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Posted: 12 years ago
I really like this "not so in control" Arnav...he is all over the place...loved the conversation with his subconscious! Just admit it, you are jealous at Khushi seducing another man, and now going on a date with another man.

Where do you even come up with the Laxmi and Vishnu scenario?? That was just too funny.

I love how grandma is mentioned in all these chapters, but she hasn't made an appearance yet. She's pulling all the strings behind some magic curtain, it seems like.

Looking forward to Arnav's date with the ex and Khushi's date (why doesn't she think of using her seduction case studies on her own date...maybe she should be having a conversation with her subconscious soon!)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just loved it !!
It was brilliant.
Khushi is a nut -case , Arnav is bang on here.
The parts where he talks to his subconscious were hilarious to the hilt.
I loved your digs at a typical romance where jealously always plays a crucial role in realizing love.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Looking forward to the dates and more fun :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is simply awesome! Cannot wait to read further! Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This just got better and better!!! What a hilarious SS...can't wait to read more!!!! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just came across this SS..and God! RB, you've done an amazing job! Be it thriller, comedy, romance... anything, you're simply a pro at story telling and entertaining people with that art.

Loved it!

So hilarious this is!

I am so in love with this now! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
totally loved it
arnav's talk with his selfconcious was superb
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is way to good...

Just enjoying it thoroughly.

Thx so much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
seriously for good did she ask arnav if she can seduce him! lol who does that! i guess only khushi kumari gupta can ask such question!

it was very interesting to have arnav's subconscious included in this one!

lol looks like arnav froze on the spot when she told him she has a date!

looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update ...the inner jibes at arnav and the whole dram layout are hilarious...continue soon...

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