Virika FF: Written in my heart (Chp 8 pg 56)

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mariarauf48

@mariarauf48

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

lalala

basically i am the first one to unres so party yayyy
OMG i m in love with this story
it was so perfect
jeevika drenching in rain
her behaviour lile a kid
viten admiring her awww
the kiss n hugg was like oolalalala
heevika fall asleep but the surprise
poor viren was jealous ahaha
lived how he dragged her :-P
kudding me jeevika proposed him kissed him.wohooo
i love jeevika n i love you for updating

Edited by mariarauf48 - 12 years ago

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drishti112

@drishti112

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Brilliant !!!
Truely amazing..
Long rive den rain and den surprise and den ending...all was just perfect!!! ❤️
Sooo adorable!
Wowww...loved it...
Its awesome...
The hug! The kisss...haaayeee...it was just fantastic !!!!
Update soonest! 😊

Edited by drishti112 - 12 years ago

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millee18

@millee18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

thxxx alot yammie...finally u updated!!!!!!
was waiting fr it...
the update is really awsome blossom...
luved viren nd jeevika!!!!!
the way they luv each other is amazing...
family part was really nice...
cont sooon!!!!!
cant wait..

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Charu

@-Charu-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

#unres

Thank You so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so much Girlfriend, for writing this for me today, despite having a test tomorrow, despite having it a physics one, and despite knowing that you would fail as you don't know a single thing!! 🤗

This makes me feel so special, thanks to you ❤️

This is story is one of my fav even though its been only 2 days since you started it..

This story indeed feels so special and unique, it makes yu read it again again and all over again.. ☺️

Now coming back to the update:

I like how Virika long songs and the rain.. ☺️

Ekkss So romantic 😳

Jeevika is very much bold in this story and this is fresh to read ❤️

"No No No! not today! We'll play in the rain, later!"

"Are you stopping or i jump out of the window?"

"Ohkay! Jump! I'm fine with it!" he said with a a naughty smirk

"Viren! i won't talk to you!"

"Ohkay Ohkay! Stop blackmailing!"

I love how she blackmailed him 😆 And he indeed gave up on her, coz he knew he can never win 🤣

So cuteee ❤️ (Writing E so many times to show how I'm speaking it right now) 😆

I loved the way Jeevika tempted Viren, as always 😉 And it was difficult for him to control his feelings 😆 It is ovious! 😉 🤣

"I missed you so much!"

"I missed you more!" He said holding her hand in his.

"No! I missed you more!" She said like a little kid.

"No No No!!! I missed you more! And you have to accept it!"

"No! See! I'm the one who surprised you! So That proves that I missed you more!"

"Huh! Have I ever won in any argument with you?"

Their cute, cuter, cutest antics make this story more and more special ❤️

I love this part on how they are fighting on who missed the other more 😆

This reminds me of me and Karina, we fight on who loves the other more 🤣

And the very so bold and beautiful step she took and kissed him! ☺️

WOW!! 👏

My Girlfriend, you write so very well..

Hatss off 👏

And the excitment she had to meet her family

She's so adorable ❤️

"Excuse me Mr. Vadhera! Stop blaming me! I know you're jealous that everyone is talking to me and no one is even looking at you! Ha Ha Ha!" She smiled evilly!

"Is that so? Than why were you looking at me while I was with your friends? Got any answer now?"

"I was... Ummm.. What do you got to do with it? huh! My eyes! I can see whatever i want!"

"uhuh! Now be ready to face the consequences!" He said coming closer to her.

"Viren!" She looked straight into his eyes, biting her lips.

"Yes!" He said coming more closer.

"I'm too fast for you!" She said and ran away.

omggg

This is the show stealer!

I'm blushing after reading the update!

Dude, after this update, i'm gonna bug you more and more and more for the updates!

