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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys I'm here with another os. This is not some challenged OS. Actually Aroma wanted me to write this. It is based on the song Ijazat by Falak. Aroma and I love this song to the core and I'm sure you guys will love it too. It's a Punjabi song. I hope you guys are able to understand it. Even you can't, there's no problem because its music is so soothing that you'll surely like it, I hope.

This OS is based completely on kriya's pov being narrated. Do tune into the song Ijazat when I request to.

~~~IJazat~~~

It has been five years since kriya left Mumbai and ST.Louis college. Her life had taken a drastic turn. She's still the same as well not. Eventually she was allowed to dance. But then dance brings back the memoirs of Mumbai. How she wished she could just wash 'em off but couldn't. Though she was a famous choreographer, happiness was still away from her. No matter how much she tried to be happy and to an extent she would. But at the end of the day something or the other weakens her. Her heart has literally denied to accept anyone else except him. People say it correct No matter how many times you love but true love happens once. And she has already experienced true love.


It was one of a usual summer nights and kriya sat on the railing of the window in her bedroom. She had plugged on her ear phones and was listening to songs being played. After a song ended, the next track that started to play was Ijazat. This song always brought tears in her eyes because it depicted her story, her condition. She closed her eyes listenting to it.


(A/N: Please play the song in the other tab. Link: Ijazat )



Ve jaan waleya.. enj chadh k na jaavien..
Kithe wade saare.. oh tod nibhavien..
Gallan ishq di kitiyaan.. sang rataan kaddiyaan..
O bhool na jaavien.. menu chaad na jaavien..



She sat there, letting those pearls of tears shed down her eyes. It was true that she was the one who left him. But she really didn't want to. An year back she visited St.Louis secretly as her mother had permitted her and had taken back those promises. But visiting the college was one of the most terrible ideas. None of her friends bothered to even reminisce about her. Not even her dil and dosti. Her mission was actually accomplished. He had moved on. But it pained her so deep. Nevertheless she was happy seeing them happy. She wished she too could be a part of their happiness. She wished she could be present there in his arms. But it's all she could only wish.


Haye... Haye... Haye...



She felt as if the world was being sarcastic at her condition. Destiny can be so cruel you never know.


Mera yaar sajan tu..
Dildaar sajan tu..
Menu kol luka le.. gal seenien la le..
Ghar aaja mahi.. fer na ja mahi..
Tere tarley pawaan.. tenu kinj samjhawan..



Rey was her only love and will always be. She can never give his place to anyone else. She desired to be in his arms. Oh how she wished he would come and rescue her from all this sadness. She wished she could just explain him once that she was never that bad like he thought.


Ik wari aaja.. ghar phera paja..
Koi labh ke leya de.. mere dil da ranjha..
Rab teri khudaai.. main devaan duhaii..
Os bekadre nu.. meri kadar na aayi..



Just for once she wants to meet him, talk to him. She wished someone would bring him to her. No matter what happens, she will continue to pray for him and his happiness even if it meant to hurt herself. People may think she's gone mad, crying for a person who never belonged to you. But that's what love does to you.


Haye... Haye... Haye...



She wished her life too could be so pleasant like the music of this song.


Bahan kangna paa ke.. hathe mehndi laa ke..
Kanni mundraan paa ke.. hun kinnu dakhawan..
Chann eidi charheya.. tu gher na mudeya..
Rahwan tak tak teriyaan.. akhaan rondiyaan meriyaan..
Ve tu samajh na paya.. mann ishq machaya..
Ve main ho gayi jhalli.. rowaan beh ke kalli..



Like other girls even she dreamt of having a content life with her love. Sigh! Not everyone's so fortunate. Many times she got ready specially for him eagerly waiting to earn a compliment from him. But her fate wasn't so favorable to her. All her dreams always got crushed. The one thing that never stopped in these five years was her tears. Every night sje cried for him, yearned and craved for him. But all went in vain. She wanted him to understand her and just wipe away those tear drops.


Ve mann le kehna.. dukh hor nahin sehna..
Dewaan dil nu tasalli.. rowaan beh ke kalli..
Kinj badal gaya tu.. dil khed gaya tu..
Hasse haseyaan de wich.. dil tod gaya tu..



She was tired; tired of these crying and sadness. She wanted to be happy to the extreme extent. She too wanted to have a blissful love life. She wanted to be with him. Only if he would understand her!


Ve jaan waleya.. enj chadh k na jaavien..
Kithe wade saare.. oh tod nibhavien..
Gallan ishq di kitiyaan.. sang rataan kaddiyaan..
O bhool na jaavien.. menu chaad na jaavien..



Every night before sleep all she would say was "please rey, come back to me. I want to be with you." She wanted him to remember her like she does. She wanted to hear those unspoke words from his mouth. She wanted him to make her feel so special and convey his love to her.


Haye... Haye... Haye...



No matter how famous choreographer she is! At the end she always will be his baatcutter.

Je howey ijazat teri karaan ibadat..



Only if life gave her another chance, she would treasure him forever with her.

As the song ended, she plugged out her ear phones. Sighing to herself, she stood. This wasn't something new to her; it was a part of her routine. She lay on her bed and drifted into a deep slumber.



So how's it guys?

Hope you guys liked it. Aroma I hope I haven't let you down. Kaisa tha?

Do tell me whether you guys liked the song or not.

Do hit the like tab and leave your reviews please.

Thanks for reading.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ures
jab b main j song sunti hoo na alays Kriya ko imagine karti hoo
that why tujey bola tha
ans i just loved it
wow i mean u r the best yaar
merey cell pey jab b call ati hey to start Hayeee i mean i love this portion of song haye haye
but u know u made me cry
abhi abhi main ro k ayi
apney os k i ending kar
kya likha hey tuney amazing amazing
fab clapping
or kya bolu
Kriya ki feeling emotion superbly frame kiye hey tuney
then u r right true love first love kabhi nahi bhoolta
i have no word
speechless
luv u
tight hug
aroma
Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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reswa unres aftr class have to go😭
unres,what to say..ye mera one of fav. Sad song along with phir se vahi..always imagine kriyaansh on this n on akhiyaan too..this was just awesum but muje hapy ending ki adat ho gyi hai isliye adhoora lga
Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unres


Wow manu you've left me speachless...

This is just mind blowing...

The song is lovely...

Beautifully written...

🤗

😊

~Anu~
Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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no words... quite emotional just loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

amazing

loved it

the emotions were so well depicted

it as really written well 👏👏

fab job..

amazing

do write more... 😃😃

but after reading this im missing kriya a lot 😭😭

thank you for the pm
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's wonderful 😊
Edited by kriyaansh_07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unres
Wow mannu
The os amazing the way u described the song
I mesmerized that time
Really mindblowing work
Edited by pradeep_maurya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os! I love that song! It is on my most played list! You showed kria's pain beautifully!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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mannu i just loved it
its my fav song
you described kriya's emotions so beautifully
wonderfully written
*hugs*

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