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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
So a trip together !! Interesting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Chaitu, I wanna hug you for this 🤗
The way you are handling such a complex story where every character has many layers to them and are built very strongly is just way too awesome. Im appalled to see the way anjali's character turned out as she projected herself demure and damsel in distress though enigmatic.when she already know that her husband is SMJ, why she is working now against him?
The way you dedicated a chapter each to rudra, amrapali, shyam and now humera shows the strong and intricate narration 👏 and im loving it
My heart went for humera, poor soul was fixed from all ways..I can understand her trying to help khushi about shyam. But what is beyond me why anjali?? I dont understand that khushi still wants substantial proof against shyam, i mean what is she? For the vortex she has created around herself knowingly or unknowingly she truly deserves a respite from all these and what more than a pilgrimage? ?Humera diid smell, that something is wrong with arnav's demeanor during khushi's ankle twist,

So a trip to Agra... looking forward for it as we have something awaiting us there too 😆 truly a LABYRINTH 😊
Edited by cool_zephyr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Nice story. Just read all the chapters
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
read all the parts in one go...loved it..
office kinda background always interest me...a different story...
and now they r going to agra...cant wait...
plz pm me when u update the next part...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Loved it
Thanks for the update
Arnav mum is really cool
Cant wait.for the next update
Edited by meem17 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
loved d updt
loved d convo bwn khushi n arnie mum
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
wow what an update break from usual cat fights between arnav and khushi.. arnav's mother was refreshing change.. she is sweet lady who is proud of her son's achievements.. smart lady have learnt that there is something more between arnav and khushi than office.. loved her.. so khushi found something good about arnav.. loved the convo between khushi and arnav's mother.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
love the easy camaraderie that developed between khushi and anandita, im sure she's gonna play cupid soon enough to bring them closer...once again, great update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Anandita Raizada.
Wow.
She's different from what I thought of her to be.
I loved the easy and fun filled camaraderie that exists between Khushi and her. <3
So real and pure. <3<3<3<3<3
I also loved the whole Bengali talk.
It was really cute to read.

P.S Thank you again. <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

Well done update.

Thanks for the PM.

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