TaaRey OS Ranjhanna [dare completed]

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guyzz ... I am here with a dared OS ... I was dared by Angel ...

I angel( angel-luvs-s) being a dare-devil,

give a Dare to -fam_taarey-

on the song ranjhanna hua Tera from the movie ranjhanna

which shall include taarey and swaron(optional)

Situation: anything but it must include love at first sight and shouldn't be connected to d3 at all

Hope you all will like this OS ... Plz ignore all the mistakes as its my first OS ... Enjoy reading ... Thanks Angel for this dare ... I enjoyed writing it ...






Rey and Swayam are best friends and Taani and Sharon are best friends ...Taani and Rey are unknown to each other ... Both of them were on a beach and enjoying there with their friends ...


With Rey and his Friends
Rey's friends were talking when his friend said to him :
Varun:Rey what do you think about love ? I mean what is love in your sight ?? Do you believe in love at first sight or anything else ??
All his friends were looking at Rey for his answer ...
Rey smiled lightly and replied him :
Rey:Love toh love hota hai jo kabhi bhi kahin bhi kisi se bhi hojata hai ... Pyaar to woh hai k kisi ki aankhon mein khoye rehne ka mann karay ... Jab aap apne pyaar ko kisi or k saath na dekh sako , that's love ... And ya I believe in love at first sight ...
Everyone was impressed by his thoughts ...



With Taani and her friends ...

Sharon asked Taani the same question which Varun asked Rey :
Sharon:Taani what do you think about love ?
Taani replied :
Taani:I believe in love at first sight ... Jiske liyay aap kuch bhi kerne ko tayyar (prepare) raho ... Yeh pyaar hai ... Jiski saath aap har pal rehna chaaho , yeh pyaar hai ... Jis k saath aap protective feel karo , yeh pyaar hai ...
Everyone (her friends) were listening her very carefully ... She saw their faces and diverted the topic ...

Now Taani and her friends were walking from one side of the beach and Rey and his friends were walking from the other side ... Taani collided with a hard muscular body and she was about to fall when someone held her by her waist protectively ...



She held his shirt tightly and closed her eyes in fear ... It was Rey who saved her from falling ... When he held her , she felt protected ... She felt like she is in the most safest place in the world ... She slowly opened her eyes and she got lost in those chocolaty brown eyes ...



Both of them were lost in each other ... They felt like the world has stopped around them ... Both of them were feeling an ocean of love in each other's eyes ... They wanted to be like this forever ... But they came back from their trance when their friends reached to them ... They were smiling seeing the scene in front of them ... They can feel some connection between them ... But they broke their eye contact ...
Sharon said :
Sharon:Taani are you okay ???
Rey made her stand properly and asked her whether she is okay or not ... She nodded her head in yes ...
Taani said :
Taani:Thanx for saving me Mr.Ajnabi ...
He curved his brows listening his new name Mr.Ajnabi ... But unknowing his lips curved in a sweet and pleasant smile ... Both of them were having different kind of feelings ... They were feeling something different ... They couldn't understand their feelings ...

Purvi (Taani's friend) said :
Purvi: Lets go Taani ... We should go now ...
But Rey and Taani didn't wanted to leave each other ... They wanted to be with each other ... To held each other's hand ... But they have to leave each other ... Both of their friends dragged them but they stopped at a distance ...


Rey and his friends
Rey stopped and was lost in his thoughts ... Swayam came to him and said :
Swayam:Kya hua Rey ?? Ruk kyun gaya ?
Rey said :
Rey:Pata nahi kyun Swayam , when she was with me , I felt completed ... I wanted to get lost in her eyes forever ... I wanted to hold her ... I don't know why but I just wanted to be with her ... I felt like I was craving for this feeling for a long time and now I felt it ...
Swayam and his gang smiled at this and Swayam replied to him :
Swayam:I think you got your dream girl ... Tujhay pyaar hogaya hai usse ...
Rey replied him with a confusion on his face :
Rey:Yaar main toh uska naam tak nahi jaanta and pyaar ... No ways ... !!
Swayam:Rey ... This is called Love at first sight ... And her name is Taani ... Don't you listen her friends were calling her Taani ...
A smile appeared on his face listening her name ...
They all smiled ... Rey understood that he is in love ... His eyes were sparkling with happiness ... He was feeling love for the first time ...



Here with Taani

She also stopped while walking ... Her friends reached up to her and asked her why she stopped ?
She replied :
Taani:I don't know but I am feeling something different after meeting him ... Pata nahi kyun mera mann kerraha tha k main bas unki aankhon mein khoye rahoon ... Unki baahon mein rahoon ... I wanted to be with him ... I felt protected in his arms ...
All the girls smiled and Sharon replied her :
Sharon:You are in love Taani ...
Taani:How can I be in love with a guy whom I don't know ... I even don't know his name ...
Sharon:Tum hi toh keh rahi thin na k jis k saath hum protective feel karein wohi pyaar hota hai .. And see , you were feeling protected with him ...
Taani:Is it really love Sharon ??