So be ready, after your give ur test tomm 😉

Thanks for updating and pm

And continue soon

P.S. I LOVE YOU ❤️

Edited by Charucrazy - 12 years ago

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nani2630

@nani2630

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Beautiful
Virika are so much in love
I love Jeevika's character
Its so weird reading Jeevika calling Manvi Di
Im loving the story
Thanks for pm babe and update soon

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Mehak

@MehakGera

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

omg😡

yummy luk how late i am

nxxt time i want to b d first one...

dis update made my day...

n dis ff makin me luv it more n more

luvd deir romance so much...

each n every bit of it was superb

Listening old songs while on a long drive in rain, perfect! Jeevika loved rains, and so did Viren. Viren didnt actually loved rains, he loved when Jeevika's romantic mode used to turn on after getting drenched up in the rain. he loved to see how Jeevika behaved like a kid after seeing rain. Viren turned to see Jeevika putting her hand out of window and enjoying the rain. The smile on her lips and the glow in her eyes was die for. She saw him staring her and smiled at him.

"Love you Viren!"

"I love you too!"

"Viren, Please stop the car now! I wanna enjoy the rain!"

"No No No! not today! We'll play in the rain, later!"

"Are you stopping or i jump out of the window?"

"Ohkay! Jump! I'm fine with it!" he said with a a naughty smirk

"Viren! i won't talk to you!"

"Ohkay Ohkay! Stop blackmailing!"

aww d way u potrayed everthing made me blush...

dis was sumthing out of d world...

aww jeevs luv to play in rain

He parked the car on the side. It was only them on the road, with the trees and the breeze which was like a cherry on the cake. Jeevika without wasting a moment got out. Viren stood there watching her enjoying the rain and getting soaked wet. She looked perfect in the white top and denim shorts. She always made him get tempted. He could never get enough of her. His body was now out of his control seeing her. He automatically walked towards her. He turned her towards him and held her by waist. He tucked the hair coming on her face behind her ear. she was loving his touched, the touch that made her go crazy, the touch that made her go out of her senses, the touch she was missing and longing for all this while. She caressed his face. She had tears in her eyes.

wow...

just superb...

m speechless...

dis rain romance is just 😳

dis is d best part

"I missed you so much!"

"I missed you more!" He said holding her hand in his.

"No! I missed you more!" She said like a little kid.

"No No No!!! I missed you more! And you have to accept it!"

"No! See! I'm the one who surprised you! So That proves that I missed you more!"

"Huh! Have I ever won in any argument with you?"

Jeevika as her reply pulled him in for a kiss. He wasn't shocked as it was a usual thing for him. Jeevika was not the shy types. Actually, here, she was the one who used to take the first step. she was the one who made him realize his love for her and also, she was the one who had proposed him. She was the one who had kissed him first. She was indeed different than others. And that made Viren love her more and more. The kiss lasted for a long time. How more romantic could it get? He hugged her tight, not wanting to let her go. This action of his showed how much he had missed her all these days. Their romantic moment was disturbed by Viren's phone. They quickly parted. It was Manvi's call. How much Viren regretted of telling about Jeevika's arrival to Manvi! But it was important this time. He was told to bring Jeevika back, as all the preparations were done now. So they got back in the car and drove back home. They soon reached home. Jeevika was fallen asleep by then. She was indeed very tired, but she felt absolutely nothing as long as she was with her love.

"Jeevs! Wake up baby! We're home!"

"2 mins Viren! Don't be so mean!"

dey r so cute togder

just luv it so so much...

deir luv is sumthing out of d world

update asap yummy...

really waiting to read more

Edited by mehakLUVSvirika - 12 years ago

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kk.princess

@kk.princess

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

res...

nice update...

jeevika not shy type ...

she propose viern...'

cont soon...

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TeriMaaa

@TeriMaaa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

part 1
sorry for late comment
it was awsome
i love the concept
aww virika <3 <3

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TeriMaaa

@TeriMaaa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

part 2
aayee hayy e
rain <3
kiss <3
omg jeevs is too different !! lol
i love it
cant wait
continue soon

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..Amrita..

@..Amrita..

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

WOW !!!
Totally virikalicious update !!!!
Loved that rain sequence...Jeevs is so bold that she takes the 1st step...nice yr !!!
Loved the way her family greeted her...Adore their bonding !!!
Last part was so nice...really jeevs is too fast for viren...Hahahahaha !!!
Awesome update...vry well written...Loved i...Nxt prt updt soon !

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