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Posted: 12 years ago
Speechless!! I come each time prepared for anything and everything, and yet you manage to shock the hell out of me. Tara??? Wow! It's just impossible to figure who is playing whom. All the players now seem to have been played themselves. Their sense of morality seems equally twisted though-Tara's plan, Khushi's improvisations and this whole revenge plan. More than sanity it raises questions about what is morality to a person. The revenge/"justice" plan is as insane as their twisted game. Though now that it all seems Tara's doing, it may be another thing altogether. So I shall cease my useless speculations.

I just can't get over how you can possibly come up with such sheer brilliance. So fascinated! Can't wait for the rest.

Thanks so much. And extra thanks for being so quick with the updates!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh man. TARA has the last dig and say in this play...

You got me there RB. Exceptionally written, and depicted. I definitely gasped at the last sentence.
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Posted: 12 years ago
.. And I was thinking that only Akaash's family suffered the most.

It is so, so sad to read how the innocent members of the Shukla family got destroyed just because of a sick joke.

Tara is Evil personified. She has got no sense of right or wrong. And she can't be loyal to anyone- inspite of Khushi being her partner in crime, she double-crossed Khushi.

Thanks for the PM.
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi and Tara are a match made in hell.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thts interesting...
loved it...
thnks for the Pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I always said it and ill say it again.

I hope and pray one day your stories will be published and that day I will say that I always knew it.
I knew she will make it big. You are the best.

Such a gripping story with such twists and turns.
Bravo!
You surprise me with every update.
When I think I am beginning to get the grip of the story, you get me with another twist.
A brilliant piece of work.
Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb and brilliant update, simply phenomenal.

Honestly you are a brilliant writer, how do you manage to write so brilliantly, as a reader I just want to read more.

So tara was behind all the planning and making Khushi seduce shukla's brother,

Loved the update, a brilliant read.

Eagerly waiting to read the next part,

Continue soon please and thanks for the PM xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
You are a genuis RB ..truly are !👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg tara ...didn't see this coming a fabulous update...looking forward to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow fabulous update.. Everyone was played by someone, superb yaar! Hats off to your creativity 👏

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