Sharon:Yes Taani ... You are in love ...
Taani started jumping in joy ...
Taani said while jumping :
Taani:Yes I am in love with my Mr.Ajnabi ... I got my Prince Charming ...
They all smiled looking her happiness ... They were enjoying when Taani's cell ranged and she came to some secluded place ... She finished her conversation and turned ... She found some goons standing there ... The goons came towards Taani and tried to misbehave with her ... One of the guy said :


Guy:I never saw a hot chick like you ... I would love to date you ...
Guy 2:Stop it ... She is your bhabhi ... Don't even try to look at her ...
Taani was getting irritated and she slapped one of the guy really hard ...
That was the limit for them ... One of the guy hold her hand tightly and started moving towards her ... He was trying to kiss her ... Taani was trying hard to maintain a distance but his grip was getting hard on her wrist ... But someone hold the guy's collar and beat him hard ... He was Rey who was beating them hard ... He punched a guy and he ran away ... Then he kicked the another one ... He beat them badly ... All the guys were lying on the wet sand ... He was about to kick them but Taani held his hand and said :
Taani:No Mr.Ajnabi ... Already bohot maara hai aapne in logon ko ... Ab or nahi ...
The goons ran away and now only Rey and Taani were left there ...
Rey said :
Rey:Taani tumhein yahan akele aane ki kiya zaroorat thi ?? You know na k beech pe aise goons hote hain ... Agar main sahi waqt pe nahi aata toh kuch bhi hosakta tha tumhare saath ...
He said all this angrily ... More than anger , his voice was reflecting fear ... Fear of loosing his love ...
Taani said with full attitude as she wanted to check that he loves her or not :
Taani:Who are you Mr.Ajnabi ?? Who am I for you ... Why do you care so much ??
All of their friends reached there and were about to call them but they stopped themselves from uttering a single word ...
Rey held her from her shoulders tightly ... He said :
Rey:Because I love Love You ... I fell for you Taani ... I fell for you when I saw you first ...

Taani's eyes widened ... She couldn't believe her ears ... She thought that she was dreaming ... But that was the most beautiful truth of her life ... Her PC (prince charming) was confessing his love for her ...
Rey waited for her answer but after not getting an answer from her .. He thought that she don't love him ... He leaved her shoulders and was about to go when he saw his friends and Taani's friends standing there with shocked expressions on their faces ... Taani's friends walked towards her and stood by her side ... Rey's friends also walked to him and they turned to the girls ... The boys hugged Rey and Karan (Rey's frnd) said to him :
Karan:Finally you confessed Rey ... But Taani ne abhi tak koi answer nahi diya ??
Priya(Taani's friend) said :
Priya:Itni aasani se nahi ...
They all saw her with confusion on their faces ...She continued:
Priya:Rey ... You have to propose her in front of all ...
All were shocked with her demand ... Even her friends and Taani were shocked ... They never expected this ... But Sharon supported her and said :
Sharon:It's a condition ... Taani will only answer you when you will confess your love in from of all ... So challenge accepted or not ?
Rey thought for a while and said :
Rey:Challenge accepted ... But I need some time ...
All the girls nodded and moved from there ..
All boys were shocked but they knew that their friend is very smart ... All of them moved towards the beech area where the crowd was present ... They were waiting for Rey to confess ... It had been 1 hour since he left ... But there was no sign of him ... Taani was getting anxious by each passing second ... They were chit chatting when they hear someone singing ... They saw Rey and his friends dancing ... And Rey was singing ... The song started :



Aaja aaja dil ke gaaon
Raahein dekhe koi
Jaagegi phir kismat sohne
Jaagegi phir kismat sohne
Thi ab tak jo soyi...

They were doing some hip hop steps ... A smile formed on Taani's face after seeing him ... He was confession in a unique way ...

Hua chaaron ore shehnaai shor
Tu meri ore chal nikla
Chadhi prem lor, O dil ke chor
Kar meri bhor, ab mukh dikhla


He walked to her and stood in front of her ... They shared an eye lock ...

Raanjhanaa hua main tera
Kaun tere bin mera
Rounaqein tumhi se meri
Kaun tere bin mera
Tera hai chaar chuphera
Kaun tere bin mera
O.. kaun tere bin mera


He was doing some steps with his hands ... All the crowd was enjoying it ...

Hua chaaron ore shehnaai shor
Tu meri ore ab chal nikla
Chadhi prem lor, O dil ke chor
Kar meri bhor, ab mukh dikhla


He did some contemporary steps ...

Tan thirke thirke
Man behke behke
Tera kehke kehke khudko
Mere dil ki baat jaane qaaynaat
Tere dil ki khabar bas mujhko (x2)

He gestures her that he is waiting for her answer ... She blushed by this ...

Aaana baatein pyaar ki laana
Aana thoda pyaar jataana
Raanjhanaa hua main tera...
Kaun tere bin mera
O.. kaun tere bin mera


She turned her face to other side and started walking along the coast of the sea ... She was feeling each and every moment ...

Rang bikhra bikhra
Sab nikhra nikhra
Jaayein jidhar jidhar ye naina
Mujhe khud pe naaz
Hua pagla aaj

Raha apne hi bas hoon main naa (x2)

He was following her ... But she was showing attitude ... He was the great Reyaansh Singhania ... He is not going to give up ...

