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You know chaithu what I like most about ur stories, the details which you gave for each character each events even its mere thingy. You give so much details that I feel like im seeing them with my eyes and they are very close to me. Take ananditha you have given character description I can easily see such loving mother And I know you sit and give enough time to develop and think about each charaters.

So here we go arnav, khushi and his mother had realised some thing cooking up between the duo

I liked it let her intervene in positive way

So arnav is worried about disclosing about shyam to anjali, poor boy, he doesn't knew what his sister is up to.

But I like this anjali who is not all crying doll but a modern woman who know how to handle the situation

So looking forward to after noon part of arga trip

Loved the easy flowing convo b/w Anandita n Khushi.. :) especially when dey were talkin abt the methaiz. mouth watering!!!
Haa.. origin of Arnabz name ws interesting. :)

Nyc part

amazing update.. loved it👏

Awsum update love convo b/w khushii n arnav mom

I think Im official in love with Anandita, just because she calls her son Arnab instead of Arnav. So she is perceptive, smart and already knows something is up between these two. These two have families that aren't the fools we saw in the actual show. We were all hoping for some romance in Agra, since that didn't happen and you sprung a surprise in the form of Mommy ji, I hope you will give us a surprise with next update.

Cant wait to read Part B, update soon.

Anandita ji is so warm and loving.Something about her reminds me of Anjali.Arnav's mom is smart too.I liked that she noticed these two closely and took note ki something is definitely there inn dono ke beech😳

It was very sweet update.Esp. The entire convesation betn. Anandita and Khushi was really good.:D

K doesnt want eventful trip ,bt I want ;)

Loved it..wow..they learnt so much abt eachother...loved the bonding between Arnavs mom n khushi ...

wow amazing update😛

His mother has charm n warmth too...the woman is shrewad too...i am liking this journey...