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Have read so many stories but nothing brought me to tears except this one.u r truly a brilliant writer.ur portrayal of arnie to asr is just so heart wrenching.it takes me hrs to get tjis story out of my mind nd heart.sometimes I think I shud read it only after this miserable poor teenage boy finds some kind of peace.his sorrow nd anguish is so so real that I cant help but cry for him.his expectations from khushi nd the sudden change after supposed betrayal is just superb.that shows how he had to grow up so soon from a carefree lovable boy to be the asr.love payaash.they r just true friends.nd shashi gupta too is a good human being.looking forward to the point when arshi get together if nt as lovers then perhaps as friends perhaps...though wonder asr will allow her back in his life.waiting for more of this story nd that too superfast.
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