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jeetega

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Posted: 12 years ago

#781

just started with two chapters. I basically started because I liked the title 'Parinay' and totally fell in love with the beautiful image of 'mehndi hands', that is perfect with the title and concept.

after reading two chapters, I'm eagerly waiting to read the rest since already my curiosity is poked.
:-)

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Teja....

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Posted: 12 years ago

#782

I just caught with this ff and I just have only one word after reading this amazing its exactly dipicted real life situvations and all this is obsolutely amazing I must say

looking forward to read other ff and ss of u rs

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arnavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#783

jst completed parinay. amazing work. the development of charactets with pace of tym is excellently taken and described. its really fab. and must say u are an amazing amazing writing . thanks for putting such a great story for us. 😊 😛 😊

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Liya123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#784

Read the whole story in one go and simply I am in love with the story. U portrayed kushi very differently other then loyal traditional bahu. I like the fact she place her preference first then what other want her to do. For.example, kushi didn't wear saree after the wedding even though nani and anjai insist her. She was very strong and determine to pursue her dream.

Arnav, I just love in him in the story. Even though his family emotionally blackmail him into the marriage but he didn't blame kushi and respects her. He understand that kushi also victim of the arrange marriage as like him.

It was accepted, Arnav feeling s toward Lavanya. I was not accepteing him to forget his love easily. Even though he loved Lavanya but Arnav try to move on with kushi for better.

I learn lot of things from the story. A relationship does take lot of time to sucess. I never knew how arranged marriage affects an individual. How Asian parents forced their kids to choose between love and family. After reading the story, now I think I can feel that may be I could understand other feelins who went through arranged marriage or having struggle in a relationship.

Thank.for writing the amazing story. I must say u are a very talented writer. Thanks to rasugulla_sp for introducing ur fabulous story. I am very excited to read more

Hey sending u buddy request...accept me :-)

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.Melody.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#785

Awesome story and you have written it very well :)

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Jay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#786

Wow...simply superb story. I recently came across this story and this is one of the best story I red. It portrayed human emotions and set backs so well and shows it is our choice to be happy and cherish what we have than repenting about what we lost. I was very tensed while reading chapter 10A thinking is this going to end sad for Kushi but very glad that you ended it on a happy note for all. Good luck for your future works.

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Nikita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#787

Read all the parts in a go.

This seriously was a fantastic FF...👏

Loved the concept , loved the characterization and yeah loved the story.

I'm officially a fan of your writings now..

Beautifully written story it was.

And i specially loved the message of this story..that its always us who makes the choice in life and us who face their repercussions..

Thanks for writing such a beautiful FF.

Loved it !

Edited by Arshi-Nikita123 - 11 years ago

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Sri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#788

It's really wonderful story... I can't even say a correct word to describe how beautiful it is...It's really amazing one... thanks for the fabulous story... thanQ...

Edited by sankadevi_lg - 11 years ago

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mklam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#789

I just read this story and thought you'd done a great job handling this theme. I couldn't accept an unfaithful Arnav easily and am glad that Khushi didn't take things lying done either. He had to earn her respect and her love.

Even at the end when he rushes to Lavanya's rescue and shared the details with Khushi I appluaded his honesty. A lesser man would have skimmed the details but not this new Arnav. When Khushi commented that his moment of realization came when Lavanya was in his arms, I think he had it coming - she has to keep him on his toes! Any woman would have felt that in the situation, and the way Arnav justified his act also was realistic.

Words are so important in a relationship and also when they are said. A flippant "I love you" wouldn't have worked in this case at all after what the two have been through. The different reasons why he loved her was a nice touch.

Bravo!

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MDTharun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#790

All's well that ends well.
Parinay was a wonderful story.
The storyline was unique.It was a story of two people who started off wrong, made dreadful mistakes, changed for,the better and fell in love.
I loved the maturity in the relationship between Arnav and Khushi.Theirs was not an explosive lovestory but a more mature love.
Thank you NB for this wonderful story