ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 1 - COMPLETED - Page 70

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. 😉
the tom n jerry tale has begun.. 😆
i want khushi to knw the real face of nk.. 😉
thanx fr pm..update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chap 6

Nk is a jerk! Money minded creep! Asr was so right!! Oh gawd! Khushi's gonna hurt big time when she gets to know true colors of Nk!

Loved the way Arnav tried to assure her but as usual egos got in the way!

Chap 7

Man this is fun! Looking forward for it! She's eager to know what he said!

Nk your a jerk again! But she avoided your call am happy!

And at the shopping stores aww poor Asr!

Cheers.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey I loved this story. Sorry yaar college started. So was so busy, just now caught up with the story. And please don't mind me when I say this one is more interesting than 'Between Two Strangers'. It's a compliment of course.


And yea I thought there was some enemies or something like that. But Shashi and Garima stealing Kushi of her childhood was cruel. They should never get her love. Who will be so blind?????? They actually made her stay away from their affection and presence all through her life, destoryed her dreams and aims of attaining high and marrying her love (last one was wrong choice) but what about the other????

I really hate them. Kushi shouldn't forgive them soon. Whatever superstition they have, they must not have robbed their child of her whole life-past, present and future. The future is with Arnav. Ok, and that is best for her, but what if NK was in Arnav's position and Arnav was Kushi's true love? Then? They will be a doing a great wrong by her then.


I really really hate such kind of parents and though I was impressed by Shashi's concern and love for Arnav and Garima's sense of understanding, I HATE them as parents to Kushi.

Payal is one heck of a great character. Missing my Anjali. Akash too is cool.

Kushi, I feel bad for her. Her only fault is she loved the wrong man. The rest, she is the only person who played fair. Arnav and her own family, and NK are just using her for their needs and selfishness. And I'm feeling immense anger.

Waiting for your next update. Thanks for pming me till now. Continue it please. Even if I am late, I will comment once I read them.
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Posted: 12 years ago
updated my cmnt on page 105
thnks for d pm di
have a happy vacation😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor arnav..
i know what he s doing is not right...
but khushi doesn t seriosuly know what hurt she s caused him...
reality is far more hurtful than anything...
she was indeed curious to know the answers...
fabulous update 👏 👏 👏 👏
update the next soon dear😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

That was a fantastic update 😊 Thanks for the PM

Khushi shocked on hearing the news & turning all her attention towards Arnav's interview, fuming at his replies especially when he mentioned her as his childhood friend & at his reply about the way he proposed to her but on the other hand feeling good when she heard him talk about her, worked up when the cable went off rushing to make it right so that she could catch up with the interview surprising her parents who didn't understand the sudden interest in Arnav she showed but happy in some way leaving her to fight with the cable was a very good start...enjoyed today's update a lot ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Gosh! This girl is showing too much of attitude to Mr.Attitude, too much of stubbornness to Mr.Arrogance...poor guy he's admiring her fiery side inwardly though all she was doing was only irritating him

Cute...Payal blushing when she revealed to her best friend about her marriage with Akash & Arnav feeling happy for his friends was a beautiful scene

The scene where Khushi intentionally made Arnav wait for half an hour, Garima warning her, Arnav walking into her room & telling her not to irk him followed by their arguments was awesomely framed

The scene at the shop was amazing...Khushi picking up the cheapest saree, Arnav pointing out to her that NK was a bad choice which triggered her anger to its peak, Arnav telling her that money was the ultimatum followed by Khushi ending the fight by asking him if the reason for him transforming into a heartless man was because he lost everything in his life...Arnav walking out as her question hurt him to the core was well written 👏

Wonder what will happen next...Khushi noticed an unexplainable pain in Arnav's eyes...will she be a little soft towards him anymore or ...????? Love to read more


Thanks Deeps for the note, it clarified many of my doubts. Loved the way u described the shades of each character of the fable 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
Really really nice update.

So that means Nks relevation is in the next update, Great.

Hmmm Arnav is really smart in making Khushi listen to him.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.. akash n payal too gettin married... double celebration :)

as much as i love Arnav n Khushiz nokh-jhoks n take them lightly, sometimes it just hits hearts deepest chords...

beatifully written Deeps.. lukon frwrd fr their moreee tu-tu main main :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi 😊 sorry for not commenting on ur previous update...had exams...n s dis storyline s completely different From ur previous one...got to c a new arnav 😉 money minded nk 😡 n spunky kushi 🥱 hope arshi 'll com together soon... Already waiting to read NXT part!!!!!!! Tc 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just found your story... n read all chapters in one go and loved each one... Its been quite a journey from Arnie to the business tycoon Arnav Singh Raizada...

I know Arnav has been harsh and now he is ready to marry Khushi for the promise his father made and for the property... but what I liked about him is at no point has he tried to hide his intentions... He told Khushi the reason honestly... Life may have made me hard and he may seem heartless but I dont think he can harm anyone intentionally least of all Khushi...

Khushi... At first I thought she was a little immature... But over time she has changed... she has been in a relationship with NK for 8 years so obviously its a little difficult for her to accept that NK may me after her money more than her... but hopefully she's find out NK's true nature soon...

Btw love Aakash and Fatty... they are awesome...😊

cant wait to read more😊

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