflected to fullest...

but wat the heck- nandu claimed it to b a LUST...

heeyy!- it ws u to strt the kiss... 😈 tho prithvi lusty kaise hoa?? and morevr- tum use kiss karogi- being in so hot attire- how can he stop himself dan??

but still he stopped himself.. banda is really hard on his rules and manners... !! he stopped- evn dat ws passionate...!!

update 8-

nandini ka room dekhker em like- oh god- muje bhi kidnap kerwalo iss room se!!>. though pithvi kidnapped her but he has taken atmost cre for her facilities ...such a lavish room!.. loved it...

okey- prithvi ka chupa rustum pyar!... wow yaar!- childhood love... dreamy naa! ye raaz khula- n humme both psnd aaya!!...

oops! tiger!!- the fight b/w him n prithvi- maazaa aagya - i mean- fight padne mei maza aagya.. em not happy abt prithvi's injuries...

tiger merr gyaa- oh no!- india mei tiger's ki population aur kamm ho gyiii...😭

but uss tiger ne prithvi ko bdly injure kerr diyaa!!...

nandini's lov finally being discllosed.. loved her reaction on his unconsciousness!... really a ADVENTUROUS UPDATE!!...

dialogue of the update is YOUR DIALOGUE- PRECAPE- ACTUALLY NO PRECAPE!!😆

Edited by sweetsanyo - 11 years ago

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

PART 8 AND 9-

its wow!- el hi update mei poora roller coaster ki ride poori ho gyi...

flood of emotions n adventure n dialoge.. loved it the mmost!!..

pehle the way nandu teasing him- ohh woww!- it ws full of frivolities- it ws vry cute to read dat!!... his possessiveness for wallet- -kyu naa ho- akhirr he has his heart- sweetheart's pic in it!!... childhoodsweetheart- lemme coreect!.

how crazy he is- abb bhi ye do nadaan bache nhi samjhe dat they lov each oder!. n prithvi is ready agn to confide nandu to shahil... NNOOO!!!...

WAT A DRAMA- !! maza aagya to read convo b/w prithvi n shahil n nandu--

nandini's k guts- wow! she claimed her lov on prithvi---- miracle.. just wow!!... she i real hero of dis update!!...

loved her here- ab aaya na uske attitude ka real benfit!...

oops! almost whole city after them !!!

ab reallt thrilling prt strt!!>..

*tighten your seat belt*

*WE R ABOUT TO FLY*

yipiiee! excited!

part 10-

jhoot nandini nhi tum bool rahe ho prithvi- come on open up!!...

she admitted na- dat she loves u- ab - why u hiding ur love...

stoping uttering dat lie- u kidnapped her for runing her father's image...

ye dono naa- ladte ladte hi poori zindagi beeta deneg!!..

uuff! nandini ki bagne ki aadat!- kahain bhi- kaise bhi bagti h!>..

see - ho gyaa ladna- dekha nandini tumahri baaraat aayi h- guns n sticks leke!!...

oops! prithvi injured frm head...

inn dono ki ldne ki aadat khaandaani h- dono ki families bhi hamesha ladti rahti h!... uff!

aage kyaa hoga?

precape is painful!

part 11-

mom rockss mom agn rockss!!..

prithvi ki mom is just great!.. i love her...

nandini ka pain h er emotion r very well explined richa di- both acah laga vo padke!..

and prithvi ki maasomiyaat-- kisse maa??😡

idiot tumahri hone wali biwi ki baat kerr hi h mom!! :P

nandu out of bathroom to change- oh wow!!... aage ek hot romantic scn is waiting fr me- taddaa!!.. milte h next update mei!.. : ^_^

part 12-

CONFESSION CONFESSION...

me in 9th cloud!!>...

wow!.. wat a update...

hero of the update is- towel!!!...

yes... pehle ek baar jungle ws hero- bcz of MANGAL IN JUNGLE...

but today's its towel..

ekdum sahi tim eper it slipped...

prithvi n nandu' intnimacy makes me real carzy i loved to read it.. its just wow!!>..

shkar h- anandu had seen her pic in his wallet but she wanted to hear frm him- mei kudd chahithi thi prthvi to confes fm front...

"saath chalogi mere?'" o jii kyu nhi jurur jayegiii!.. wow!.. they r finally eluding!!>...

prithvi n sanyogita ki love story repeating-- lovely!..

part 13-

no words no words- bass zaasbaat samjh lo richa di..

dil tript ho gyaa .. atma tript ho gyi ye super duper hot romance padke...

its ws bold n it ws boldly awesome..

prithvi nandu ne kabhi socha nhi hoga- jahan vo khela kerte they- wahan they will one day... *lips sealed*

el aur cheez- *JAADU KI JHAPPI * paaallo🤗meri taraf se!

Edited by sweetsanyo - 11 years ago

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#379

PART 14-

wat i really loved abt dis update ws ur writing- yesss...

u dint missed it- !! 10 on 10...

kisliye- batati hu- coz... jitni imporatant h SR banaa.. unta hi important h SR after romance...

their sweetest bond- haye nazara na lage...

*kala tikka* kinne shhhwweeet h dono- loved their after night talks...

MR-pandey- chulbul pandey types entry aapki- maaza hi aa gya!.. loved it to core- dat scn ws like... mei jump ker ker k usse celebrate kerr rhi thi- yess shaddi ho gyi , shaddi ho gyi...

but at the end- wats dat!!>.. 😭

these cold blooded chaps- god poore cruise ko udda diya bom se...😡

🥺

heart broken di🥺- 🥺🥺🥺 🥺🥺🥺..

and these evils evn celebrating their deaths... K*TTE K@M!NE!!...