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Posted: 12 years ago

#621

Though u made Arnav a hen pecked ...yes dear ...hubby in the end.. But hey that's a good marriage too..

What I loved that there was no false note on Khushis characterization...she was shown to be professional achiever in the beginning and she stayed true..

It is professional suicide for a girl to have a baby in the first 2 years...this I am talking of normal middle class girls... So it made sense for her to wait..

I liked what happened to lavanya but public service is not the answer to all loneliness..but if she's shown happy we feel less guilty..

Thanks for bringing this real and heart warming story..😊

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Happy anniversary .wish lots of love & always be happy

Feel sad that this wonderfull ,brillant SS is ending .. a very cute ending

Thanks for the pm & will conyinue follow your other work

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#623

It is over but it sounds like a beginning for all of them, for La who has found a cause and maybe someone to look forward to, for Anjali as her family is finally reunited, for Payashn with their reconciliation with the family and their new baby on the way and especially for our lovely couple. Even though it is over, it feels right that everything is the way it should be. Here's why I loved this, it was Arnav's redemption and growing into the person that we all knew was there and craved to see, it was a strong mature Kushi who knew how to take the punches and make something for herself instead of lying low and absorbing those punches, it was about strong Payash no spineless characters here but most importantly, it is the way we are in normal life. Thank you for a beautifully thought out and narrated story. Look forward to catching up onCD an your new story . . .happy anniversary!

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#624

A happy ending to a wonderful story...

Khushi..I loved this woman for who she is...she was strong,independent and forgiving ... I'm glad that she gave another chance to their relationship..Though at times I did feel that she was behaving irrationally by not trusting Arnav regarding Lavanya...Also I kind a felt weird when she did not like the fact that A realized his feelings for K when he was with la...but all is well at the end 😊

I loved this Arnav ..In the intial chapters I hated him for his cowardliness /selfishness and two women had to suffer because of that...There was a time when I din't want Khushi and la to forgive him but you changed my view completely in the last few chapters...I loved the way he transformed himself for Khushi and proved to the world he is indeed suitable for Khushi...The only thing which left me disturbed at the end was that Arnav was trying to ignore his dreams/desire so that Khushi will not be upset...coz when he was disappointed with the result turning negative .he did not voice it out and I'm think he would have not discussed it if Khushi had not spoken out about his disappointment...

Lavanya..I am so glad that u did not turn her into a typical vamp...I actually felt bad for her the most...so i was so happy to read about her in the first part in this update..I hope she gets someone who will love her and stand for her..

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Manisha.

@Manisha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#625

Happy wedding anniversary Kripa...

Comments a little later...

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#626

Loved the ending...you gave Lavanya hope, a future and real chance of having a wonderful, fulfilling life...including the chance to make a difference. Her and Arnav talking, no matter how dire the circumstances was the catalyst for both truly moving on; they just needed closure...

I love the Raizada reunion...good that every has reunited and moved on as Nani ultimately wished. Akash has demons he needs to face and I understand that because frankly while I applauded that he stood up for Khushi at the start he took it too far.

I also like how you ended things with Arnav and Khushi. They're in love, enjoying life after being through so much emotionally, but it's realistic. Will they have kids, won't they? Who knows? Will it be a source of contention? I like to think that whatever they go through from here on out they'll face it head on as a team with give and take and choose to live their happy ever after.

Brilliant story, will be reading Boomerang for sure!

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#627

The epilogue came as a surpirse, having read that you preferred keeping open ends to a story...

It is commendable to see the topic of genital mutilation being broached through this story. I'm glad the issue of having children was also included in this chapter. I had expected Arnav to have changed his stance. You rightfully credited Twiggy for the same; she has been instrumental for being almost as involved in the story as you have.

All's well that ends well isn't it? The story was indeed different. A tale that didn't begin in the usual way, didn't have the Arnav that we are used to seeing, had us rooting for Khushi all through the story and even made us sympathise with Lavanya who essentially was the other woman. The journey was such that we were made to think about each and every character deeply; it beautifully explained the changing dynamics in the relationship between Arnav and Khushi, one that didn't begin in the conventional way, then took its first steps through respect and finally culminated into love.

And lastly, the story was such that it inspired the birth of a new CC. We ranted, chatted, exchanged notes on our outlook on the characters and enjoyed the story together...and we have you to credit for the same.

Thank you for the wonderful story K!😊

And before I forget...happy wedding anniversary!😃

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sushan

@sushan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#628

Beautiful story very well written .I could not stop myself till the last chapter once I started reading.I am reading your Chasing dreams also.both stories are very different but equally wonderful.I love the way of your writing

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#629

Beautiful ending to a beautiful story!!! Loved the characterization of Arnav & Khushi and even Lavanya!! It was prudent for her to let go of Arnav and start her life anew. Though she appeared in only a couple of chapters, she was very matured and a strong girl. In fact, I believe that had she known Arnav had gotten back with his wife, she wouldn't have thrown herself to him! It was sad that she had to loose her true love but it was good that she made peace with it. Mental illness and depression is a serious disease and its high time India needs to acknowledge it and recognize it for professional help.

Loved Arnav's journey from immature and self absorbed person to a loving husband and a caring human being. I'm glad he finally realized his love for Khushi. Although not in the circumstance that Khushi liked. When I initially read it, I felt irritated about Khushi's reaction, but then it made sense in her POV. But Arnav was able to convince her only because his intentions were pure. All iz well in the end...:)

Khushi's characterization was strong and beautiful. She was a true optimistic and tried to find happiness in whatever ways she could. She deserved true love and happiness in life and I'm glad she got it.

I loved the journey to love of Arnav and Khushi from a forced marriage. Each and every update was thoughtful, matured and realistic. Thank you for the beautiful story NB!!

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sanjubanju

@sanjubanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#630

What a beautiful story and what a beautiful ending. I have loved each and every chapter. The storyline is so different and mature. Thanks for giving us this story. Looking forward to Boomerang . Happy Anniversary dear.