Kriya OS: Ijazat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

it was really beautiful mannu...

i so loved it...

the way you depicted kriya's pain n sadness...

it was just superb...

ahmazing OS dear...

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lakshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Wow!!👏👏 That was like amazing!! I seriously have no words to describe this os and my feelings right now.😭😭 It was just so awesome and emotional and touching.It was superb.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

wow its beautiful vry well written loving kriya more nw<3 keep writing more:-)

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Pihu.k11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Maneet.. Ur defo growing as a beautiful writer.. Giv u anythn n u come up wid such amazing stories.. Dis one is no diff !

Alright whn u stated d song "Ijazat" I ws lik.. Ooopss now what song is dis but when I continued reading..
I was lik.. Hell.. Dis one is Ijazat.. Lol.. 😆

Ur Right.. Dis song does touches d deepest chord if ur heart esp whn ur in "Devdas mode" 😳

U portrayed kriya's emotions so flawlessly.. Her pain,Her griefs,D way she misses her friends n Reyaansh,Her yearning for hr love.. Eveythn.. Beautiful :)

We all KR ians wonder what cud hv happnd to kriya.. We never got to c her pov.. Well all tnx to palki..
But all dese updates gives us,Readers,a hint of what she might hv gone thru !

A part of her died whn she left Reyaansh.. She has moved on bt still hav not !

A great piece of work.. Cn we hv d second part to d OS?? Plz.. Lik no reunion as such.. Jus wana read further ! :)