Virika FF: Written in my heart (Chp 8 pg 56) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Do you remember I owe an update? 😳
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very very gud starting...

how naughtiness fild in virins...

the little meeting of virikas was fab...fully romantic...

eager to read more...

Thnxxx alot fr pm...
continue very soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yammieee...update otherwise i wil haunt u !!!
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this is just amazing,adorable...and what not
loved it
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nice one im looking forward to the next update
thanks for the pm
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Nice FF...

Lovely update... I like the way Jeevika said "Aww! My baby! Chalo! Nautanki!" 😛
Continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Edited by mariarauf48 - 21 June 2013 at 5:25am 😳😳😳
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superbbb cncept !!!!!
Long drive...awww...❤️
Update soon...please !!!!! 😊
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Chapter 2

Listening old songs while on a long drive in rain, perfect! Jeevika loved rains, and so did Viren. Viren didnt actually loved rains, he loved when Jeevika's romantic mode used to turn on after getting drenched up in the rain. he loved to see how Jeevika behaved like a kid after seeing rain. Viren turned to see Jeevika putting her hand out of window and enjoying the rain. The smile on her lips and the glow in her eyes was die for. She saw him staring her and smiled at him.

"Love you Viren!"

"I love you too!"

"Viren, Please stop the car now! I wanna enjoy the rain!"

"No No No! not today! We'll play in the rain, later!"

"Are you stopping or i jump out of the window?"

"Ohkay! Jump! I'm fine with it!" he said with a a naughty smirk

"Viren! i won't talk to you!"

"Ohkay Ohkay! Stop blackmailing!"

He parked the car on the side. It was only them on the road, with the trees and the breeze which was like a cherry on the cake. Jeevika without wasting a moment got out. Viren stood there watching her enjoying the rain and getting soaked wet. She looked perfect in the white top and denim shorts. She always made him get tempted. He could never get enough of her. His body was now out of his control seeing her. He automatically walked towards her. He turned her towards him and held her by waist. He tucked the hair coming on her face behind her ear. she was loving his touched, the touch that made her go crazy, the touch that made her go out of her senses, the touch she was missing and longing for all this while. She caressed his face. She had tears in her eyes.

"I missed you so much!"

"I missed you more!" He said holding her hand in his.

"No! I missed you more!" She said like a little kid.

"No No No!!! I missed you more! And you have to accept it!"

"No! See! I'm the one who surprised you! So That proves that I missed you more!"

"Huh! Have I ever won in any argument with you?"

Jeevika as her reply pulled him in for a kiss. He wasn't shocked as it was a usual thing for him. Jeevika was not the shy types. Actually, here, she was the one who used to take the first step. she was the one who made him realize his love for her and also, she was the one who had proposed him. She was the one who had kissed him first. She was indeed different than others. And that made Viren love her more and more. The kiss lasted for a long time. How more romantic could it get? He hugged her tight, not wanting to let her go. This action of his showed how much he had missed her all these days. Their romantic moment was disturbed by Viren's phone. They quickly parted. It was Manvi's call. How much Viren regretted of telling about Jeevika's arrival to Manvi! But it was important this time. He was told to bring Jeevika back, as all the preparations were done now. So they got back in the car and drove back home. They soon reached home. Jeevika was fallen asleep by then. She was indeed very tired, but she felt absolutely nothing as long as she was with her love.

"Jeevs! Wake up baby! We're home!"

"2 mins Viren! Don't be so mean!"

"Don't you wanna meet everyone? They're waiting for you!"

Listening to this, she shot up with a big smile on her face. She got out ofthe car before Viren could say anything. She ran up to the door and rang the bell. He followed her, smiling at her antiques. she was pressing the button impatiently. How much she wanted to meet her mum, dad and di and congratulate her! At last the door opened. There was darkness everywhere. Suddenly, the lights went on and she could see all her friends and family screaming "Surprise!"

She couldn't stop her tears. She was smiling as well as crying. Viren came by her side and held her hand. She looked at him. He then wiped her tears and gave a smile.

"It was just 2 months! And you guys did so much?" She ran to her mom and dad and hugged them.

"Aww dear! It was the first time you went so far from us. And for so long! We missed you so much!" Her dad said, caressing her hair.

"I love you all!" She said overjoyed. She had the best family, friends, boyfriend ever.

"Now stop crying you! Common, here! You forgot your Di!" Manvi said, extending her hands for a hug.

Jeevika went to her and hugged her tight.

"Congrats di! So happy for you!"

"Aww! Thank you so much my cutie sweetie pie!!"

"By the way, Di, what did you plan about your honeymoon?" She said teasingly.

"You! Will you ever stop teasing me? Idiot!"

"Lol! Where's Jiju?"

"There." She said, pointing towards Virat.

"I missed you Jiju!" She said while side hugging Virat.

"I missed you too my Sali madam!"

Viren couldn't help smiling seeing Jeevika so happy and excited. She kept taking glances of him as she met her friends and others. Viren wanted to talk to her badly. He at last decided to steal her from others. Yeah! steal her. he went to her and dragged her to a room.

"Jeevs! How dare you forget me!"

"Excuse me Mr. Vadhera! Stop blaming me! I know you're jealous that everyone is talking to me and no one is even looking at you! Ha Ha Ha!" She smiled evilly!

"Is that so? Than why were you looking at me while I was with your friends? Got any answer now?"

"I was... Ummm.. What do you got to do with it? huh! My eyes! I can see whatever i want!"

"uhuh! Now be ready to face the consequences!" He said coming closer to her.

"Viren!" She looked straight into his eyes, biting her lips.

"Yes!" He said coming more closer.

"I'm too fast for you!" She said and ran away.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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ressy...
Unressy...
YAY!!!!!!! Me first...
What a romantic update Guruji!!!!!!!☺️
I seriously luv this Jeevika 😆
The hug n kiss awww...
Cont soon its awesome...👏
Edited by cutevirika - 12 years ago

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