ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 1 - COMPLETED - Page 27

Have read so many stories but nothing brought me to tears except this one.u r truly a brilliant writer.ur portrayal of arnie to asr is just so heart wrenching.it takes me hrs to get tjis story out of my mind nd heart.sometimes I think I shud read it only after this miserable poor teenage boy finds some kind of peace.his sorrow nd anguish is so so real that I cant help but cry for him.his expectations from khushi nd the sudden change after supposed betrayal is just superb.that shows how he had to grow up so soon from a carefree lovable boy to be the asr.love payaash.they r just true friends.nd shashi gupta too is a good human being.looking forward to the point when arshi get together if nt as lovers then perhaps as friends perhaps...though wonder asr will allow her back in his life.waiting for more of this story nd that too superfast.

loved it

feeling bad for arnav.i liked confident asr.

aww its so sweet of u dear for making it easy for us in understanding by placing under line and all...love u :)...first of all i want to praise u ,u r such an awesome writer that i am really impressed 👏...a part from ur strong story line...u have such a strong grip on ur writing that while reading it if its emotions intensity sadness or happy times one can feel it all run in heart the same way u have written it...beautiful writing...

Oh wow
Arnavs hurting badly :(
Feel so bad for him x

Hmmm i want more... Update soon
N love ur writing

amazing updt..loved it👏

Amazing Update...
Poor Arnav what he thought was his slipped from his hands... Even Khushi...
I guess Khushi might realize that she have feelings for Arnav...
Nk have to break up her as She thinks mostly About Arnav...
Precap seems interesting...
Why is she quitting the College???
Will this decision of her affect Arnav??
Update soon

awsum updt

why did she quit college ?? 😲 😲 😲 😲