Paint it Red - Vignette collection [Completed] - Page 9

Thank you.

How do you do that? I want to ask the same question like Meera30 are you sure you dont have books off the shelf in stores...

I would like to come back and write a review for the story...because I am in search for words...

Thank you for writing this one. It clearly demonstrates the naive person that she was which made it easy for him to play his games. He automatically thinks the worst of her but she kept seeing a silver lining and kept going back. The gifting her the wedding outfit as a tip was a huge insult that finally broke her after he proposed to La (right after he nearly kissed her), gave La the jewelry set that she liked and asked her to plan his wedding. All to see if she Farak. Well her crying and talk of sapnon ki duniya made him realize what a cad he was. I do agree with you he was a jerk for the way he treated her for most part in the show but his turning from the cold, bitter, anger fuelled cruel man to the human who can feel her love was a big part of what the show is about. The stupid writers of the show decimated his character by making him do things below human decency. I just love how you describe his angst so well as the cameras cannot share this with us no matter how good the actors are.

I loved your take on the scenes. You gave them depth by mirroring Arnav's thoughts and analysed them with great precision. What the makers failed to achieve with images, you described well with words. That is the power and magic of words. Sometimes, images cannot or fail to do justice to portraythe emotions. Though the show had potential, the makers didn't make use of it. What would then have been a great show..

Originally posted by: Raila1014

Thank you for writing this one. It clearly demonstrates the naive person that she was which made it easy for him to play his games. He automatically thinks the worst of her but she kept seeing a silver lining and kept going back. The gifting her the wedding outfit as a tip was a huge insult that finally broke her after he proposed to La (right after he nearly kissed her), gave La the jewelry set that she liked and asked her to plan his wedding. All to see if she Farak. Well her crying and talk of sapnon ki duniya made him realize what a cad he was. I do agree with you he was a jerk for the way he treated her for most part in the show but his turning from the cold, bitter, anger fuelled cruel man to the human who can feel her love was a big part of what the show is about. The stupid writers of the show decimated his character by making him do things below human decency. I just love how you describe his angst so well as the cameras cannot share this with us no matter how good the actors are.

If you have not published anything yet, you should as many of us will be buying it!

i hv only one word for this chapter...Beautiful
all the emotions are so beautifully narrated that i immediately fell in love with this
continue soon

Your take on both the scenes is really great...I have always preferred reading the book to watching a movie based on the book (I dont mean to undermine the talent of serial/movie world, just stating my preference). These vignettes of yours just reinforces that perspective for me;inspite of the lure and charm of getting to watch Sobti in the soap 😉

Both of these scenes are so poignant in the journey that Arnav and Khushi are bound in...

This SUNDARI and SHAITAN track was probably the part I hated the most in the entire show..

Great way of combining the two scenes...your words interpreting the scene are just so amazingly written out...I am loving these little vignettes!