*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: IssPKaur
Wiwy...This is getting better and better 😆 😆

My favorite line : " I just want a normal bed, Mister. Can I get one in this abnormal place?". Hahahaha... that was too much fun!

And Mr. Sharma was amazing - was instantly reminded me of that other gem - the fabulous "table for two?" Waiter who nailed those two scenes in the restaurant back in the day ⭐️⭐️

All in all, super-imaginative 👍🏼 Loved!

Looking now for a store where i can be cocooned in lace and fairy lights on a rotating bed,
IssPKaur 😃

Three cheers for Mr. Sharma! He seems to have made many fans including you, Iss!😆

I thought you said your fav line was "Is there a normal bed in this abnormal place, mister?" So how come you are looking for a fairy lit , lacy, rotating bed? 😉 Tellz, tellz! 😉

On a serious note, thankyou so much for thinking story is getting better and better!😳 Awww! 🤗

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi
Awww superb update.

How cutely and adorably they were gazing into each others eyes.

So we can hope that in the next update, we can get some erm erm moment. 😉

Thanks for liking this chapter, Lakshmi( Hope I can call you that!)

Erm, erm moment?😆 Yes I am planning one! But maybe not in next chapter. Next one I intend to make you guys weep😭 Then later, I can heat things up between the two, I mean really heat!☺️ What say?

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

super dupper with SR featured bed.Your bed is getting sexier day by day wiwy.Oh boy salesman is really good one "beautiful yet crazy couple" ...😆 but they are

Really nice one,Love the part they both are laughing...thnx for making him less Kadoos👏

Okay! Okay! Okay! Arshi Guruji liked my update! After your feedback in last chapter I tried to give Khushi some spunk so that she can be less "lattoo" (credit to Sohara😃) over her LG! This is the best I could manage in chapter 4 because whenever I think of LG I feel weak in the knees! Gussa vanishes! And I am like all over him! 😆 In the process he became less khadoos! So!😆

Yep! i made the salesman say what I feel about ASR and Khushi, "beautiful but crazy couple". Thanks for understanding, Arshi! 🤗

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

wiwy,

that was just too too too too good.

myself, abs rofling. and love the sexy humour. you are a natural story teller, riddle maker. can't wait to see what happens when the two stop laughing. i saw you 100 likes post...👏👏 👏 👏 👏

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: indi52
wiwy,

that was just too too too too good.

myself, abs rofling. and love the sexy humour. you are a natural story teller, riddle maker. can't wait to see what happens when the two stop laughing. i saw you 100 likes post...👏👏 👏 👏 👏

Oh! Indi! ❤️ 🤗 🤗 🤗

Sexy humour!!!! Hey, I like that! 😃 Thankyou my Captain!❤️

Natural story teller? Seriously never thought I was a story teller. Leave alone natural. But yes I have rediscovered myself on IF especially on BFTP, my Captain! Dabbled in poetry but never written fiction in the past.You are a major source of my desire to write stylishly, I swear!❤️

Yes, 100 likes! Don't know whether to die or dance. Thankyou for applauding! I will take a bow!❤️

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8Lucky88

@8Lucky88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

I loved the update...sweet and funny

thanks for the PM

continue soon

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bellacoolio

@bellacoolio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

A hillarious update indeed! Poor Khushi...she was so flustered. I had a good laugh with the two!

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: wiwy

Oh! Indi! ❤️ 🤗 🤗 🤗

Sexy humour!!!! Hey, I like that! 😃 Thankyou my Captain!❤️

Natural story teller? Seriously never thought I was a story teller. Leave alone natural. But yes I have rediscovered myself on IF especially on BFTP, my Captain! Dabbled in poetry but never written fiction in the past.You are a major source of my desire to write stylishly, I swear!❤️

Yes, 100 likes! Don't know whether to die or dance. Thankyou for applauding! I will take a bow!❤️

bow is too tame, too mundane... dance, dear one, one thumka here one thumka there... and i shall join you. seriously happy that you found something that was waiting to get out inside of you. nice of you to say old lady had something to do with it... she is smilingly wisely. hyuk.

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Loved it so much wiwy.

It was hilarious.

The sales man is so funny!

Is there any kind of bed there?. Or it comes from your naughty brainwa.

Gosh I was laughing so much when Khushi asked the sales person about the mirror above.

Arnav who was irritated at the beginning actually loved the sales man's tease later.

Hmm so he is falling for her and even can think to buy that SR bed.

The last part I loved most when they both laughed their heart out.

Can't wait for the next update.

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supriya

@supriya.arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Wiwy tht was a lovely update 😃😃

i enjoyed it thoroughly..in the end even i couldn control my laughter 😆

wat a lovely bed...your description of its effects too good 😉

nd Mr.Sharma told is a SR bed 🤣 on Khushi's expression...amazing nd ASR look to her...too good 👏👏

it was really fun chapter 👏