Virika FF: Written in my heart (Chp 8 pg 56) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Reserved
Unreserved

Loved the starting

Love how Jeevika is the most pampered person from the whole family

Love how Virika are younger than Virman

Aww the way she surprised him was sweet

There hugs and kisses ❤️

Absolutely loved how Viren wanted Jeevika to himself

Loved the way you've written it out

It was beautifully written out

Phenomenal start

Thanks for the pm

Please continue soon
Edited by Love_Family - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Awesome start!!!
Can't wait to read more!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Great story. Do continue soon!
This time I'll be regular with my comments! 😆
Edited by Kashy15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
A very interesting start
Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Dude, wait, wait, wait!
My Girlfriend is writing a new SS?
You mean sachiii????
Hawww 😲
😆
I loved the first part..
They are already a couple ❤️
And she's younger than Manvi and the way he welcomed her with 2-2 kisses Hayeee ☺️
GF Ji mein to teri fan ho gayi...
I promise I won't miss this story 😛
And would bug you so so so so so so much that u will give me the next update soonest!
Thanks for the pm and
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Arey wah u started a new story...wow yr !!!
Nice start yr
How much they missed eachother & then the surprise...
Waiting for the nxt update...continue soon !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Abhiii likh mere liye update..
Abhi k Abhi!!!!!! 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Yaar de de na update!
Pleaseee 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
I'll regularly comment on the story.. Pinky Promise 😛
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Awww, love how viren wants to keep Jeevs to himself ;)) awesome concept, can't wait to read more!!!! And thanks for the pm :D

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