*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: Throne
I almost fell out of my chair when the salesman described the FUNCTION OF THE MIRROR!!😆

Awww! Hope you dint hurt yourself!😆

thanks for liking and commenting!🤗

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jdd1959

@jdd1959

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#282

LOVELYYY...u have a very good sense of humour. The dialouges u gave 2 Khushi, Arnav & Mr.Sharma r very funny & laughable; one couldn't stop laughing while reading them. I have read so many stories on d forum till now but i never laugh these much ; reading a story. I think u r one hell of a big HUMORIST .UR last 2 parts were Ausum.

KEEP WRITTING THIS WAY & MAKE US LAUGH ALL D WAY. LOVE & HUGS .

THANKS 4 D PM.

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: IssPKaur

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Have you guys seen this wonder? I have only seen it a mill times.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3n_69MbLRpA&feature=c4-overview&list=UUT0t9Gqj6RzF3z_VvOaHPNg

Yay! Iss! I too love this vm by zoha!

Uff! Would love to dance with him! And Indi ! And you too! Okay! Mmm

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IssK.

@IssK.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: wiwy

Ooo! Love the abnormal, Iss! 🤗
You are a love guru! hai ki nahin? ❤️

Hahaha. Nahin yaar. Wish it were true!!!!

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: jdd1959
LOVELYYY...u have a very good sense of humour. The dialouges u gave 2 Khushi, Arnav & Mr.Sharma r very funny & laughable; one couldn't stop laughing while reading them. I have read so many stories on d forum till now but i never laugh these much ; reading a story. I think u r one hell of a big HUMORIST .UR last 2 parts were Ausum.
KEEP WRITTING THIS WAY & MAKE US LAUGH ALL D WAY. LOVE & HUGS .
THANKS 4 D PM.

Hey! Thanks yaar for laughing through the update!😃

But I want to try my luck with tears, jealousy, romance, consummation 😆 too, ofcourse with an underlying sense of humour that is so much me!

What say? Are you with me?😃 Or would you prefer I not PM you my next update 😭

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: A...
Gr8 👏 👏 ⭐️

Thanks!😃

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BarunDiwani

@BarunDiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: wiwy

Yay! Iss! I too love this vm by zoha!
Uff! Would love to dance with him! And Indi ! And you too! Okay! Mmm

Ok crashing this tumka party, doing the classic Barun shoulder dance move (during holi). Seriously Wiwy, meri sauten so happy for you and i agree you are a natural, with the dialogue with simplicity you set our imaginations running, i can picture all of this happening. loved the update! esp the part where where he cracks up and she follows. looking fwd to more darling!!

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: BarunDiwani

Ok crashing this tumka party, doing the classic Barun shoulder dance move (during holi). Seriously Wiwy, meri sauten so happy for you and i agree you are a natural, with the dialogue with simplicity you set our imaginations running, i can picture all of this happening. loved the update! esp the part where where he cracks up and she follows. looking fwd to more darling!!

Bhelcums, Bhelcums to the thumka party, meri sauten!🥳

No Barun party is complete without you, BD!

Shoulder moves! Try kari ka padi!😃

Thanks for liking story! 🤗

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: KittenRose
it was a wonderful update, the sudden motion of the bed and I loved the "function" of the mirror ha ha, khushi's anger and demand for "normal" bed. Poor sharmaji, first got such a customer. Loved it when ASR asked him "we did?, what crap?" It was an absolute enjoyment reading your update dear. Keep the good work up.👍🏼

Thankyou so much KR for enjoying and encouraging my work!!

🤗 ❤️

Edited by wiwy - 12 years ago

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jdd1959

@jdd1959

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: wiwy

Hey! Thanks yaar for laughing through the update!😃
But I want to try my luck with tears, jealousy, romance, consummation 😆 too, ofcourse with an underlying sense of humour that is so much me!
What say? Are you with me?😃 Or would you prefer I not PM you my next update 😭

Don't u dare 2 stop ur PMS...I m with u in anything & everything. whenever i will see a story along with WIWY'S name as a writer, i will definitely go 4 it; i have tasted ur humourous side now i want 2 taste ur other forte. BEST OF LUCK! THANKS 4 D PM & SORRY 4 LATE REPLY...