*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: wiwy

You really enjoyed it that much?! Oh! Durgey! I am so happy! Don't know what to say!

❤️ 🤗

Hey Wiwy, forgot to mention. Congrats on your 100 likes. 👏 🤗

So, next chapter is going to be sad? Let me guess. Khushi will meet La, the girlfriend, and then she will feel sad and will wonder why? Hain na? Am I right? 😃

Edited by DurgaS - 12 years ago

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: indi52

bow is too tame, too mundane... dance, dear one, one thumka here one thumka there... and i shall join you. seriously happy that you found something that was waiting to get out inside of you. nice of you to say old lady had something to do with it... she is smilingly wisely. hyuk.

😆Okay wise one! I am dancing! Do join me to tata thoi thoi, tata thoi thoi, tata thoi thoi 😃

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IssK.

@IssK.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: wiwy

Three cheers for Mr. Sharma! He seems to have made many fans including you, Iss!😆

I thought you said your fav line was "Is there a normal bed in this abnormal place, mister?" So how come you are looking for a fairy lit , lacy, rotating bed? 😉 Tellz, tellz! 😉

On a serious note, thankyou so much for thinking story is getting better and better!😳 Awww! 🤗

I am an abnormal to the core, wiwy darling. Only pretending otherwise! And honestly, I have the most fun when the abnormal takes over...in public 😆

As for my fave line, of course it is, it made me laugh that after rabba veying in lace and light with the most mooned over man, she goes ballistic and blurts out the exact opposite of what she has been feeling. Just as he does, with "what crap!" to the rockstar of the moment, Mr. Sharma. But then, love is abnormal. Makes you do weird things...hai ki nahin?

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Throne

@Throne

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

I almost fell out of my chair when the salesman described the FUNCTION OF THE MIRROR!!😆

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: wiwy

😆Okay wise one! I am dancing! Do join me to tata thoi thoi, tata thoi thoi, tata thoi thoi 😃

ok that was when i was nine i think, hands doing the bong "round round" to the horror of my bros. may i invite you to some shoulder shaking with the boy that belongs to the biradri of the world's best shoulder shakers... le jaayenge lle jaayenge... and an off beat thumka at "aji."

better still, a hot rhumba with the buildering man. 😉 😉 what say.

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: sohara
Loved it so much wiwy.
It was hilarious.
The sales man is so funny!
Is there any kind of bed there?. Or it comes from your naughty brainwa.
Gosh I was laughing so much when Khushi asked the sales person about the mirror above.
Arnav who was irritated at the beginning actually loved the sales man's tease later.
Hmm so he is falling for her and even can think to buy that SR bed.
The last part I loved most when they both laughed their heart out.
Can't wait for the next update.

Thanks Sohara for enjoying the update!

Beds like that! Ofcourse they exist.😃 As far as I know, in honeymoon suites in some hotels and with ceiling as well as side mirrors! You can try those out on your honeymoon with your LG!😉 I will help you choose!😆

The only naughty thing I did was turned it into a SR special bed😉

Bed with laces and tiniest of fairy lights I have slept in myself in 2007 in a hotel in...😛will PM the location to you. okay!😆

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IssK.

@IssK.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: indi52

ok that was when i was nine i think, hands doing the bong "round round" to the horror of my bros. may i invite you to some shoulder shaking with the boy that belongs to the biradri of the world's best shoulder shakers... le jaayenge lle jaayenge... and an off beat thumka at "aji."

better still, a hot rhumba with the buildering man. 😉 😉 what say.

🤣

Have you guys seen this wonder? I have only seen it a mill times.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3n_69MbLRpA&feature=c4-overview&list=UUT0t9Gqj6RzF3z_VvOaHPNg

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: supriya.arshi
Wiwy tht was a lovely update 😃😃

i enjoyed it thoroughly..in the end even i couldn control my laughter 😆

wat a lovely bed...your description of its effects too good 😉

nd Mr.Sharma told is a SR bed 🤣 on Khushi's expression...amazing nd ASR look to her...too good 👏👏

it was really fun chapter 👏

Thanks Supi for enjoying so thoroughly! 🤗

I remember my sister used to get very hyper during exams! I felt so bad for her ,so danced in front of her and made funny faces! How irritated she used to get with me! 😆

Keep smiling always, Supi! And have lots of fun! ❤️

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Hey Wiwy, forgot to mention. Congrats on your 100 likes. 👏 🤗

So, next chapter is going to be sad? Let me guess. Khushi will meet La, the girlfriend, and then she will feel sad and will wonder why? Hain na? Am I right? 😃

Thanks Durgey! 😳

The La angle! But ofcourse! How can you be wrong Captain 2?!!!😉

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: IssPKaur

I am an abnormal to the core, wiwy darling. Only pretending otherwise! And honestly, I have the most fun when the abnormal takes over...in public 😆

As for my fave line, of course it is, it made me laugh that after rabba veying in lace and light with the most mooned over man, she goes ballistic and blurts out the exact opposite of what she has been feeling. Just as he does, with "what crap!" to the rockstar of the moment, Mr. Sharma. But then, love is abnormal. Makes you do weird things...hai ki nahin?

Ooo! Love the abnormal, Iss! 🤗

You are a love guru! hai ki nahin? ❤️