Aana mujhe bas kar lena
Aana jaa has kar lena


He chased her and twirl her in the air ... He put her down and she started moving but he hold her by her wrist and pulled her towards him ... She came crashing his chest ... He wrapped his hands around her waist but she removed his hands and ran away ... He smiled at her action and rubbed his hand in his hairs ... She was blushing badly ...



Hua chaaron ore shehnaai shor
Tu meri ore chal nikla
Chadhi prem lor, O dil ke chor
Kar meri bhor, ab mukh dikhla


He again started dancing with his friends ... Taani and her friends were standing their with full tashan ... But she melted after seeing his puppy face and an innocent expression on his face ...

Raanjhanaa hua main tera
Kaun tere bin mera
Rounaqein tumhi se meri
Kaun tere bin mera
Tera hai chaar chuphera
O.. kaun tere bin mera


He again did some hip hop steps ... She was smiling whole heartily ... She was feeling each and every moment ...

Hua chaaron ore shehnaai shor
Tu meri ore chal nikla
Chadhi prem lor, O dil ke chor
Kar meri bhor, ab mukh dikhla..


They ended the song and Taani turned to him but she found him nowhere ... Her eyes were searching him ... But she found him kneeling in front of her ... He was facing the ground ... He slowly moved his head upwards ... She was smiling ... He took out a beautiful diamond ring from his pocket and said :

Rey:This ring is my promise
To always be true
This ring is my vow
To always love you
Forever with you
Is my greatest dream
So please say Yes
We will be a team
I love you Taani .. .Will you be mine forever ??


He first offer her a bouquet of roses and she accepted it ...
Tears of happiness formed in her eyes ... Her Prince Charming loved her so much ...
One of a guy from the crowd said her that say yes ... Slowly all the peoples were requesting her to accept his proposal ... She forward her hand and said :
Taani:I love you too my Mr.Ajnabi ... And I would love to be your better half ...
The crowd cheered loudly ...
He slid the ring in her ring finger and they hugged each other ... Promising each other that they will never leave each other's hand ... They touched their foreheads ... They were laughing hysterically ... There were tears in their eyes ... They both wiped each other's tears ... He kissed her forehead and they promised each other that they would never leave each other in any phase of life ... They will support each other in every part of their lives ...
They promised each other that they will led their life as two bodies and one soul ... They were together now till death ... It was a beginning of their new life ...



The End

All rotten tomatoes and eggs are welcome ... Angel hope you liked it ... I tried hard to make it up to your expectations ... Guyzz plz like it and comment ... I wrote it in a very bad mood so plz adjust with it ...
Edited by -Fam_TaaReY- - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res/Unres
Yayeee m first...*dancing*
Hayeee love at first sight wow...Uff They are so damn adorable yaar...
Ranjhaana perfect song...!!! Dhishum dhisum was superb...!!!
Agar aise hi beach pe Prince Charming milte he toh hea I run coz mujhe bhi chahiye 😉 Anyways superb os loved it...Keep writing nd do update yua TaaRey after marraige coz m waiting foe it...😊
Love:
Ale_TaaRey 😊 😃
Edited by Ale_TaaRey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ale_TaaRey

Res/Unres
Yayeee m first...*dancing*
Hayeee love at first sight wow...Uff They are so damn adorable yaar...
Ranjhaana perfect song...!!! Dhishum dhisum was superb...!!!
Agar aise hi beach pe Prince Charming milte he toh hea I run coz mujhe bhi chahiye 😉 Anyways superb os loved it...Keep writing nd do update yua TaaRey after marraige coz m waiting foe it...😊
Love:
Ale_TaaRey 😊 😃

thanks 😆 😆will update it soon 😊😊 thanks for liking it 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh my it was such a cute os but ye kya end tak taani ko rey ka naam pata nahi chala! lolz! mujhe laga last me rey apna naam bata dega but he didn't! lagta hai zindagi bhar taani use mr ajnabi bulaayegi!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: adi.cutiepie

oh my it was such a cute os but ye kya end tak taani ko rey ka naam pata nahi chala! lolz! mujhe laga last me rey apna naam bata dega but he didn't! lagta hai zindagi bhar taani use mr ajnabi bulaayegi!😆

obviously pata chal gaya yaar as his frnds were calling him Rey 😆😆 isliyay maine itna deeply nahi likha 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww This was really sweet and cute !! But Taani did not know Rey's name in the end ? Anyways I really liked the "love at first sight" concept ... It was really nice ... And I loved how you started it on their opinions on love and love at first sight ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Fam_TaaReY-

thanks😆😆will update it soon😊😊thanks for liking it😊😊


Well I be waiting till then 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

Aww This was really sweet and cute !! But Taani did not know Rey's name in the end ? Anyways I really liked the "love at first sight" concept ... It was really nice ... And I loved how you started it on their opinions on love and love at first sight ...

thanx😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ale_TaaRey


Well I be waiting till then 😊

thanx😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love at first sight...it was beautiful 😊
Song selection was just superb!

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