Parinay(4) REMOVED- Note about Blog Pg 130

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#741

Oh god I am sooo glad you didn't go with the original story line, though I'm sure in your hands it would have been written well.

I liked the journey that both Arnav and Khushi took in this shorter, more concise, less messy path. I do think the story was that of Arnav...growing up essentially, of becoming more than the Raizada name that he held so proudly and let go of his love for.

But Khushi also made her own transition I feel, from being fiercely independent, mature, intelligent woman who felt unloved to a woman deeply in love with her husband, who craved his love and wasn't afraid to be vocal about it.

If Arnav had slept with Lavanya, after he and Khushi had started making in-roads in their marriage...well I wouldn't see a way back from that, even if Lavanya was throwing herself at him. It would be betrayal and I would so want Khushi to kick him to the curb. If he slept with Lavanya on the night of the wedding...well it seems worse, but it would also be more understandable. Emotions were running high. However, I don't see Khushi accepting him at all if he had done that.

It was a great ride - thanks for this amazing story Kripa! I miss it already...

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#742

I have my comment for last update in page 99... Not sure if you took a look or not...

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TrueLoveIs4ever

@TrueLoveIs4ever

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#743

Thanks so very much for such a lovely story! I enjoyed reading every chapter. And the quote you ended with really had me thinking. Thanks again!!!!!!!!

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#744

Hey Hi read Parinay the entire story in one go.. it was awesome story.. it was really first time no story of arnav singh raizada but of arnav and not of khushi kumari gupta or khushi singh raizada but khushi.. you have received so many praises for your story but i felt also to mention a point it was truly the best story.. no words can define the kind of feelings i was going through while reading journey of arnav and khushi.. your interlude was most painful.. had tears for both of them.. but ending was good.. liked that nothing happened to lavanya. Arnav and khushi are loving husband and wife after going through all the up and downs in life and finally settling in their lives together.. loved the strong character of khushi but at same time arnav who was ready to accept that he had been a coward and he left everything to become a person whom khushi will love.. i will go on.. but really it was very beautiful story.. loved it.. thanks for giving us such a beautiful story 😃

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#745

Thanks for the note and giving us a lovely.Thanks that you dropped the initial idea and I really don't how I would have taken it after Arnav slept with Lavanya. ….I can feel many emotions throughout the story…very nice closing note NB. Thanks for sharing beautiful SS with us.

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ashwathi18

@ashwathi18

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#746

Brilliant Writing..loved ur story👍🏼

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seema13

@seema13

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#747

it was such a wonderfull journey with ur pariney.all i can say a big thanks to u for writing this beautifull story.each nd every part of this ss i enjoyed a lot.it became a daily rountine of my life to read ur update.but just like every beautifull things has to end so ur 'pariney' journey 'also.come to an end..

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#748

Such a beautiful story loved it. .ths s wat marriage s al about. . ! !
Hope arnie nd khushi gets a baby too as per their dream. .
Thanx fo d story as wel as the pm