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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#751

I just spent the last two days reading this story. Wow, is all I can say. This was such a unique journey, with many highs and lows, twists and turns. Amazing!

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#752

It is 3am and I have been reading this story since late this evening, and I can't recall ever experiencing such turbulant emotions in one story. Ever!

Your narrative is simple and hits the mark. The characters experience such an honest growth, and what I love about this story is that it could be anybodys love story. I cannot imagine having an arranged marriage and never meeting the man, but for him to actually love somebody else would be every girls nightmare, but your Khushi reacted with maturity beyond her 21 years, and she struggled but she survived. Arnavs redemption was perfect, because an honest redemption requires a harsh critical assessment of your character, and Arnavs metamorphosis again feels honest and realistic, as you say he is a man with flaws, but importantly he worked towards rectifying them. And despite everything I found myself respecting him for that. He may not have started out as the perfect husband, but he certainly became the perfect soul mate for Khushi.

Needless to say I loved this story, at times it brought me close to tears and in other instances I swear my heart skipped a few beats in elation!

Finally thank you for such a beautifully written masterpiece

Manreet :)

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karsvinu

@karsvinu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

It was a beautiful story. I loved it thoroughly 😊

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jg12

@jg12

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

You are an amazing writer . Glad that you didn't make Arnav & lavanaya have a one night stand and changed it to the current story.

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

Beautiful story...lovely characters...really this is a terrific story...read the entire story in a day...your writing is magical...wonderful. A big thank you for giving us such a beautiful story. Thanks again

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#756

absolutely loved it ... it was awesome...
we got to see a different arnav a different khushi and a very practical story.. It had all the moments... sometyms i went awww sometyms swooned for arnav and sometyms hated arnav too.. 👏👏 thoroughly enjoyed it. thnks..

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#757

This is amzing n Fantastic story...
Once i found out that it is Complete noe..I started reading it n couldnt stop it even during my exams...Beautiful...I just loved it...