ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 2 [Completed] - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing end...perfect revenge for shukla againt an enigma called khushi of ur story
there could not be any better punishment for khushi now...take a bow man...only u can think so out of the box
shukla had the final closure...awesome
thanq for such an amazing piece of work
plzzs continue with ur stories
and now plzzz plzzz concentrate on Cult also..plzzz..pretty plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
For writing this story. That is all I have to say.
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This reminds me of a discussion I had with my father. Dad said that there was no way to stop thoughts from entering the mind. All we have to do it to refuse having an argument with them. the thought will come and the thought will go.
Can we apply this theory here, in a slightly different context?
Take a bow, RB
Edited by V323 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a revenge.
Wow.
Amazingly written.
Well done.
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW RB!!! This story of your's kept me glued to it till the last word...Hats off👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 21:
I don't know what should I think???😕
I'm hell confused...

You must be thinking I'm a fool...but I'm not...I'm just hell surprised...by the description of the events!!!
It was so cruel...no that is not the word...stupid of Khushi...to do that to one person!!!
Tara seems to be the game planner...the actual juvenile...she is unbelievable...and a fantastic game-planner...but I'm shocked because...Tara planned all this...but I don't know...what is the actual reason behind this...her jealousy!!!!.....but if she is dead...then all this led her to graveyard!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW!!! Khushi won yet she lost everything!! Tara IS a player!! Both sisters amaze me!!
This is the best ff i hav ever read. Thanks RB for this amazing ff :)
This ff reminds me of the movie ORPHAN. I feel a strange kind of pain reading this ff. I can understand what n why shukla did! I can understand payal n shyam also. Tara wanted to repent. Thats also understandable
But khushi is an enigma. I cant say anything abt her. I m also confused abt arnav. This ff left me spellbound ;)

Can we get a epilog plzzz!! I badly wanna read epilog :/
RB u r awsome :D
Edited by -HEAVEN- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update RB. Thanks for the pm and waiting for waves and particles!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Enjoyed it to the hilt.
The story made my mind go overboard with predictions but your very next update squashed them all.
Tara planned her own murder to trap Khushi ! This is kind of ridiculous. Both of the sister's got so much involved in the game that they lost touch with sanity.

Edited by harsha.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Check Mate! Victory and all the elaborate planning did not come with the sweet feeling that she was expecting. Yes, she feeds on the busy thoughts conjured up by her crazy mind that craves to have the upper hand in all situations. She has this need to always be the one in control as that is how she wins,by having the last say. Not this time though as finally someone had dared to say enough to her and ended the game. So even if she has her plan B, there is no one to play with. I am almost scare at what she can do next with the people in the asylum. Is she going to start a new game? She is f***** up for sure and one almost feel sorry for this monster but not quite. Tara may have started it but she perfected it. Maybe Tara knew there was no way out of the game she played with Kushi but to die. Like I said before, they are all monsters to participate in this.

I am kinda sad this is over as I liked the mind simulation it provided even though I was wrong every single time. In a way, you played with our mind too! Go get your work published girl as this is what brilliant authors do, they stimulate their readers not just please them!
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Posted: 12 years ago
So this was an elaborate plan to trap Khushi in a Labyrinth.
Shukla's brainchild was excellent. But Khushi's overrated intellect ruined it all.

Tara.
Was she even real? It's quite hard to believe that she allowed the Punisher to kill her.

Finally Shukla was at peace and did the most appropriate thing of making Khushi's ego starve which used to feed on her "superior intellect".

Thanks for the PM.
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago

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