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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#761

thiss is jst tooo freaaaking goood..and soo reaal !! keep up the anaaazin wrk :)

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darya20

@darya20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#762

Super i just read this ff ib one go and really loved it sooo mych

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 12 years ago

#763

Just read the whole story and this story has left me awestruck.

Parinay made me realize that not all love stories are made up with a hero and a heroine that fight, make up and eventually fall in love. Or a husband and wife that are brought together in an arranged marriage only to gradually fall in love.

There are some love stories, like this one, where mistakes are made, actions lead to regret and pain and heartbreak eventually leads to companionship and love.

Your characters were shaped fabulously. Khushi was one hell of a woman. Strong, resilient and silently courageous. But then, she also had her own bouts of self doubt and insecurity especially due to her lonely past.

Arnav was so.. real. He was stubborn, selfish and temperamental yet kind, affectionate and caring. His transformation over the 2 years he spent away from Khushi was pleasantly surprising. He was a man repenting and trying to prove himself worthy.

Even Lavanya was a treat. She was just so hard to hate, even though she was the biggest barrier in Arnav and Khushi's relationship. Her dilemma was so understandable and I just couldn't help but sympathize.

This was a truly beautiful piece highlighting the hard work, dedication, and commitment it takes to make a marriage work!

Marvelously done!

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#764

NB,

Your stories have this touch of reality. I know this story because of its natural feelings involved with each characters. Human weakness, emotional blackmails, family pressures, guilt, repentance, a chance to love...a touching heartfelt story!

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Sarita Kaur

@kaur94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#765

Just read all the chapters great story really enjoyed reading it

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Swetha

@Shwetadatta750

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Posted: 12 years ago

#766

I read all the parts in onego. just loves it.

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#767

Beautiful story...once Arnav was humanized.

-Sona

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kvgmatri

@kvgmatri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#768

Hi Naach Basanti ji. I just read the whole story today and absolutely loved it. Very well thought out, real, well written and touching.
All the characters have knowingly and unknowingly made their mistakes, unfortunately affected more people in the run and ended up paying the price for it. That is life!

Thank you for sharing this with us. Look forward to reading your other works...

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Nandz

@Nandz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#769

Oh i simply loved this story. This has become one of my absolute favourites.This is one story where all the characters are flawed, all have their insecurities and weaknesses. In fact all are right and all are wrong in their own ways. U have traced the growth of each n every character so well. I just cant help but draw a comparison between lavanya n khushi. Both had lost their loved ones, face rejection from their love and had to face all the adversities alone, and in all this khushi had emerged far stronger than lavanya.

Its such an amazing story and u are such a wonderful writer. I just love the way u pay attention to minutest of details. Looking fwd to reading your other stories.