TAREY OS - This was my day... - Page 2

Originally posted by: toshi_ta

resss!!!

unress...😃

u wrote a TaaRey oneshot for us!!?!! i am so surprised!!

it was so very brilliant yaar!! loved your gift🤗 🤗but to be precise it was your birthday and those wishes were meant to be for you ashu... so i loved this return gift by you..😳

i am still so surprised!! a taarey os that too such a beautiful and amazingly written! great job dear!!👏

now coming to the OS... fantastic...

hahaha swayam se puch ke aya rey pipe se... and waah kya adventure tha pipe se neeche utarna.. and rey's reason that swayam might change his mind.. protective brother swayam.. so love it... 😃 😆

taani felt like a monkey or a gorilla...😆 coudnt stop laughing at it.. she is so cute yaar...

at the paani puri stall... taarey were so adorable... taani ne dhoke se khilaya.. 😃

how beautifully you described the venue... very charming imagination... you sent me to taarey dreamland.. taarey watching movie and so romantic one...

the rain sequence was terrific... 😳 awww... just top of the world... aaye haaaye... what a proposal yaar... 😳 still drooling over taarey...

phirse pipe se chadke gaye!!! swayam aane se thodi rokega...😆 and the last part... uff they are so adorable ... ❤️

brilliant writing ashu.. and just cant imagine kitni mehnat lagi hogi... so a big tight bone crushing hug for this amazing work.. 🤗 🤗love you a lot.. and once again our dearest and hearty wishes for you.. 😎

Originally posted by: tanha29

Vodka.. I'm really very upset with you! SwaRon OS post karne ke liye itna time and TR OS itna jaldi post kiya! 😕 And above all of it, you kept your word. 😲 😲

Res. :P

Originally posted by: tarey_forever

di it was super good!!! 👏

haaye... m in taarey dreamland now!!!

awesome man!!!👍🏼

di aapko toh na writter hona chahiya!!!😉

loved it n love u!!!🤗

keep smiling!!!😊

Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

This was really really Nice !!
A Whole Different Situation to read which I thoroughly enjoyed
I understand how difficult it must have been to write this ... Thank You !

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

Res <3 <3

I'll unres this comment once I come back from tution!

P.S.: I totally love you for this Aish! 🤗

-Edited- ( i'm gonna use my bandars here 😆)

something i love...

Okay. So lets start from the top. Jab tune mujhe pehle bola, Ki mujhe ek TR OS likhna hai.. I was like.. this.. Or may be like.. this.. 😆

Tera reaction bahut EPIC tha! i still remember it 😆

And jab tune mujhe yeh idea bataya and yeh bataya ki isme KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI TYPES RAIN DANCE HOGA.. I WAS LIKE.. I always wanted to see and Read that dance between TR.. padhne ko mill gaya Ab bas dekhna baaki hai.. khair imagine toh kar hi chuki hun..

aur iss dance ki toh band hi baja daali maine!

Uff now coming back to the OS.. 😆 Gawdd!! And you say that you suck at writing?!! Gosh Aish!! Firstly, I know its difficult for a non- someone fan has great difficulty in writing a story about them! agar mujhse koi bole ki main SS OS likhu toh trust me I won't be able to do it! But hats off to you girl!! I mean.. yeh attempt karna hi bohot bohot badi baat hai!!😳

thank you ,thank you, thank you * with a bow* 😳

On top of that, You wrote it flawlessly! I mean, LOVED reading taani's POV!! Tune Swayam ko ghusaya.. 🤣

i did remember ure words. maine sucha uske ek call bhi daal dun. bt fir mujhe tujhse maar nahin khaani thi😆

Really loved it when rey siad ki woh Swayam se pooch ke aaya hai.. Really loved that part when taani ke dimaag me questions ghum rhe the regarding swayam's convo with Rey.,.

Loved Rain-cofee-cookie and taani part!! the way you described is seriosuly AWESOME!! And you exactly understood how taani would feel when rey proposed her.. Haye!!

i did? yeahhh finally i achieved my goal!! 😆

Then the way you described the place.. gazebo with projector and stuff.. beautiful!! and that pani puri part was even more amazing!! i could imagine both rey's and taani's expressions so so well!!

thank you again!

DDJL part.. SRK..Haye!! SRK ki love stories.. DDLJ is one of my fave with kkhh and mohabbattein and many many more.. and that part when taani thought about her and rey nok jhoks and Rey too thot the same! and theat popcorn part was so so so cute!!

i know there the story became a little rushed up. i realized dat wen i read it after i posted it. i think i could have slowed it down or describe it more. so tu wo bol sakti thi. nywayz im glad u liked it

Uff Aish!! I can't tell you how much I loved it.. And what made it more special was that ek SS fan ne hum TR fans ke liye yeh likha hai.. Love you for that!! Awesome work re!!

thank you sooo much :D

And lastly, please thanks mat bol help ke liye!! Tune humare liye yeh likha uske liye tujhe thanks!! And yeh tu mujhe dedicate karna chahti thi? Aww.. love you re!! 😳 Thankyou so much for dedicating this to all ur TR friends!! ( I hope including me 🤣)

ofcourse it incudes you dumbo😆 ! and luv u 2 re 😳

Really really loved it!! And haa. Sorry for this so much lambu comment.. I couldn't help it!!

dnt be srry i loved ure lambu comment 😃

And haa... keep writing more on TR! 😆😆

well abhi ka pata nahin. agar vapas aisa time aaye toh maybe 😳

oh I forgot.. Really loved taani utaring from pipe wala part.. i've been imagining it from quite a long time.. 😆

really?

love every every bit of it!! Muuuahh! Love you for this!! 🤗 Thankyou so much!! 😳

y thank you? well i should say thank you soo much for the help. and also the lambu a comment. love u for this 🤗