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nsipkknd

@nsipkknd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Thank you.

How do you do that? I want to ask the same question like Meera30 are you sure you dont have books off the shelf in stores...

I would like to come back and write a review for the story...because I am in search for words...

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Thank you for writing this one. It clearly demonstrates the naive person that she was which made it easy for him to play his games. He automatically thinks the worst of her but she kept seeing a silver lining and kept going back. The gifting her the wedding outfit as a tip was a huge insult that finally broke her after he proposed to La (right after he nearly kissed her), gave La the jewelry set that she liked and asked her to plan his wedding. All to see if she Farak. Well her crying and talk of sapnon ki duniya made him realize what a cad he was. I do agree with you he was a jerk for the way he treated her for most part in the show but his turning from the cold, bitter, anger fuelled cruel man to the human who can feel her love was a big part of what the show is about. The stupid writers of the show decimated his character by making him do things below human decency. I just love how you describe his angst so well as the cameras cannot share this with us no matter how good the actors are.

If you have not published anything yet, you should as many of us will be buying it!

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

I loved your take on the scenes. You gave them depth by mirroring Arnav's thoughts and analysed them with great precision. What the makers failed to achieve with images, you described well with words. That is the power and magic of words. Sometimes, images cannot or fail to do justice to portraythe emotions. Though the show had potential, the makers didn't make use of it. What would then have been a great show..

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Raila1014
Thank you for writing this one. It clearly demonstrates the naive person that she was which made it easy for him to play his games. He automatically thinks the worst of her but she kept seeing a silver lining and kept going back. The gifting her the wedding outfit as a tip was a huge insult that finally broke her after he proposed to La (right after he nearly kissed her), gave La the jewelry set that she liked and asked her to plan his wedding. All to see if she Farak. Well her crying and talk of sapnon ki duniya made him realize what a cad he was. I do agree with you he was a jerk for the way he treated her for most part in the show but his turning from the cold, bitter, anger fuelled cruel man to the human who can feel her love was a big part of what the show is about. The stupid writers of the show decimated his character by making him do things below human decency. I just love how you describe his angst so well as the cameras cannot share this with us no matter how good the actors are.

If you have not published anything yet, you should as many of us will be buying it!

Arnav was plain stupid in both the situations in the same way Khushi was silly. They choose to ignore what was obvious and created a living hell for themselves. I don't pity both but yes do feel sad for the viewers who felt cheated by the makers of this serial, the promises made were never kept.

Edited by Kalyaani - 12 years ago

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soophie

@soophie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

i hv only one word for this chapter...Beautiful
all the emotions are so beautifully narrated that i immediately fell in love with this
continue soon

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atulg

@atulg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Your take on both the scenes is really great...I have always preferred reading the book to watching a movie based on the book (I dont mean to undermine the talent of serial/movie world, just stating my preference). These vignettes of yours just reinforces that perspective for me;inspite of the lure and charm of getting to watch Sobti in the soap 😉

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Ah...I must first thank you for combining two scenes...both are equally poignant and the effect that the intertwining has made is just mindblowing!👏

There isn't much I can add as a comment though; Meera has explained it wonderfully.

Needless to say, this one is the best amongst all teh vignettes😊

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nyxx

@nyxx

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Both of these scenes are so poignant in the journey that Arnav and Khushi are bound in...

the scenes depict so much about their values, beliefs, and just who they were as individuals...while one was silly in her ways and lived in her dreamland with her Rajkumar, the other carried a baggage of pain and hurt, and in the initial days acted without thinking and in anger...

the dialogues uttered then are still etched and RB, you have re-instilled them in me...Thank you!

While the 1st scene triggered the "Farak Padta Hain" track...the Shaitaan-Sundri left me quite disappointed, as I had expected a lot more to follow from the makers...

I also don't know if you will be doing a scene like this soon...but Id love to read how you would pen down the suiiicide scene on the terrace...or even when Arnav leaves Khushi to go on his trip, and gets kidnapped, while Khushi awaits for his comeback...

Keep it up!

Edited by nyxx - 12 years ago